Talk:Edward D. Neill Elementary School

Suggestions
This is an article I am working on for my college-level writing class. I am open to all edits and suggestions. Thank you! 05:19, 19 April 2012‎


 * It reads like advertisement, and not even a clever one. Hope your degree is Spammology. Tuvalkin (talk) 17:54, 24 September 2013 (UTC)

Inadvert racism?
The article states (with a source, too!) that «48% of all students are culturally diverse». What does that even mean? Sould we assume that the the remaining 52% are feral kids, raised to have no culture at all? Or it is just a really clumsy way to say that 52% of the kids are “true” Americans, descending from late 19th century north European emmigrants, while the remaining 48% are a rabble mixture of indigenous leftovers from the founding genocice, 10th generation slave decendents still free in name only, and the offspring of conquistadores’ rapes of 400 years ago? Pardon my snark, but for all the good intentions that sentence it chillingly creepy. Tuvalkin (talk) 17:54, 24 September 2013 (UTC)