Talk:Edward IV/Archive 2

At the time Rouen, Normandy was not in France.
It wilfully misreads... "Edward of York was born at Rouen in France" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.0.184.220 (talk) 19:53, 1 January 2019 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 September 2019
The article about Edward IV of England contains an inaccuracy. Edward IV had a daughter in 1461. Her name was Elizabeth. She became Elizabeth Lumley upon her marriage to Sir Thomas Lumley. No one knows who the mother of Lady Elizabeth Lumley was. She was brought up by Edward IV's mother, her own grandmother, Cecily Neville. The identity of the mother is lost to history. No one knows who she was. Lady Elizabeth Lucy was put forward as a potential mother and some people have argued Elizabeth Waite was the mother of Lady Elizabeth Lumley. Some also try to argue these two women are in fact the same person. In order to strengthen these arguments historians have, from time to time, tried to argue Elizabeth Lumley was born in 1464 and not 1461. Neither Elizabeth Waite nor Elizabeth Lucy knew Edward IV in 1461 and neither was in a relationship with him at that time. If Lady Elizabeth Lumley, was born in 1464, as your article claims and was subsequently married in 1477 to Sir Thomas Lumley, she would only have been aged 12 at the time. Those who support the idea Edward IV was married or engaged to Dame Eleanor Butler know that the relationship began in either 1462 or 1463. They also try to argue Elizabeth Lumley was born in 1464 in order to make Lady Elizabeth Lumley's date of birth of 1464, post date the Dame Eleanor Butler controversy. Elizabeth Lucy and Elizabeth Waite were two different women. Lady Elizabeth Lumley was born in 1461. She was the child of an unknown woman and Edward IV at a time when we had common law marriage in England. This child was a product of Edward IV's first known sexual relationship. It is most likely the mother died in childbirth. That goes some way to explain why she was brought up by her grandmother Cecily Neville. Your article also makes no reference to a son Edward IV allegedly had with Dame Eleanor in either 1464 or 1468 the year of her death. The boy (Edward of Wigmore) allegedly died in 1468. For completeness the article should not omit this information. The information is from Doubledays Encyclopedia of the Peerage NigelBoddysolicitor (talk) 09:55, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
 * We avoid original research and use only reliable, independent secondary sources. Many thanks! ——  SerialNumber  54129  10:41, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 10 November 2019
Says that edward was succeeded by henry vi - i think should be henry vii 69.202.240.54 (talk) 14:03, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
 * No, you're completely wrong there. Deb (talk) 14:45, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Revisions
General comments (for what its worth);

(a) While Edward was a talented individual (while young), the article is fairly uncritical, which is not the case even for the references already provided (eg Ross);

(b) I'm not going to touch it but is the question of his legitimacy worthy of more attention than (say) his foreign policy? Its three times longer than the current coverage of his reign post 1471 and has no references. Seems unbalanced.Robinvp11 (talk) 18:45, 8 December 2019 (UTC)


 * As to point b, no, this is Completely out of WP:PROPORTION. It merits one sentence, two at most.Agricolae (talk) 20:21, 8 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Rewritten, let me know if it needs changing, txs Robinvp11 (talk) 19:17, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Use of Findagrave
This was removed as a 'self-published' source, which I think is harsh. The guidelines say 'use with caution' and I don't see the problem with using this to verify the location of his burial place, as opposed to qualitative assessments.

Findagrave has tens of thousands of entries, entered by thousands of individuals and provides pictures and details; if you think there's a better one, then please feel free but until then, can we keep this.Robinvp11 (talk) 19:16, 7 January 2020 (UTC)


 * The number of entries at a crowdsourced site is not relevant to its accuracy. Find-a-Grave entry is Rarely appropriate as an external link, and almost never as an article source - (WP:FINDAGRAVE-EL).  This site really doesn't have any "specific, unique feature or information that is not available elsewhere", so it does not qualify for either a citation or external link.  Further, its use here is misleading, in that the sentence has three separate facts in it, that Edward rebuilt the chapel, that he was buried in the chapel, and that this burial took place was in 1483, but the Find-a-Grave page only documents one of these three items, the burial place (it gives the death date, not the burial date).  We are going to need another source anyhow, so we are better off finding a good one that does the full job. Agricolae (talk) 03:03, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

