Talk:Ecstatic dance/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 20:01, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Opening review again :) Kingsif (talk) 20:01, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Notes expanding on other page:


 * Lead now improved to GA standard
 * Thanks.


 * Ecstasy section now suitable
 * Thanks.


 * Made some tweaks to better introduce mythology and make clear it's not a recording of true events that we know of; removed info that doesn't have direct relevance
 * Noted.


 * needs attention "Syrian goddess's priests'" - I'm just a little uncertain with the plurals here, if you'd explain?
 * Reworded.


 * Good use of map and table layout; the gallery may have one or two too many images but not a big issue
 * Noted.


 * needs work Tantra sentence could still be incorporated into section better
 * Reworked.


 * Cut out some remaining promotional 5Rhythms material
 * Noted.


 * I've restructured the Modern section
 * Noted.


 * Rest looks good
 * Noted.


 * Parts with bold note to be looked at, otherwise at GA standard
 * better Kingsif (talk) 23:31, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
 * All done now.
 * Symbol support vote.svg Great! Thanks for working on it so well! Kingsif (talk) 14:22, 30 September 2019 (UTC)