Talk:Duncan Robinson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 18:22, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

I'll start this review ASAP. Just before we begin, to sort out confusion, I will have a general review then an in depth prose and source review. In the general review, I'll use the "GA tools" box. Cheers! MrWooHoo (talk) 18:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Overall, just a couple of prose conformity issues and then I'll pass.

General Review

 * First off, I'll look at the "GA tools" box. No problems except for it showing up with no images which isn't an issue for GA (at least not really).

Prose Review
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 * "He was the 2014 Division III Rookie of the Year and a Division III All-American according to D3Hoops.com."
 * Remove D3Hoops.com as I think it's irrelevant.
 * ✅Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:07, 16 May 2016 (UTC)


 * "In his early years, he just shot for hours, attempting to make 1600 shots per week."
 * He just shot for hours sounds kinda odd, maybe remove "just"?
 * ✅O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:09, 16 May 2016 (UTC)


 * " Crotty had been a two-time All-American at Williams College,[8][9] having served as point guard for the 2003 NCAA Division III Tournament champions (and 2004 Tournament runners up)"
 * Unlink 2003 and 2004 Tournament as they aren't articles (yet).
 * ❌ I am not sure this is necessary. I think we expect these articles in the future.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:37, 16 May 2016 (UTC)


 * E.g., while BigTen.org only requires a minimum of 1.0 made per game,[26] NCAA.org requires a minimum of 2.5 made per game."
 * Make the E lower case.
 * ❌This is normal sentence case, I believe, with the first letter of a sentence being capitalized.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:27, 16 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Throughout the article, make the numbers into words. See WP MOS.
 * ✅ done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:21, 16 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Also, be sure to keep the "introductory comma" uniform throughout the article.
 * "On January 12 with leading scorer Caris LeVert sidelined, Michigan defeated (#3/#3)[31] Maryland 70–67 as Robinson contributed 17 points on 5–9 three-point shooting. On January 23, Michigan defeated Nebraska 81–68"
 * ✅Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:36, 16 May 2016 (UTC)

Passing now. Apologies for the delay. MrWooHoo (talk) 00:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Source Review

 * No problems with sources, ie no dead links. Good job! MrWooHoo (talk) 18:51, 14 May 2016 (UTC)