Focus
I'm not a specialist in this area but, coming to the article for the first time, the introduction strikes me as too full of events and circumstances leading up to Edward's accession. I think these should be moved to the beginning of the "Accession to the throne" section, and the introduction should do more to summarise the most important features of his life, reign and personality. Similarly, most of the section on "Early life" is not focussed on Edward himself. The details about his father's conflict with Henry VI are more appropriate to the articles on those two people. But here it would seem more relevant to mention why Edward happened to be born in Rouen, where he mainly grew up, what kind of education he had, etc. Mrmedley (talk) 04:13, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Further to the above, I drafted a new lead section before realizing that the article is protected. For what it's worth, I copy my draft below. I think it does a better job of summarising the contents of the article, although the article itself is rather weak regarding the qualities of Edward and his reign.


 * Edward was a central figure in the Wars of the Roses, a series of civil wars for state power in England fought by opposing Yorkist and Lancastrian factions between 1455 and 1487. His father, Richard of York, led the Yorkists against King Henry VI at the start of these wars but was killed in battle in December 1460. As the eldest son, Edward (then aged 18) inherited his father’s claim to the throne. In the first few months of 1461 he commanded victorious forces in the battles of Morton Cross and Towton, and became king.


 * ''His reign was interrupted by a French-backed revolt in 1470-1471 which briefly installed King Henry VI for a second time. Edward regained the throne after finding refuge and funds in Flanders, winning the Battle of Barnet and entering London. He quickly consolidated his position by having Henry killed and winning another victory at Tewksbury.

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 * Edward reigned twelve more years. Shortly before he died, in 1483, seeing that his heir apparent was still a minor, he named his brother, the Duke of Gloucester, as Protector. After his death, Edward’s surviving sons were declared illegitimate by Gloucester who then ascended to the throne as Richard III. Edward nevertheless became an ancestor of Tudor and Stuart monarchs through his daughter, Elizabeth of York, who married Richard’s vanquisher, King Henry VII.

Mrmedley (talk) 13:30, 18 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Comment. I would agree that the lead section at present focuses too much on Henry VI and not enough on Edward. However, you can't plunge straight in with your first paragraph without explaining a little more. I'd make a few changes and come up with something like this:
 * King Edward IV of England was a central figure in the Wars of the Roses, a series of civil wars in England fought between the Yorkist and Lancastrian factions between 1455 and 1487, during the reign of King Henry VI of England. Edward was the eldest son of Richard, Duke of York, a rival claimant to the throne and the leader of the opposition to Henry VI. When Richard was killed in battle in December 1460, Edward inherited his claim to the throne. In the first few months of 1461 he commanded victorious forces in the battles of Mortimer's Cross and Towton, and became king.


 * Edward's marriage to Elizabeth Woodville led to his falling out with his mentor, Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick. His reign was interrupted by a revolt in 1470-1471, led by Warwick and backed by the French, which briefly re-installed Henry VI as king. Edward regained the throne after finding refuge and funds in Flanders, winning the Battle of Barnet and entering London. He quickly consolidated his position by having Henry killed and winning another victory at Tewkesbury.


 * Edward reigned twelve more years, but died suddenly in 1483. Since his heir apparent was still a minor, he named his brother, the Duke of Gloucester, as Lord Protector. After his death, Edward’s surviving sons were declared illegitimate by Gloucester who then ascended the throne as Richard III before himself being killed in battle. Edward nevertheless became an ancestor of Tudor and Stuart monarchs through his daughter, Elizabeth of York, who married Richard's rival, King Henry VII. Deb (talk) 14:06, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

Yes, that's better! Thanks. Mrmedley (talk) 14:37, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

So, Deb, will you make this change? Or perhaps even remove the protected status of the page, on a trial basis at least. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrmedley (talk • contribs) 01:17, 20 May 2020 (UTC)


 * First, the Lead is supposed to summarise the Article; Second, its hard to leave out Henry's role, because (lets be clear), the Wars are what people focus on. Even Thomas Penn's recent rewrite of the Brothers York covers the period 1471 to 1483 in a chapter.


 * I'm not suggesting it can't be improved but I don't think it needs to be entirely rewritten (plus "Edward's marriage to Elizabeth Woodville led to his falling out with his mentor, Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick" is not really accurate. Its far more complex than that, and relates to foreign policy).


