Talk:Ed Drew

Excessively long pull quotes
Per WP:LONGQUOTE,

"While quotations are an indispensable part of Wikipedia, try not to overuse them. Long quotations crowd the actual article and remove attention from other information. Many direct quotations can be minimized in length by providing an appropriate context in the surrounding text. A summary or paraphrase of a quotation is often better where the original wording could be improved. Consider minimizing the length of a quotation by paraphrasing, by working smaller portions of quotation into the article text, or both."

"...using too many quotes is incompatible with the encyclopedic writing style."

— btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 00:28, 20 October 2014 (UTC)