Talk:Ecgric of East Anglia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemurbaby (talk) 11:29, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Please do expand the lead slightly (two full paragraphs would be an appropriate length).
 * Done. --Hel-hama (talk) 19:36, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * "The form of the name Sigeberht supports" - unclear. Why?
 * Hopefully this is clearer - I've made a few changes. --Hel-hama (talk) 20:08, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * "After 633 the Northumbrian situation was stabilised under Oswald of Northumbria, and East Anglia shared with Northumbria the benefits of the Irish missions of Fursey and Aidan." Please elaborate.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * For in-text citations, the format is more typically like this:
 * Lastname (year), p. X
 * I wish to retain the style I have used already, as eminent Wikipedeans such as Ealdgyth use a very similar style to the one I have used in the article and I have modelled my editing on them up to now. Happy to change if you insist! --Hel-hama (talk) 20:59, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. :) No need to change it. Lemurbaby (talk) 22:55, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
 * for multi-page ranges in in-text citations, instead use n-dashes: Lastname (year), pp. X–XX
 * fixed. --Hel-hama (talk) 20:59, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * For all number ranges (pages or years etc) use n-dashes: X–XX
 * fixed. --Hel-hama (talk) 20:52, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * Please replace "Citations needed" tags with citations.
 * Done, relevant sentence was altered so as to fit in with the citation used, but was still about the cooperation between the 2 Churches. --Hel-hama (talk) 17:59, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * "East Anglia lapsed into paganism" - this is not entirely neutral. How about "reverted"?
 * Fixed. --Hel-hama (talk) 17:22, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: {{GAList/checkyes
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments
Excellent work on an underrepresented area of Wikipedia. Thank you for contributing your time and energies! Just a few minor changes above and this will be ready to be awarded GA. Lemurbaby (talk) 12:02, 23 July 2011 (UTC)