Talk:Ed Murphy (activist)

Wikified
I wikified this article as best I could. It was seriously violative of WP:BLP in various aspects, including neutrality, self-promotion, etc. Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk) 21:24, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

hello Rms125a@hotmail.com, i am the author of this article. Can someone please explain to me what is the issue in non-wiki terms? I have written this article about someone who is well deserving of documentation and if I must remove certain aspects of the article I will do so, but need to know what is the questionable areas. 66.65.187.211 (talk) 03:57, 22 March 2011 (UTC)victoriakereszi


 * There were various issues requiring immediate redress. I have responded to your question on your talk page, Ms. Kereszi. Yours, Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk) 12:14, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

Neutrality tag
There's a tag on the article regarding neutrality. I must say I can't see any issues on a quick skim through. Can whoever left the tag please explain (this is something that should be done as a matter of course whenever a tag is added to any article). I'll come back in a week or so and remove the tag if no discussion is started by then. 122.148.229.44 (talk) 04:37, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

How about the whole tone of the article? For example "For more than 40 years Murphy has articulated the hopes, challenges, mistakes, missed opportunities and options Americans face interacting in a global economy." That's hardly neutral. --ThirdSide (talk) 14:36, 10 January 2014 (UTC)