Talk:Edward D. Thalmann

Contributions re-write
The Contributions section is principally lifted from the Duke Anesthesia obit -- I haven't had time to competently re-work it (I understand very little of what the actual work entailed). More than likely, I will contact Drs. Curley and Butler for a proper primary source explanation of the contributions and an explanation of the Thalmann Algorithm. I wanted to get the article posted. I will also dig around for a family photo of Ed. — Comment by Mustang_DVS (talk | contribs) 22:03, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I trimmed & re-wrote the section to remedy the WP:COPYVIO that was lingering for more than 8 years. Nice article, but generally a short original paragraph is better for Wikipedia than a long WP:COPYPASTE of copyrighted material. —Patrug (talk) 21:42, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Date of Birth?
Dr. Thalmann's CV lists his DOB as the 1st and not the 3rd as listed in the article. Can anyone confirm? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gene Hobbs (talk • contribs) 02:53, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * His DoB, according to his death certificate, is April 3. — Mustang_DVS (talk | contribs) 19:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I've also verified this with his Navy personnel records.— Mustang_DVS (talk | contribs) 00:31, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Photo
I will have Ed's official Captain's photo scanned in and posted by this weekend. — Mustang_DVS (talk | contribs) 00:34, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Excellent work Mustang_dvs! Thanks for the follow-up. --Gene Hobbs (talk) 13:30, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Wow, that was a loooooong weekend. ;)  — Mustang_DVS (talk | contribs) 03:25, 5 May 2010 (UTC)

External links modified
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