Talk:Early childhood development

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UCSF Wikipedia Inquiry assignment Workplan for "Early Childhood Development" article Why this one? Include WP rating scale? How fit with your interests. Other details as desired

It peaked our interest the most out of the selected articles. You WP editing team (up to 3)

Rodrigo Gutierrez, Juliana Smith Initial Analysis of the article

Article had no content; Page contained only a title Overall organization will be structured around the chronological age of a child during development including:

gross motor, fine motor, social, and cognitive/language precocious/delayed development normal-range physical parameters (height, weight, head circumference) best practices (reducing conflict, not disturbing focus, etc.) link to ACEs, breastfeeding What will you add?

Definition of early childhood, Stages of development What will you remove?

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What will you augment?

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What will you decrease coverage of?

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Roles in the project. List members and planned roles.

Rodrigo Gutierrez, Juliana Smith

Both team members will research, write, oversee, and insert images (as needed) for different sections of the article. Each team member will then review the sections of the other. Team coordination plan:

Regular communication via google docs, text messages. WIP presenter

Rodrigo Gutierrez, Juliana Smith Rgutierrez4 (talk) 16:51, 30 August 2021 (UTC) Julijewelz (talk) 16:52, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 August 2021 and 21 September 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Julijewelz, Rgutierrez4.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:22, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Great start! I am really excited to see how this page develops once more info is included. I only have a couple of pieces of feedback for you both!

1) In the sentence "In addition, different endocrine factors or hormones like growth hormone (GH), insulin-like growth factors (IGF), thyroid hormones, glucocorticoids, and reproductive hormones contribute to normal growth", I don't think you need to have the abbreviations included. The hormones aren't listed elsewhere and thinking about the audience, I don't think it is needed. 2) Is sentence 1 the same source as sentence 2? 3) Very minor, but maybe include a photo of a baby on the page! You have the charts, but I think a photo of a baby will draw a reader in more 4) Lastly, try to link more to existing pages! It'll be a lot less work for you all since you had to start from scratch.

Other than that, I think the page is really coming together! There are a lot of childhood development departments at colleges so maybe they have some other topics that you can include as well!