Talk:Eleanor Jones

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hlenhard, Agmctaggart, Amber forget. Peer reviewers: Jburyn, MMiller13.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:35, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback on WGST 3991 proposal
Excellent list of resources. The existing article needs more inline citations. You may need to reorganized some of the content. Estregger 00:34, 1 February 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Estregger (talk • contribs)

Peer review feedback
Great article! Yay! We noticed a that there are a lot of in-line citations missing in the first two sections (early life and career sections). We checked the revision history and noted that much of it was information that was already in the article, but one way to improve it would be to find sources for the previously added information and add in-line citations. We also consolidated your reference list so that the same source did not appear more than once in the list. Another suggestion would be to call the Career section something like Career and Personal Life so that the personal information found in the section seems more in place. Otherwise, certain sentences, for example "Following a divorce.." seem a bit jarring. Overall, really great! Yay!

Jill and Michaela Jburyn (talk) 17:36, 1 March 2018 (UTC)