Talk:Edward Milford/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 10:25, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll get started on this one shortly. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:25, 24 May 2013 (UTC) Comments Passed, a pleasure to review. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 11:10, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
 * no alt text on images (not a GA requirement, not action required)
 * all other toolbox checks are green (no action required)
 * one notable aspect that should probably be mentioned is he was the first Duntroon graduate to make general.
 * suggest the first para of the New Guinea campaign subsection needs tweaking, it is not clear why conducting operations on Goodenough would deceive the Japs, or who was defending it, but it might just be me...
 * Thanks for the review, and to AR and AC who chipped in with a few tweaks as well. Zawed (talk) 02:50, 25 May 2013 (UTC)