Talk:Elacatinus puncticulatus

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2021 and 1 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Phnatko, Ifrenette. Peer reviewers: Reidtosa, Mikehuang99.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:34, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 1 one external link on Elacatinus puncticulatus. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20140627000000/http://www.iucnredlist.org to http://www.iucnredlist.org

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at ).

Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 21:43, 21 December 2016 (UTC)

BI260 Review
Hi there,

The page looks really good--it reads well and there's a ton of information that I'm sure wasn't there before. Because of that, I only have nit-picky feedback to give you. Most of these are grammatical: (1. It looks like there might be an extra word in the second sentence of your lead section (just drop the "of" or "from"). (2. I would change "they'll" to "they will" in the second paragraph of "Growth and Reproduction" just to stay consistent. (3. Again, these comments are all super specific little things, but there's an unitalicized "E" in the first paragraph of your "Growth and Reproduction" section: "Male E. puncticulatus clean the dead eggs after hatching..." (4. Add a space in "E.puncticulatus" in this sentence: "Elacatinus as a genus typically displays a terminal mouth position that corresponds to their roles as cleaner fish, but E.puncticulatus specifically display a heterodont dentition as well, meaning they have more than one type of tooth morphology" (p.2 of "Description"). (5. Finally, most wiki articles I see place the citations after the period of a sentence. Everything else looks great! Thanks for your feedback, too!

--Reidtosa (talk) 23:33, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi,

Nice revisions! Your paper is very detailed and informative. The only tiny thing would be to make sure the in-text citations are formatted correctly. Make sure the citation immediately follows the period and to put a space between the citation and the start of the next sentence. i.e- in your 'Aquarium Trade' section: "... but E. puncticulatus is not on the list.[12]E. puncticulatus is referred to as marine tropical fish in reports.", add a space between [12] and E. puncticulatus. Great job!

Mikehuang99 (talk) 01:54, 17 April 2021 (UTC)Michael Huang