Talk:Dwarf dog-faced bat/GA1

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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

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 * Do you know why specifically it was named after Temminck?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I can't read Danish, but I don't think Lund said. Enwebb (talk) 14:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "though at least one author considers it monotypic with no subspecies" it seems you're only talking about Eger, so you just say Eger considers it monotypic. Also, who's Eger?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Judith Eger, mammalogist and the person who wrote that part of Mammals of South America. Revised phrasing. Enwebb (talk) 14:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "this is particularly noticeable in skull measurements" do you have the skull measurements showing this?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Adding more information from the source to say why the authors noted skull dimorphism. Enwebb (talk) 14:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * define calcars  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Done. Enwebb (talk) 14:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "groups of up to three individuals" this implies a max of 3  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 20:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Rephrased to better match language of the source. 3 or fewer is typical, but larger numbers have been found ("M. temminckii usually lives in small groups of up to three individuals (Vizotto and Taddei 1976; Barquez et al. 1999; Siles 2007). Groups of 10–15 individuals roosting below the bark of white saman trees"). Enwebb (talk) 14:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Where do the 3 subspecies live?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 14:45, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Added. Enwebb (talk) 15:54, 3 July 2020 (UTC)