Talk:E. S. Raja Gopal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 13:06, 26 January 2018 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:06, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * This link gives an error.
 * ✅ Removed the link and replaced with a live one.--jojo@nthony (talk) 14:16, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Suggest adding a little more biographical detail to the lead -- where he was born, where he got his degrees.
 * ✅ --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:16, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * As with Nuggehalli Raghuveer Moudgal I don't think you need the cite and note in the lead.
 * ✅ --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:16, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * during from 1961: something wrong here.
 * ✅ --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:23, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * What does MSIL stand for?
 * MSIL stands for Mysore Sales International Limited, a Government of Karnataka undertaking, which has provided the endowment for that position. Please see this link --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:21, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * I'd use a more common word than superannuation; I know what it means in general but I don't think it's in wide use (except perhaps in India, if this is standard phrasing) in English-speaking countries when talking about people.
 * ✅ Superannuation is a common word in India with regard to Government service but I get your point. I have replaced the word. --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * How about redlinking rectilinear diameter law? There doesn't seem to be a suitable existing target for it.
 * ✅ I have used the correct name, Law of the Rectilinear Diameter. --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:30, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Percolation threshold in covalently bonded chalcogenide glasses was another of his notable observations: this doesn't quite make sense; you can't observe a concept. You can make observations relating to it, or you can be the one to come up with the concept.
 * ✅ Reworded the sentence. --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:37, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * His work has drawn citations from other authors: everyone gets cited; just pointing out that he has been cited is not notable. If you can say widely cited, with a source (such as the ResearchGate link in the article on Narinder Kumar Mehra) then that might be worth saying.
 * ✅ Couldn't find his citation index, he does not feature in new age repositories like ResearchGate and Google Scholar. So, removed the claim and moved the references to external links. --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:50, 26 January 2018 (UTC)


 * ASI would honor him again with the 1993–94 with Dr. S Bhagavantam Award: looks like some editing debris here.
 * ✅ --jojo@nthony (talk) 14:53, 26 January 2018 (UTC)

These are all minor points and I will pass GA once they're addressed. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:24, 26 January 2018 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and pass this; I would suggest at least redlinking MSIL to Mysore Sales International Limited if there's no better target, or you might consider an explanatory footnote, but I won't hold up GA for that. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks mate --jojo@nthony (talk) 05:30, 28 January 2018 (UTC)