Talk:El Costo de la Vida/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

I can get this done in one day! --K. Peake 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Shouldn't "Burbujas de Amor" be listed as another B-side in the infobox per the track listing?
 * Areíto Studios → 4:40 since that is the correct name and you don't use the term studios in infobox
 * "his sixth studio album" → "his sixth studio album,"
 * "The track is a" → "It is a"
 * Remove the introduction to Loketo since this is only needed in the body
 * Wikilink soukous to itself
 * "and Guerra performs it as" → "and is performed by Guerra as"
 * "It was released as" → "The song was released as" and make this the second sentence of this paragraph instead
 * In the second para, move the music video info to being after critical and commercial reception
 * "The accompanying music video for the song" → "The music video for the song"
 * "but it still received" → "despite still receiving"
 * Reword the award sentence to mentioning that it won the Tropical Song of the Year award at the 1993 Lo Nuestro Awards with the pipe
 * "in the US." → "in the United States." per MOS:US on the first being the first mention in the new order, also add that it was his first chart topper

Background and composition

 * Pipe merengue to Merengue music on the audio sample text
 * Wikilink Juan Luis Guerra
 * Remove commas around Bachata Rosa
 * "as for music for" → "as music for" to avoid duplicate usage of for
 * "than the last one"." → "than the last one."" per MOS:QUOTE
 * Remove the comma after cha-cha-cha
 * "and song's composer" → "and song composer"
 * "in Guerra sings about" → "in which Guerra sings about"
 * "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet"." → "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet."" with the pipe
 * "a measure of coffee"" → "a measure of coffee"."
 * "He also makes references" → "Guerra also makes references"

Music video

 * "The news monitors behind the singer depicts" either change to the news monitor if it is only one or to depict if you mean multiple monitors
 * Remove the comma after Chilean military dictatorship
 * "The video also intersperses with scenes" → "This content is interspersed with scenes"
 * "in the category" → "in the category of"
 * Pipe 5th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1993
 * "It was nominated" → "It was nominated for"
 * Fix the misspelling of international on the award's name

Promotion and reception

 * "was released as album's" → "was released as the album's"
 * Wikilink greatest hits album
 * Allmusic → AllMusic with the wikilink
 * "boundaries of salsa" citing" → "boundaries of salsa", citing"
 * "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" → "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" with the wikilink
 * "Despite the latter's concern," → "Despite the editor's concern,"
 * Add a full-stop after Tropical Song of the Year
 * "It was recognized as" → "The track was recognized as"

Track listing

 * Shouldn't the titles be surrounded by speech marks?

Weekly charts

 * Wikilink Hot Latin Songs

Year-end charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this went smoothly like I planned! --K. Peake 09:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake Hope I got all of them in one go this time (fingers crossed) Erick (talk) 03:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I did some slight copy editing but this is good to go! --K. Peake 07:07, 10 February 2023 (UTC)