 * As the person who rewrote it, can I have a go first? Then you can critique.Robinvp11 (talk) 18:11, 20 May 2020 (UTC)


 * See what you think. Robinvp11 (talk) 18:53, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you, Robinvp11, for your response. But my opinion - for what it's worth - remains that, for a lead section, the present one gets too bogged down in what I would consider to be background information, particularly in the 2nd and 3rd sentences of the second paragraph and the first sentence of the third paragraph. The lead section is supposed to summarize the most important points and in my view these are not among the most important points of this specific article. But on consideration I agree it wasn't necessary to rewrite the whole of the lead section. Mrmedley (talk) 02:07, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Edward was a usurper, not an heir; that means the political and economic context which led to the civil wars is key. Hence reference to the Regency council, and Henry's minority; without that, why he ended up fighting for the throne becomes a mystery.
 * Henry's personality and mental condition is central to the Wars of the Roses, which is what most readers will be looking for (that's not really controversial; in comparison to books on the War, even purported biographies of Edward are thin on the ground, and usually cover the second half of his reign in a chapter). If Henry had been Edward III, history would look very different; if he was either sane, or insane, all the time, the problem would have been simpler. It was his occasional recovery that caused what remains a unique situation in English history (George III occurred in a different context).
 * All these points are discussed in the article; its reasonable to have three sentences in a five paragraph Lead covering Henry, the economic and political circumstances of his minority, his personality even when sane, and his mental illness. It's essential background. Robinvp11 (talk) 07:06, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I'm dubious about the statement "and until 1453, heir presumptive to Henry VI". Surely Humphrey of Gloucester was heir presumptive until his death in 1447? Deb (talk) 08:02, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes; York was heir between the death of Gloucester and the birth of the PoW. serial   # 09:27, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * My mistake, I'll clarify, thanks :). Robinvp11 (talk) 17:21, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

Renominate for GA
I see it failed back in 2015 - is it worth renominating it now? Robinvp11 (talk) 17:36, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * The article looks much better now than it did last year but I do not think it is quite there yet. The chronology is odd. Why is the "Legitimacy" section after "Successors"? Why does it mention an unnamed and apparently discredited TV documentary? Much of what is in "Overview" belongs to "Reign". "Ancestry" is unsourced and names some people for no apparent reason; shouldn't a genealogy chart mention his brothers, who had such a great role in his reign, rather than an obscure Maud Percy? Surtsicna (talk) 19:03, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * It's a bit bitty though, yeah; the vastness of the literature means this should probably be a ≥12,000-worder. ——  Serial # 19:08, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Thanks both. Answers below;
 * I agree the focus and flow is a bit odd, largely because I didn't want to simply impose my perspective on the article. There were huge paragraphs devoted to Legitimacy and the TV documentary, so getting it down to one line was a considerable achievement :).
 * Personally, ancestry charts bore me to tears. I can find a reference without any trouble, but I have zero interest in expanding it, so if anyone else does, please feel free.
 * I don't think it needs more words per se. I seem to be in a minority on this topic, but we need to think about users. This is an encyclopaedia, so conciseness is a virtue. Graphics break it up, especially when viewed on a mobile device, which (per Wikipedia) is how most people will access it.
 * If there is a topic missing, let's discuss, but I'm not a fan of simply expanding because its a big subject. Robinvp11 (talk) 12:23, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Mayhap; but have a glance at WP:FA?, of which a requirement (1b) is that the article is comprehensive: it neglects no major facts or details and places the subject in context. Cheers, ——  Serial # 13:47, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I thought only George Martin used 'Mayhap' :) As above, what topic(s) do you consider are missing? Robinvp11 (talk) 14:38, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * It needs full and comprehensive coverage of the first 9 years of the reign; the current effort is cursory bordering on the useless. This would include the pacification of the north, the Wydeville connection, and relations with Warwick at least. Deposition, exile and restoration need a fuller treatment, as does the second reign. Other topics effectively unaddressed by their brevity would probably include law and order, economic policy and income, foreign policy, family policy and relations with Wales, Scotland, Ireland and the north of England. His family unit, his court and his matrimonial/patronage policy. Relations with parliament and the nobility. Popular contemporary image. Historiography, subsequent depictions. And the usual background/aftermath sections.That should keep you busy. I may be of some assistance with sources. ——  Serial # 15:10, 23 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Serial# has a point regarding comprehensiveness. The contents page of the biography by Ross can serve as a good checklist. For example, Ross devotes 12 pages to "policies towards Wales, the north of England, and Ireland", while the body of this article mentions Wales once and Ireland not even once; Ross has 19 pages on Edward's "Great Enterprise" (invasion of France), spanning from 1472 until 1475, while our article has no more than three sentences, beginning in 1475, at the very end of the entire affair; the House of Commons is not mentioned at all despite Ross dedicating 10 pages to "the King and the Commons in Parliament", etc. I do not quite like sprawling articles either but this one is rather lacking. Yet it is miles better than it was the last time I checked. The articles about Edward IV and Henry VI have always stood out as the least developed among English monarchs and I am very happy to see that they are getting some attention too. Surtsicna (talk) 15:11, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Excellent points,, and of course, you're right: Ross is n excellent starting point. Very readable. ——  Serial # 15:17, 23 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Just so we're all clear, I've read eight different books on this topic, including Ross, Penn and Seward, plus numerous articles. Of the 45 Sources provided in this article, the vast majority come from me. I don't need help with Sources, thanks all the same.
 * Conciseness is hard work, not because I'm too lazy to read more than one book. Its easy to simply regurgitate large chunks of content, although I know many editors seem to think the ability to do so is a sign of intelligence.
 * As a result, I'm well aware of all the different aspects of his reign; Ross wrote a 400 page biography, which is why he could devote 12 pages to Edward spending a lot of money to traipse around Northern France for a month. This is an encyclopaedia.
 * The article is about Edward IV, the person and individual, not the economic development of 15th century England. Wikipedia is an online ecyclopedia for general users, most of whom spend no more five minutes on the article (Wikipedia stats). Longer is not better.
 * It needs full and comprehensive coverage of the first 9 years of the reign; the current effort is cursory bordering on the useless. This comment is neither helpful, or accurate.
 * How about providing an example of an article we should aspire to? Then we can decide who'd like to do it. Doesn't have to be me; my main objective was to remove huge chunks of pointless speculation about his legitimacy. Job done. Robinvp11 (talk) 18:33, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I think you misunderstood me. I did not suggest that you read a book. I suggested that you use the Contents page of a comprehensive general biography as a checklist to ensure that every major point has been covered. It simply does not make sense for Ireland, the other of the two islands partially ruled by Edward, to be completely ignored - especially since space is accorded to the marital choices of Edward's grandson and Edward's rival's mother-in-law. Surtsicna (talk) 21:54, 24 May 2020 (UTC)


