Talk:Electron/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.'' The article looks excellent in general, as your articles do. Ceran →(cheer→chime →carol) 03:02, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Prose
This prose is excellent, but a few things remain: Etymology:
 * The English name electron is a combination of the word electric and the suffix -on, with the latter now used to designate a subatomic particle.. - Unclear, do you mean to note that protons and neutrons end in -on?

Observation:
 * This allows very precise measurements to be made of the particle properties. - Add 'for' in front of very.
 * Measurements allowed the magnetic moment the electron to be measured to a precision of eleven digits, which, in 1980, was a greater accuracy than for any other physical constant.[132] - Fragment, did you mean to put a comma after moment?

Alright, that seems to be it. ₪ Ceran →(cheer→chime →carol) 12:46, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I hope I have addressed these to your satisfaction.&mdash;RJH (talk) 17:15, 11 January 2009 (UTC)