Talk:Effects of Hurricane Mitch in Honduras/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 1ST7 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this article. Initial comments will hopefully be posted soon. --1ST7 (talk) 03:38, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

Here's the review: I'll put the article on hold for a week to give you time to address these things. Thanks for your work! --1ST7 (talk) 00:23, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Well-written
 * 2) *"Prisoners in Tegucigalpa Central Penitentiary was evacuated to the national stadium" should be "Prisoners in Tegucigalpa Central Penitentiary were evacuated".
 * 3) **Stupid grammar, fixed it. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:06, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *The article uses % in some places and "percent" in others. Please make this consistent.
 * 5) **Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:06, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Verifiable with no original research:
 * 7) Broad in its coverage:
 * 8) *"Hurricane Mitch set back the economies of various countries in the region, after they had improved throughout the 1990s." Can you please name some of the other countries?
 * 9) **Clarified. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:06, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *Please mention the casualties in the lead.
 * 11) **It is at the end of the second paragraph. Do you want me to go into more detail? --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:06, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * You're right. Sorry, must have missed it. --1ST7 (talk) 01:00, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Neutral:
 * 2) Stable:
 * 3) Illustrated, if possible, by images:
 * Thanks a lot for the review, and for posting it to both of my accounts! I believe I got everything here. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:06, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! The article looks good to go now, so I'm going to pass it. Congratulations, and thanks again for your work! --1ST7 (talk) 01:00, 20 November 2013 (UTC)