 * I understand your point but not every topic covered by Ross is important enough to be included; the fact its not included is not because it hasn't been considered. Horrox' online Oxford DNB entry (which is a lot longer than this) does not even mention Ireland. If there's a relevant point you think should be included, please feel free to add it. Robinvp11 (talk) 16:08, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * A lot of good improvements have been made in the last few days. But I think there should be more consideration of Edward's role in evolving the structures of English monarchy and governance. Ross mentions - and more recent historians still discuss - Green's "New Monarchy" thesis. As I understand it, this is the idea that Edward dealt an important blow to the power of the barons (not only in defeat of Warwick and seizure of the Duchy of Lancaster but also in various financial and administrative techniques and in the promotion of commoners in government reporting to the king) that paved a way toward Henry VIII's reformation and the civil service of Elizabeth I. Some of these elements are already in the article, but there is scope for more, and for mentioning the ongoing historical debate about their combined significance. I suggest deleting the paraphrasing of Ross that Edward's "reign was ultimately a failure", since the reduction of a whole reign to such a term is unhelpful. Mrmedley (talk) 03:22, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Penn, Seward and Horrox argue Edward tried to disrupt existing regional powerbrokers (eg handing the North to John Neville, removing the Tudors in Wales, Courtenays in the South-West etc) rather than necessarily destroy them. But I'll give it some thought, then you can take a look. Robinvp11 (talk) 16:08, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Sorry to drag you into this, but I find edit wars incredibly childish. Can one of you have a look at the rewrite of the Lead and make any adjustments; I don't think its an improvement, but I may well be biased. Robinvp11 (talk) 16:40, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Really? It's s' own lead from the section above, which is superior as it concentrates on Edward himself (as you point out above, the person and individual, rather than "the third son of Edward III", etc., and other pre-history). Debs' lead nicely draws the central figure into the context without wasting words. Her prose is, frankly, delightful; I felt what it replaced—while longer—was choppier and fragmentary. Cheers, ——  Serial # 16:57, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Don't worry, Robinvp11, we're all here willingly :D I do prefer this version to this because it is less sprawling and focuses much more on Edward (the second paragraph of this version, for example, does not even mention Edward). For what it's worth, Manual of Style/Lead section advises that there should be no more than four paragraphs in a lead section. This version, however, is severely underlinked. Is that an oversight? Surtsicna (talk) 17:05, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * It's purely because Deb didn't link theirs^^^ :) and I didn't wan't to insert links until we had a consensus.  ——  Serial # 17:13, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Compliments are always much appreciated, but I'm always willing to compromise on wording and in this case, there are several people who know a lot about the subject. Perhaps that makes it harder in some ways to agree on where the emphasis should be. Deb (talk) 18:54, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I'm very happy with the new/current version of the lead, though I hope the main article will eventually support adding something about innovations in monarchical governance and the economy during Edward's reign. Mrmedley (talk) 01:29, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Oh but I just noticed that the Wars of the Roses are said to have taken place "between 1455 and 1487, during the reign of Henry VI". Henry VI's reign didn't cover the latter part, so could one of you extended-confirmed-users cut out "during the reign of Henry VI"? Mrmedley (talk) 03:32, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

