Talk:Elba Damast

Maximustsou's Peer Review
The biography is good; however, it could include more detail about her and her life. The artwork descriptions could be improved by providing more detail and descriptions of the artworks. The solo and group exhibition summary is great because it helps readers recognize how many exhibitions she has had. Overall, the profile could be improved by adding a lot more detail about the artist herself and more about her life. Along with that, more description in the artworks part. Everything else is great though! Dtsen002 (talk) 23:38, 10 May 2019 (UTC)Daisy Tseng