Talk:El Gallito/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Shall be taking on this review. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "on who El Gallitos ring persona," - Gallito's

Professional wrestling career

 * "El Gallito ("The Little Rooster") started his professional wrestling career as a mascota for El El Gallo" - the first "El" is redundant
 * "As a mascota, he portrayed a diminutive version of El Gallo, complete with the same rooster character as El Gallo." - and competed as the same rooster character as him.
 * Cockscomb does not need to begin with a capital letter
 * "As a mascota he would accompany El Gallo to the ring, designed mainly - was created primarily
 * "to appeal to kids" - more formal; children
 * "and help El Gallo portray" - and assist El Gallo to portray

Micro-Estrellas division (2017–present)

 * "and his fellow mascotas Mije and fellow Zacarias el Perico to help establish" - repetition of the word "fellow"
 * "Gallito, Mije, Angelito, and Chamuel took on Microman, Atomo, Guapito, and Zacarias . In the end, Microman pinned Chamuel to win the tournament while - Gallito, Mije, Angelito, and Chamuel took on Microman, Atomo, Guapito, and Zacarias, which saw Micropan pin Chamuel to win the tournament while Galliot was the fourth to be eliminated from the match.
 * "four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - Four weeks later, the Micro-Estrellas
 * "With the popularity of the Micro-Estrellas" - think there maybe a word missing from this piece of text

Independent circuit (2017–present)

 * "While working for CMLL, El Gallito, like all CMLL workers" - repetition of working/workers
 * "While working for CMLL, El Gallito, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - too much repetition of the term "CMLL"
 * "His first non-CMLL match was on June 14, 2017. on a Promociones El Cholo show in Tijuana, Baja California," - the period in the middle of this sentence is unneeded
 * "which featured Gallito and Microman defeating Mije and Zacarias." - saw