Talk:Electra Heart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: (CA)Giacobbe (talk · contribs) 02:50, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Hey, Wiki! I'll be reviewing this article, one of my favorite albums! -- Gia co bbe  talk 02:50, 9 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Non-reviewer comments
 * "Their efforts resulted in a concept album (...)" — The only person that says Electra Heart is actually conceptual is a BBC Music writer, not the artist herself (Marina & The Diamonds). This should be rephrased or removed unless you come up with a source in which Diamandis says so herself (if I do say so myself, if I do say so myself).
 * Several reviews recognize Electra Heart as a concept album, and even though Diamandis doesn't explicitly state that it is, she has acknowledged that the character "Electra Heart" discusses stereotypical American culture. I think it would be alright to keep the mention of a concept album, although if it is a sticking point then I will certainly reconsider.


 * "Diamandis intended to transition (...)" — this isn't proved by any source. The only thing that the sources say is that Electra Heart is a transition from the new wave styles (plus, later on the Composition section, you should include indie pop as well, with a source from The Family Jewels article...)
 * ✅, reworded.


 * I think it would be interesting to have a "Visuals" section (see Beyoncé) where the synopsis of each music video for this era is mildly addressed just to give the reader a (kind of) in-depth look at this era's story. There's much more to the Electra Heart era; you know it.
 * ✅, great idea! I don't know why I didn't think of this earlier!

Overall, good job! I have to listen to this album, I've been listening to "Power & Control" (congrats on the GA!), "How to Be a Heartbreaker" and "Electra Heart" (the song) recently.  prism  △ 22:40, 9 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your feedback! I've known about Marina for a while but I've only just started listening to her music; I wish that I started listening earlier! WikiRedactor (talk) 23:57, 9 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Good work again! This article is perfect as it is right now. Congratulations  prism  △ 09:55, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good, thanks for the help, Prism, Electra Heart is now a GA!-- Gia co bbe  talk 14:31, 11 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you both for your help! WikiRedactor (talk) 15:25, 11 May 2014 (UTC)