Talk:Edward Elric/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article. I think it is very well done and have only a few questions:

I will put the article on hold while you address these issues. Thanks, Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Edward behaves in a childish manner about his short height; he tends to humorously overreact to any comment about it (and often misinterprets the words) in a fit of rage" - he is "humorous" and "in a fit of rage" at the same time? Or how does that work?
 * Removed humorous. It works like a comic relief in the series.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Despite his occasional bouts of immaturity, he is a selfless, strong, independent and mature young adult that gains a reputation as a "hero of the people"." - How can he be immature and mature at the same time? I assume that he shifts between seeming immature and mature.
 * Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Edward's childhood friend, Winry Rockbell, designed Edward's automail limbs alongside her grandmother Pinako." What does "alongside her grandmother" mean?
 * Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "allows Edward to float between the comical moments and the underlying drama without seeming false." - This is word for word from the source. The wording should be changed, or it should be put in quotes.
 * Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)

 GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:  Well written
 * B. MoS compliance: Complies with the basic MoS
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Sources are reliable
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects: Sets the context
 * B. Focused: Remains focused on topic
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Nice job! Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Nice job! Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Nice job! Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Nice job! Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)