CE
Did a virus shielded, cheeky, drive-by ce; auto-edded, cite scan, removed redundant ref harvs, changed date to year, moved unused references to further reading, rv dupe wikilinks. Tried to find Ross 1992 but couldn't. Rv as desired. Keith-264 (talk) 13:23, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Robinvp11 (talk) 16:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

Request to remove or reduce the article's protection
, It looks to me that the article's extended-protected status should now be lifted. From the log I see you imposed it in September 2018 in response to a flurry of disruptive edits from an IP address. Is there a particular reason to think those would resume at the same level? If not, could you lift it, or at least reduce the protection level? Mrmedley (talk) 00:39, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I can, but is a high-visibility article that frequently gets vandalised, or rather frequently gets edited by people with imperfect knowledge of the topic (e.g. dates of reign and predecessor/successor are regularly interfered with). You're autoconfirmed so you should be able to edit it now. Deb (talk) 09:15, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks! Mrmedley (talk) 10:07, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Elizabeth of York
I'm wondering why User:Surtsicna has changed "Elizabeth of York" to the ambiguous "Elizabeth, Queen of England" in the infobox? Deb (talk) 12:19, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
 * All his children are "of York". The name of the house is stated right after the list of children. Compare with the infobox in Edward III. "Elizabeth of York, Queen of England" takes up two rows and is a bit of an overkill; "Elizabeth of York" and "Elizabeth, Queen of England" (with "York" stated below) are both enough to identify the daughter. Surtsicna (talk) 13:18, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
 * But everyone, when they see "Elizabeth, Queen of England", thinks of Queen Elizabeth I of England. And "Elizabeth of York" is the normal, common name for this particular consort. In fact, it was her raison d'etre, being the person who was supposed to unite the houses of York and Lancaster. Deb (talk) 15:45, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Likewise, "Richard, Duke of York", is normally understood to mean Edward IV's father, so much so that the article with that title actually redirects to Richard of York, 3rd Duke of York. Deb (talk) 15:47, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
 * As I said, I am fine with choosing common name over consistency. "Elizabeth of York" works well. It is "Elizabeth of York, Queen of England" that bothers me. Surtsicna (talk) 11:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay, I get that. Deb (talk) 11:08, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Aftermath
Aftermath section has Cardinal Reginald Pole as the 'last legitimate heir'. Cardinal Reginald Pole was the last surviving son of Margaret Pole, Countess of Salisbury, but he had at least four nephews surviving at the time of his death (Sir Arthur, Thomas, Edmund and Geoffrey) - legitimate sons of his brother Sir Geoffrey Pole and Constance Pakenham.
 * I think you're correct. I've removed that misleading wording. Deb (talk) 10:19, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Edward IV's Issues infobar
Is it just me or is the issues section in Edward IV's infobox jumbled up? It's not even chronological, if whoever did it did so for the purposes of highlighting historically important children of Edward IV. Should it be fixed? Yourlocallordandsavior (talk) 06:13, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

For major/radical/unpopular changes, please use the talk page
Hello, just want to reiterate to people to try and use the talk page if they have any revisions they think that might be controversial or challenged. It can be a little annoying when some people try to make really big changes to the pages, especially those without much thinking behind it, and other editors having to revert these silly changes. Just a precaution so that it can ease some of the burdens other editors have to deal with, which can take quite a bit of hours to do, when those initial edits just took seconds or minutes to make. Thanks. Yourlocallordandsavior (talk) 03:12, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

