Talk:Edward Opoku/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Early life

 * wikilink scholarship to Athletic scholarship


 * "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree all four years in high school" - in all
 * ✅, changed to "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree in all four years of high school".


 * "and was named as the co-MVP" - co-Most valuable player


 * Wikilink recruiting class to College recruiting

College and amateur

 * "As a sophomore, Opoku found his stride," - avoid idioms per MOS:IDIOM
 * ✅, changed to "As a sophomore, Opoku netted six goals in 18 appearances for the Cavaliers."


 * Wikilink the first mention of assist to Assist (football) for non-soccer readers
 * ✅, linked in "after finishing the season with two goals and three assists."


 * "Opoku was named to the All-ACC Second Team at the end of the season." - season's end


 * "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference nod," - acknowledgement
 * ✅, changed to "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference honour".


 * "Opoku departed Virginia following the year, ending his collegiate career with 16 goals in 56 appearances for the Cavaliers." - this sentence requires a citation to a reliable source
 * ✅, linked to his Virginia profile.

AC Connecticut

 * Wikilink yellow card to Fouls and misconduct (association football)


 * "joining up with the club for the 2017 PDL season." - joining the club is sufficient


 * "Opoku went on to appear four times on the year," - during


 * "Opoku scored once in four total appearances on the year, and concluded his two seasons with the club having played eight times and scored once." - need to be cited to a reliable source
 * ✅, linked to his PDL profile

Columbus Crew AC

 * "the first Generation Adidas player drafted by Columbus since Dilly Duka in 2010." - that statement needs to be supported by a reliable source
 * ✅, moved the Massive Report reference to the end of the sentence since the ref covers that statement.


 * "beginning a stretch in which he appeared in four consecutive matches, and concluded the season with six appearances in all competitions." - another reliable source is needed here
 * ✅, linked to his Columbus profile.

That's all from my perspective. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I believe I've just about covered everything you've brought up, let me know if any of my changes still ned a bit of adjustment. Otherwise, thanks for the review (the second you've done for one of my nominations, I believe!) 21.colinthompson (talk) 23:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Nothing else I could find so am now able to promote this article to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 11:55, 23 February 2019 (UTC)