Talk:Eleanor Furneaux Smith

Draft feedback
Phbrownacmorg (talk) 03:05, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Wait&mdash;I asked you to do your drafting in the sandbox, not on the live page itself!
 * + Some good material added!
 * - Still fairly short. I think you're around 500-600 words when everything's put together.
 * + Stub material got added to the sandbox&mdash;good!
 * + Contributions from all three of you (although not all on the same page).
 * + Good use of citations!
 * Suggestions for improvement:
 * Put everything together on the sandbox page. Then develop on the sandbox page.  Work with the live Wikipedia article later.
 * You'll need to flesh this out more. We can discuss how you might do that.