Family tree table
I believe George, Duke of Clarence, was older then King Richard III. -- GoodDay (talk) 23:07, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Indeed! Thanks. Surtsicna (talk) 23:59, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Is the table legible enough? Or would it be better to simplify or split it? I have toyed with rearranging the children of John and Joan, hoping for less intersecting lines, but I do not think anything would be gained. Surtsicna (talk) 00:05, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * It looks great in its current form. Would have no objections, if you added them throughout all royal bios. GoodDay (talk) 00:12, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the encouragement! It takes time to find these in published biographies and to recreate them, though, and there are many royal bios around. But Rome was not built in a day. Surtsicna (talk) 00:29, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

2nd and 3rd Duke of Somerset
This page states that, When Richard Duke of York was replaced in France, his replacement was Henry Beaufort, 3rd Duke of Somerset. This is incorrect. Henry Beaufort was born in 1436. York was replaced in France in 1443, first by Henry's grandfather, John Beaufort, 1st Duke of Somerset, and then by Henry's father Edmund Beaufort, 2nd Duke of Somerset. Henry Beaufort was sent to Calais in 1459 to dislodge the Earl of Warwick. That was his only military command in France. Wayside55 (talk) 02:02, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

Requested move 3 September 2021

 * The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion. 

The result of the move request was: (non-admin closure) NO CONSENSUS User:力 (power~enwiki, π,  ν ) 19:14, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

The votes are fairly evenly split, and many of the oppose voters feel the language If the regnal name and number are unambiguous, use them: Louis XVIII, Edward VIII, Alfonso XII, Gustaf VI Adolf. Adding a country to the article title, when there is no other country with a monarch of that name, goes against WP:PRECISION at WP:COGNOMEN (a guideline) does not have site-wide consensus. A broader discussion is necessary on this topic. User:力 (power~enwiki, π,  ν ) 19:14, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

