Talk:Edna Golandsky

Initial
This rewritten biography is not copied, and is not promoting anything. Please send me a message or delete this tag
 * Your claim does not seem to match the text as I read it. The article appears to promote the website, does nothing to ameliorate that emphasis by using any independent sources and goes on to directly promote the DVD set training course, presumably for sale on the aforesaid website. Fæ (talk) 18:35, 11 October 2010 (UTC)

I have deleted all sales info and linked all pages to ones that already exist. I hope this is according to the correct standards. JMcCowell (talk) 20:34, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks a lot less like an advert, thanks. Removed the speedy but improvement notices will continue to be appropriate until independent reliable sources show the significant impact needed. Fæ (talk) 21:44, 11 October 2010 (UTC)

I added all sources etc. Please let me know if anything else needs to be changed. JMcCowell (talk) 17:14, 12 October 2010 (UTC)