Talk:Elayne Jones/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CurryTime7-24 (talk · contribs) 19:05, 13 August 2023 (UTC)


 * I will begin my review of this GA nomination Tuesday (PDT). —CurryTime7-24 (talk)19:05, 13 August 2023 (UTC)


 * @Ibjaja055 Checking in to see whether you were still interested in getting this GA review off the ground. Although my deadline for you to respond was August 22, I waited three more weeks just in case. However, if I don't hear a reply by September 17 (PDT), I'll have no choice but to close this review as failed. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 04:42, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I have done the recommended corrections. Ibjaja055 (talk) 09:09, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @CurryTime7-24 Ibjaja055 (talk) 09:09, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Give me until tomorrow, please. Been busier than I expected. Thank you for your patience! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 00:25, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your time. Ibjaja055 (talk) 16:07, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @CurryTime7-24 pls, I am still waiting for the feedback. Ibjaja055 (talk) 07:22, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
 * My friend, I'm very sorry. Tomorrow for sure I will begin to work with you. This last week proved to be busy. On top of that, I had a DYK and GA nomination to attend to. Please don't think I've forgotten you. Thank you for your patience. I truly appreciate it. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 04:45, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for your time. @CurryTime7-24 Ibjaja055 (talk) 13:16, 24 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your patience. Looking over the article, I see that many of the concerns in my review remain. Among those that I find most pressing are the need to add further details regarding her career and teaching. As it stands, the article only skims through most of Jones' career. The years 1949 to 1972, for example, are summed up in 3/4 of a paragraph; her years in San Francisco, the most important of her life, take up less than that. Because of her activism and her groundbreaking career, a reader may wonder whether Jones was politically active or connected at all. Was she? There are more points above in my GA review from August. If you haven't yet done so, please take a moment to read through it. If you need further clarification on these, please feel free to ping me. I'll be more available this week. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 05:17, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Pinging @Ibjaja055 as a courtesy. Hoping to wrap up this GA review soon. Thanks! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 18:00, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

Apologies
I am still interested and I hope to meet the requirements before the deadline. Thank you @CurryTime7-24 Ibjaja055 (talk) 19:06, 15 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Good to hear! I'll reply more in depth to you tomorrow. :) —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 23:42, 15 September 2023 (UTC)