Talk:Eduardo Vilaro

In response to feedback that this article is resume-like and subjective, I have revised it. I agree that the original bulleted presentation of accomplishments in the "Leadership..." section appeared too much like a resume. I've addressed this by selecting a few representive accomplishments, condensing them, and reformatting them within a paragraph. I am less sure of what is deemed subjective in this context, though I have removed numerous phrases and sentences that might be construed as such. As background, in composing this article, I read numerous Wikipedia articles about figures in the dance world to get a feel for what is included and not, wihtin Wikipedia guidelines——most included descriptions of professional accomplishments, favorable quotes from cited news sources, and the like. So if there are still issues with the article (of whatever nature), it would be helpful to know which sections or sentences are in question. For now, I've removed the tags. Many thanks for your feedback. Roxaneramos (talk) 20:45, 3 November 2018 (UTC)--Roxaneramos (talk) 20:45, 3 November 2018 (UTC)