Talk:Education in Medieval Scotland/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Happy to review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this on Sainsf.--  SabreBD  (talk) 11:59, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written, only a few comments:  Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 17:48, 18 May 2016 (UTC)


 * In the lead
 * When did the High Middle Ages begin? (in "Schools" as well)
 * ✅ I linked this to the article - dates are a bit unclear.--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 *  developed into "household schools Closing quotes
 * ✅--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Can you wikilink or explain Latin curriculum?
 * ✅--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)


 * In Sources
 * It would be good to link Aberdeen
 * ✅--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)


 * In Schools
 * Although reading may also have been taught in these schools, the students were probably taught by lay women or nuns What exactly is the contrast for which "although" is used?
 * ✅--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)


 * In Universities
 * of which John Mair (1467–1550) was the most important figure "most important" according to whom?
 * OK, I don't know how to fix this. He was the most important figure and not every supportive statement can be nailed down.--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I am deleting that statement.--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Do as you think proper, the only reason I felt uneasy about it was that such claims should generally come directly from some reliable source. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)


 * About the citations
 * Ref. 3 needs a page range.
 * The version used is electronic and does not have them - that is why the title is linked.--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Fine. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Images
 * The source of File:Monifeithpictishharper.jpg is unclear
 * There is no way I can fix that as I did not upload it - so I have deleted it.--  SabreBD  (talk) 08:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:48, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * All issues look resolved. I am glad to promote this. Great job! Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)