Talk:Each Time You Break My Heart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:14, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * for his self-titled debut studio album (1987) → for his eponymous debut studio album (1987).
 * commercial. He later decided to delve into music business and signed with Sire → commercial, later deciding to delve into the music business, and signed a record deal with Sire.
 * Link "lead single"
 * set to be included in Madonna's → change "in" with "on"
 * but it did not make the final track list. → Remove "it"
 * "Each Time You Break My Heart" was released in 7" and 12" maxi formats. → This should be moved to the very beginning of the lead (on 2 November 1986 in 7" and 12" maxi formats.
 * A promotional video for the song was released directed by → A promotional video to accomany "Each Time You Break My Heart" was directed by
 * reaching the top-ten → reaching the top ten
 * United Kingdom, receiving certification from two of those markets. It was also a dance-hit in the United States. → United Kingdom. While attaining Silver certifications in France and the United Kingdom, the track was also a dance hit in the United States.

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and recording

 * Unlink Nick Kamen
 * There isn't an article for "Sunspel", so you need to unlink it
 * had immediate impact with Levi's sales → comma before "with"
 * Link "Sex symbol" to its respective article
 * and its sales was also boosted → and its sales were also boosted
 * self-titled → eponymous
 * was the lead single from the album → was selected as the lead single from the record
 * But since she was → However, since she was
 * also contains background vocals by Madonna → refer to her as "the singer" here for alternation
 * The Latin Rascals did → "...handled"

Release and reception

 * Robert Erdman took the cover artwork photograph of the 7" single, showing Kamen smiling, while Bob Merlis took the picture listed in the back cover, which is a black-and-white image of Madonna and Kamen in a recording studio. → What do you mean by "took" and who are those two people?
 * was released directed by → no "released" needed
 * After four weeks the song → comma after "weeks"
 * the top-100 → the top 100
 * In France the song attained → In France, "Each Time You Break My Heart" attained
 * Across Europe the song → comma after "Europe"
 * top-ten → top ten

Track listings

 * Flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

 * Flawless ;)

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Certifications

 * Flawless ;)

Release history

 * The article need a "Release history" section; take this as an example.

Copy-violation

 * 6.5% is super!

Outcome

 * Nice job with the article. I put it for 7 days. Good luck editing and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:27, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
 * again done. Except the release history section. I couldn't find the exact dates for the other nations except UK. Hence hardly mattered to add just one entry. — I B  [ Poke  ] 03:22, 15 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:58, 15 October 2017 (UTC)