Talk:Edison (poem)

Clarify
The sentence beginning "It is probably influence of Guillaume Apollinaire's work..." is a little awkward, enough so that I wasn't sure how to correct it. It could mean "It was probably an influence on Guillaume Apollinaire's work..." but it seems most likely to me that you intended "It was probably influenced by Guillaume Apollinaire's work..." Please update the article to whichever is correct. Thanks. Phil wink (talk) 20:20, 22 August 2016 (UTC)