Talk:Dustin Satloff

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A nice little article, I think. I have cleaned it up a little in a more Wikipedia style. The article is factual, sticking closely to sources, so I have removed the tag. There was an over-emphasis on appearing in the New York Times, in my opinion, so I have toned that down. Dustin's notability rests on being a young entrepreneur; appearing in the NYT confirms notability. That he has been written about in the NYT can be inferred from the references anyway.

Wikipedia discourages subjects or people close to them from editing articles about the subject (apart from typos, spelling and so on) and I suggest that the creator refrains from further editing the article and instead place comments here for neutral editors to pick up.

Good luck with the business! ;-) --Malcolmxl5 08:19, 16 November 2007 (UTC)