Talk:Elana Maryles Sztokman

Suggestions for further content cleanup
The page as I found it today was laid out like a c.v. and tagged with the "Reads like a press release" template (which I removed after my edits). To improve conformance to the Wikipedia Manual of Style, I revised headings and subheadings to organize content. I also trimmed excessive detail and matter not directly related to the subject herself. More remains to be done: e.g. the accomplishments of the Jewish Orthodox Feminist Alliance during Sztokman's term as executive director should be summarized here and details moved to the JOFA page; each book Sztokman authored could be described with a summary of its significant content and critical reception, rather than the existing quoted review blurbs and their sources which could remain as references with external links. The subject is notable and the page would be more readable in a streamlined version. -- Deborahjay (talk) 15:41, 7 January 2017 (UTC)