Talk:Dunster Working Watermill/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Maile66 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 16 April 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citations to reliable sources, where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * ✔️ Nominator Rodw has been the predominant editor, with minor edits by others.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * ✔️ Images are from the Geograph website and licensed for reuse on Creative Commons.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * ✔️ Nominator Rodw has been the predominant editor, with minor edits by others.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * ✔️ Images are from the Geograph website and licensed for reuse on Creative Commons.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

, I have two questions. Please see below. — Maile (talk) 21:47, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * "The stables and waggon house were converted into a cafe." needs re-wording. It's worded exactly as PG 71 of its PDF source.
 * "There is a doorway on the first floor to allow the corn to be lifted up to the top of the building" tied to Source 13.  I see in that source where it mentions the doorway. I don't see where it mentions corn, except earlier in the paragraph.  Am I missing something in the way that reads?
 * Thanks for your comments. I have reworded those two sentences - is that any better?&mdash; Rod talk 06:57, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
 * ✔️ Everything looks good now. I am happy to pass this nomination. — Maile  (talk) 12:18, 17 April 2015 (UTC)