Talk:Eastern Air Lines Flight 512/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 06:59, 24 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Be consistent with Eastern Air Lines versus Eastern Airlines (the latter is used in the description of the airplane)
 * Link Douglas DC-7B in the description of the airplane
 * The lead contains some details I'm not seeing in the body - the mentions of sand and the distance of 200 yards
 * ". One of the plane's wings struck the ground" - not seeing where this is mentioned in the body
 * "Emergency equipment responded, but rescuers were delayed by the thick fog and the soft terrain" - recommend "Emergency crews ...", to avoid anthropomorphizing the equipment
 * ", the pilots descended to as low as 25 feet above the ground" - provide a conversion to meters here
 * Image licensing is fine
 * sources are all reliable and formatted well enough

Placing on hold; this one's in pretty good shape and shouldn't take too much work to bring up to GA status. Hog Farm Talk 00:15, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the look.  I've addressed the issues in this list as well.  Let me know if you see anything else.  RecycledPixels (talk) 04:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)