Talk:Dustin Wolf/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

I will review this shortly. Please note that while I am ranked 10th in edits to this article, they were two minor edits in 2021. Therefore, I am still eligible/allowed to review this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hey Hickory, it's been about a week since the last update, just making sure you didn't have any holdups with any previously mentioned fixes before we can continue the review.
 * Cheers, IceBergYYC (talk) 18:09, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * Per WP:LEAD, citations aren't common in leads except for controversial/disputed info. I think the following are okay to keep citations but I don't think the rest are really debatable/controversial: he is considered significantly undersized for a goaltender and is currently considered one of the top NHL goaltending prospects and The Hockey Writers ranking him as the number one prospect. ✅

Early life

 * I find the wording of the first sentence a bit awkward. Could it possibly be re-worded to: Wolf was born on April 16, 2001, in Gilroy, California, as the only child to parents Mike and Michelle Wolf.✅
 * Also, I recommend moving the Elite Prospects reference to the comma after California as that is the only thing that reference verifies. The second reference could stay at the end ✅
 * Do we have any information about his time with the Los Angeles Junior Kings? I know 104th overall isn't particularly impressive but he must've caught the eye of some scouts to even be drafted.✅
 * I recommend archiving all of these links in case something happens (see Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey/Archive82 if you want to see what happens when links aren't archived). You can archive these links easily here ✅ (Thanks for the tool link, appreciated, I ran into this issue with all the Major-Junior league links while researching this and Mitch Love.)

Playing career

 * ...in the Conference Semi-finals of the 2018 WHL playoffs, Carter Hart.... You can remove Carter since you already mentioned his first name earlier. ✅
 * I think you can merge the 2019 playoffs with the first paragraph. I totally get it if you don't want to but to me it makes the page seem too sparse and like there's not a lot of info. By merged I just mean added to the end, not removing info.✅
 * You can also do the same thing with the paragraph about the 2019–20 season and Del Wilson Trophy ✅
 * The information you added to his contract paragraph is really interesting but I think it can also be merged with the one below it.❌ If you're adamant I can change it, but as it's more talking about the offseason, rather than the 2019-20 season, I'd rather keep it seperate.
 * posting the highest save percentage (SV%) and goals against average (GAA). I recommend moving the abbreviations to During his WHL bantam-draft year, Wolf posted a 2.99 goals against average (GAA) and .905 save percentage through seven games with the Junior Kings' bantam AAA team since this is the first mention ✅
 * Seeing as you only have two sentences about the 2019–20 season, I feel like you could add more to it. Maybe include "goalie of the month" ✅ (I may add some more here in a little bit, just doing a bit more research.)
 * I absolutely love how you got the jumping photo! I'm not a photographer (clearly) but I knew that photo would be good here.
 * Wolf began the 2020–21 season with the Stockton Heat, making his professional debut on February 21, 2021, a 7–1 loss to the Toronto Marlies. But the season started on February 5. Why did it take that long? ❌ that was the Heat's first game of the season. COVID schedule and whatnot
 * Wolf had a standout rookie season - we don't see anything else about this except for his end of season stats. Is there anything else interesting? ✅
 * Do we have anything for the current season? I know it's early so it's okay if you don't but how did he do at camp? Why was he sent back? ✅ish, too early to put too much for this season.

International play

 * Please remove the abbreviation for GAA since you've mentioned it above ✅

Pass

 * Thanks for your patience . I am passing this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:01, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much, always appreciate the help in making this article as good as possible. Cheers, IceBergYYC (talk) 03:07, 7 November 2023 (UTC)