Talk:Edwards A. Park (doctor)

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Hi, I think your lead section is very knowledgeable and concise, however there are no inline citations in the lead section or in the article as a whole yet, which could be an easy fix. Also, under the "Awards" tab, it might be more beneficial to have a little blurb associated with each award that Park won, instead of simply listing them in chronological order. I think this would add even more insight into Park's career, as well as the groups/accomplishments that he made as a physician. On the other side, I liked how you linked various institutions and diseases in your article, leading to their specific wikipedia articles (Yale University, Lead Poisoning, etc...) Kevin duffy9 (talk) 12:50, 7 April 2017 (UTC)Kevin duffy9 kevin_duffy9

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