Talk:Ego Death (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:41, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Per your request. Dance music is probably the genre that interests me the most so this should be fun to review! LOVI 33  14:41, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments
Infobox and lead
 * Infobox looks good!
 * This article is about the house song → ; or something along those lines
 * ✅ --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * it expands on West's "Fade" →
 * ❌ I noted the release year in the body so I don't think I need to here as well --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * I'm kinda confused about what "the former" is in "Initially previewed after the Coachella Valley Music and Arts Festival in April 2019, the former experienced an internet leak in March 2020"
 * Because "Fade" was referenced second in the previous sentence, I thought I would use the former to differentiate... or should it be the song instead, as I only use "it" previously? --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * US Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart →
 * ✅ --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Background and recording
 * I've been told that Quoteboxes are discouraged in music-related articles. Perhaps a switch to the template would be better.
 * Are you sure this is correct since I've seen GAs like "Frail State of Mind" use quoteboxes, plus blockquote looks awkward at the beginning of a section? --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Prose looks amazing!

Composition and lyrics
 * House music is a style Club (EDM). Are you sure it should be listed?
 * to "Fade" by West → as it was mentioned above that it is by West
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Release and promotion
 * The song later experienced a release to US →
 * ✅ --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

References
 * No copyright violations!
 * All citations look good!

Verdict
 * Overall, it is an amazingly well-written article. Only a few concerns so I will put this article for now. Defiantly GA quality. Good job!  LOVI  33  03:26, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for the review over a short period of time, I have implemented most of the changes and left comments for you regarding the others. --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Great! ✅. LOVI  33  14:41, 13 April 2021 (UTC)