– The articles of many British and English monarchs are formatted without the country in the name. This is the case for Henry VIII, Elizabeth I, George V, Elizabeth II, to name a few. I see no reason to exclude Edward IV and Edward V. Векочел (talk) 16:31, 3 September 2021 (UTC) — Relisting. Havelock Jones (talk) 15:22, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Edward IV of England → Edward IV
 * Edward V of England → Edward V
 * Support. the "of England" format is uncommon in the RS, as you can see here. 99to99 (talk) 21:19, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose. I see this as an arrogant assumption that "everyone knows" which country they were monarchs of, simply because they are English. I opposed the other changes and I oppose these for the same reason. Deb (talk) 22:27, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose - Not asking anyone in particular, but when will this name only push on monarch articles, stop? GoodDay (talk) 05:40, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose - And would urge returning many of the older ones to "of England" format. Wikipedia audience is global. Walrasiad (talk) 11:03, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose Very poor format. The other changes you mention should be reversed back to the "of England" form. Dimadick (talk) 13:21, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose An argument could be made for not including the nation for 'iconic' monarchs (as could the counter argument), but these are exceptions rather than justification for systematic renaming. Neither of the monarchs in this proposal are such iconic figures. Agricolae (talk) 14:54, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose I continue to stand by pre-emptive disambiguation, and IMHO some of those listed should be moved back. However if we are to abandon pre-emptive disambiguation then we should take a clear decision instead of approaching it in this piecemeal way.  Edward V is a pretty minor figure, a child monarch who only reigned for a few months. PatGallacher (talk) 22:50, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support per WP:COGNOMEN, where it is explicitly stated that "if the regnal name and number are unambiguous, use them". HouseBlastertalk 23:56, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support I think the last argument, (unambiguity, referring to WP:COGNOMEN), means there is an established principle that trumps the strongest "oppose" arguments (anglocentricity, non-iconicness and pre-emptive disambiguation) in this case. Mrmedley (talk) 01:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Comment This point was only added to WP:NCROY a year ago and may not represent consensus. Removing pre-emptive disambiguation consistently would effect dozens of articles, not just these two, I will raise this at NCROY. PatGallacher (talk) 20:23, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that, PatGallacher. I wasn't aware of the change and I don't see consensus for it. Deb (talk) 07:34, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I looked. Seems to me consensus for it was established here: Wikipedia_talk:Naming_conventions_(royalty_and_nobility)/Archive_24 —В²C ☎ 05:04, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Change of opinion Following the debate with interest and appreciation, I've come to realise more that the "established principle" in WP:COGNOMEN isn't as clearly-established or as overriding in application as I had imagined. There are lots of competing guidelines and precedents, so I don't see how a purely principled decision can be made without consensus for a clearer and more comprehensive rulebook. There is evidently a sense in which this battle on Edward IV is part of larger wars, and I suggest we call it a draw here and leave the article title as it is (which, honestly, isn't so long or complex as to make concision a pressing concern) until some clearer framework is established at a higher level. Has anyone tried to tabulate all monarchical names - or an adequately large sample - as a tool for trying to reach consensus on a determining set of principles? Mrmedley (talk) 03:22, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support per above sound policy-based nom and Support arguments, plus WP:CONCISION. Closer: please note that the entire opposition is either WP:JDLI or is based on the concept of pre-emptive disambiguation, which is contrary to policy and community consensus, and should be discounted accordingly when evaluating consensus here. —В²C ☎ 04:57, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I'm sure that the closer will note your preferences. Let's face it, we've all heard them endlessly. Deb (talk) 20:43, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support: Unnecessary disambugation. The target already redirects to the current articles. As far as anglocentricity is concerned, one could also open RMs for these monarchs: Louis VII, David III, Isabella I, Margrethe II, Olav V, and so on.  Peter Ormond &#128172;  20:27, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Once upon a time, these articles were all in a standard format, which worked well. Deb (talk) 20:43, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * A title “working well” isn’t saying much. A totally gibberish title could work well with appropriate redirects and links. Beyond “working well” which is trivial what’s helpful is title stability and that comes from making titles consistent with WP:CRITERIA. When a guideline strays from CRITERIA guidance that leads to confusion and volatility. That’s what happened with royalty titles. That guideline ignored CRITERIA and COMMONNAME, especially CONCISION. But it’s better now. Let’s move forward. —В²C ☎ 05:07, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Comment "But it’s better now." That is your opinion. It has become much worse, with increasingly confusing titles. Dimadick (talk) 06:36, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No, not better per my opinion which couldn’t care less. Better per WP:CRITERIA. —В²C ☎ 13:28, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * But WP:CRITERIA does not wholly support the proposed change. For example, the consistency criterion asserts that good titles should follow the pattern of like articles, a standard that the current title certainly meets better than the proposed one. Though you may personally favor certain titling criteria over others, and are free to advocate for them, our goal here is to weigh all criteria and relevant considerations and determine if the proposed change is actually an improvement and clearly merited, and IMHO I don't see that we're there (for reasons that go beyond your earlier assertion of simple JDLI). ╠╣uw [ talk ] 15:38, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Sure, but there needs to be a balance. CONSISTENCY with other titles of similar articles is fine for choosing among choices that all meet COMMONNAME and the other CRITERIA about equally, but not not to pick a title over another that meets the other CRITERIA so much better. That goes for all of them. For example, we don’t pick the most CONCISE title when COMMONNAME indicates another. —В²C ☎ 21:04, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose as out of step with WP:CONSISTENT and with like titles; as others rightly note (and as WP:CRITERIA recognizes), there's a benefit in predictable and consistent titling, and in following the same pattern as similar articles. Whatever benefit some feel may be gleaned from having a slightly shorter title, I don't see that it outweighs the potential confusion we would introduce by arbitrarily reducing one title in an otherwise more consistently-titled set of many ([1],[2],[3], etc.) ╠╣uw [ talk ] 15:03, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support. "Edward IV" is standard (WP:COMMONNAME) and adding "of England" is unnecessary disambiguation (WP:PRECISION). The WP:NCROY guideline ("if the regnal name and number are unambiguous, use them") affirms these principles, and is backed by consensus at the RFC and consensus at the RMs which led up to it (e.g. Talk:Elizabeth I). Arguments that titles of monarchs should follow one format are reasonable, but are less persuasive when many titles already do not follow that format (e.g. Edward VI), and in my view, do not outweigh the other criteria. Arguments of the type well we should just change those other titles too ignore that they have consensus. Lastly, whether a topic is well-known or minor is not a factor and plays no role in the analysis. Adumbrativus (talk) 08:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
 * support mostly per Adumbrativus. These monarchs are not some obscure monarchs. They are historical, and everybody knows about them. It is arrogant to assume that everybody knows of the modern USA. —usernamekiran (talk) 18:28, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * , Could you please explain what you mean about the USA? And it's certainly not true that "everybody knows about them"; most English people could tell you nothing at all about Edward IV. Deb (talk) 12:39, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Support per nominator, and as Edward IV redirects here anyway, the English monarch seems to be the primary topic. J I P  &#124; Talk 01:10, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Support per nomination. Other than under special circumstances, such as WP:USPLACE, it is counterintuitive to have short forms, such as Edward IV or Edward V, redirect to longer forms, such as Edward IV of England or Edward V of England, especially in view of the WP:CONSISTENT argument pointing out that the main title headers for other eligible monarchs are already depicted in the streamlined form. —Roman Spinner (talk • contribs) 01:52, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
 * If we are to be WP:CONSISTENT, it should be with the majority of royalty pages that still use the 'name of place' format, rather than using a somewhat arbitrary 'eligibility' standard as justification to emulate the relatively small number of pages that are inconsistent with the majority. Agricolae (talk) 19:34, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

