Talk:Ediel López Falcón/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — ♠Vami _IV†♠  20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Please see my responses below. Cheers, MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 23:09, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * sought for safe haven Axe "for".


 * The second paragraph of "Arrest and trial" should be condensed to the brass tacks.
 * I've trimmed down several parts from this paragraph. Let me know what you think.


 * How/when was López Falcón finally identified?
 * Newspaper achives do not indicate when he was identified.


 * were the first to announce of López Falcón's conviction Delete "of".