Talk:Dwayne Cooper/GA2

GA Review
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Nominator: 16:55, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 19:58, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one! PCN02WPS ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 19:58, 18 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:34, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Lead
 * "Raised in Florence, South Carolina, Cooper" → I know it's linked really early in the body, but consider linking to Florence's page here
 * Agree. ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

Early life and education
 * Since this isn't an official guideline but rather just an essay I happen to agree with, feel free to ignore this, but I prefer "was student government president" to "served as student body president" (the essay is at WP:SERVED)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * "initially planning to major in journalism but opting for theatre" → sounds a touch like there's a word missing, maybe "but ultimately opting" or "but opting for theatre instead ", something like that
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

Career
 * "film Spoiler Alert. (c. 2022)." → double full stop (remove the one after "Alert") and I don't believe the "circa" is needed since the film did come out in 2022
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * "swing in the 2023 revival of Sweeney Todd" → Sweeney Todd links to a character, not the play; if there's not an appropriate link I would recommend removing it
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

Personal life
 * "New York City, as of 2011" → remove comma
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

That's all from me. PCN02WPS ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 15:56, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing! Please let me know if any concerns remain. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:03, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Spotchecks all look solid so we are good to go here, nice work. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 16:12, 19 April 2024 (UTC)