Talk:Eaux Claires

Removed the advert tag. As the person who's written most of the content, who has no direct affiliation with the festival, I'm pretty sure it was written in a factual manner with a lot of sourcing. Please point out what you think is inappropriate. There's a bit of flowery language, sure, but saying it needs to be rewritten by a non-'fan' is a pipe dream - who on earth is going to write a long-winded article about a random festival unless they're a 'fan'? Would it be best to look like a lot of festival pages which are simply a factual list of every band who played with zero context as to the festival itself? Wellado (talk) 04:04, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

The entire issue with this page is that it's full of flowery language and is "a long-winded article about a random festival". This page needs to be trimmed down. Yes, to answer your question, it would be much stronger if it was focused on facts. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Minnesotasteve (talk • contribs) 18:26, 27 August 2019 (UTC)