Talk:Edge of the Ocean/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 18:35, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm User:MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article in a short time.

Lead
✅ ✅
 * Link → music critics
 * The single was subsequently considered Ivy's signature song, due to heavy promotion → this is not said in the article, add it and source.

Background
✅ fixed per date of interview; good catch! ✅ ✅ ✅ re-worded ✅ re-worded
 * later interview → When?
 * ...the idea of incorporating new genres into their music; → full stop after music, then capital letter.
 * stated that → doesn't need "that".
 * "the first songs [we] recorded were jangly and simple and straight-ahead. We started gravitating toward the groovier, slightly more melancholy stuff. It works well with Dominique's voice" → use your own words in some of this quote.
 * "Along with the exploration came "stronger" songs" → sounds terrible.

Composition and release
✅ ❌. The source is now reliable but there is no, month or day of the release. Still only year.
 * Musically, "Edge of the Ocean" is an indie pop and trip hop song; → full stop and sources.
 * "The single was not released elsewhere until May 27, 2002, when it was released as a CD single in the United Kingdom" → in spite of being a unreliable source, the date only has 2001.

Critical reception
✅ Hey thanks!
 * Flawless.

Music video and promotion
✅ YT video is the only source regarding the video out there (that I can find, and trust me, I've looked) ✅ moved
 * The video begins with Durand casually walking around in California near the ocean; several shots of nearby boats, cliffs and landscape are interwoven as Durand mouths the song's lyrics. Chase and Schlesinger also appear in the video. → source.
 * The track was later joked about, with a reviewer noting that "chances are you've heard it and didn't even know it". → not sure if this is the best section for this piece of information.

Track listings and formats
✅
 * See on References section, below.

Credits and personnel
✅
 * Link mixing, mastering and such only once in this section, in other words, most of them are not linked and need to be once.

Charts
✅
 * Use → Template:Single chart

Release history
✅
 * See below

Overall GA review
Some good and solid info, needs some work here and there. Otherwise is quite good, I'll put it on hold for a week. If you need more time, just let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:08, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I have finished making changes. Thanks as always! Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I will see the changes, once I have concluded checking them. I will let you know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:42, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I totally forgot to ping you, I have re-evaluated you fixes and it's almost a pass. 2 more fixes to do. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:31, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I think it's all caught up now. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 21:40, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * . No need to remove the sentence just the release date. Leave the year. Still have to remove the discogs references. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:43, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. Carbrera (talk) 21:45, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * passing now. Congrats with so little information you did an outstanding job. Always a pleasure reviewing your articles. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:48, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the nice comments. The feeling is mutual. Carbrera (talk) 22:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)