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 * Oppose per my previous arguments (e.g., at Talk:Edward I of England). Srnec (talk) 22:41, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose, The notion of concision pushed to brevity to the point of idiocy. Either it’s “King …” or “… of ”, for consistency and recognisability. NCROYAL is one case where quality sources are a problem, because there are small number of authors who write about a lot of royalist, and each attempts to claim novelty by familiarity by using a close perspective title. I think this is why the NCROYAL guideline is so terrible. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 13:52, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose - Outside of particularly iconic monarchs like Henry VIII or Louis XIV, I think it's best to preserve the "(name) of (Kingdom)" structure; it's useful for distinguishing royals in a WP:NATURAL way, and is more widely applicable than the without-realm style (which we'd have to regularly diverge from, for low-numbered monarchs like Henry I). Including the realm also makes it easier to track changes in the title of a given state, such as the shift from Mary II of England to Anne, Queen of Great Britain. ModernDayTrilobite (talk) 19:02, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Oppose The death by a thousand cuts method of stripping the country name out of monarch articles needs to stop and be reversed. It was a good system to make it consistent across all articles, rather than on subjective measures of "importance" for who gets to not have the "of " disambiguator.  We need to stop this and return to putting them all back at the consistent names.  -- Jayron 32 19:47, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Which "Henry", exactly ?
For someone like myself, who is not knowledgeable about this period and comes here to be educated, this article is very imprecise as to which of the many Henrys are being mentioned at any particular juncture. For example, which Henry is being talked about in this quote: "Matters came to a head in August 1453 when Henry collapsed into a catatonic stupor..." ? BushelCandle 13:09, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Henry VI, obviously, but I get what you mean. Deb (talk) 13:33, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 5 April 2022
2A01:CB0C:BA1:4C00:34E9:B898:BE7B:E691 (talk) 17:50, 5 April 2022 (UTC) You should add "Mary of York" as the second child of Edward IV of England and Elizabeth Woodville because I don't see her in the Edward's child and yesturday I saw her. I don't know why she was delated and who done it, but I think that's a shame imagine if pupils searched for informations about this king for a school homework and had bad grade because of this mistake, it would be a pity for them, who trusted Wikipedia.
 * Yo, Mary of York is already listed under 'Marriage and children'. On your other point... Wikipedia isn't to be trusted :)    SN54129  18:00, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
 * It's only the infobox she's missing from, possibly because she didn't live to adulthood. Deb (talk) 18:01, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Unhelpful statement
The article currently states Edward "remains the only king in English history since 1066 in active possession of his throne who failed to secure the safe succession of his son." It's not literally true, and there are too many caveats that you would need to add to this statement to make it helpful. Anna (talk) 14:14, 4 June 2022 (UTC)

Error incorrectly describing Edward's actions pre-Towton
It may seem like a minor nit-pick, but the article claims Edward was 'crowned' in London before moving on to Towton to confront Anjou's force. This is not true, Edward was appointed King, but was not crowned such until after Towton. It is actually a moderatly important detail that ought to be remedied. Spudkinned (talk) 16:40, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Well, vox populi, vox dei etc.  SN54129  15:07, 27 February 2023 (UTC)