Talk:Electron backscatter diffraction/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Keresluna (talk · contribs) 16:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Ok, I'll review this chemistry article, but might be a little slow in doing it. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Grammar
Feel free to reject these suggestions as you see fit. Keres🌕Luna edits! 17:19, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * 'grain structure, grains orientation,' → 'grain structure, grain orientation,' ✅
 * 'wavelength dispersive X-ray spectroscopy (WDS)' →'wavelength-dispersive X-ray spectroscopy (WDS)' ✅

Pattern formation and collection

 * 'compact lens which focuses the image' → 'compact lens that focuses the image'
 * 'intersections form what are known as Kikuchi patterns or electron backscatter patterns' → 'intersections form what is known as Kikuchi patterns or electron backscatter patterns' ✅
 * 'to the crystal orientation (based upon their interplanar angles).' → 'to the crystal orientation (based on their interplanar angles).' ✅
 * 'one must use a many beam dynamical' → 'one must use a many-beam dynamical' ✅
 * 'EBSP quality is sensitive to the surface preparation' → 'EBSP quality is sensitive to surface preparation' ✅
 * 'do not mention a definition, or do not even present' → 'do not mention a definition or do not even present' ✅

Orientation and phase mapping

 * 'leading methods of the indexing performed by most' → 'leading methods of indexing performed by most' ✅
 * 'algorithms and calculations, but is essential' → 'algorithms and calculations but is essential' ✅
 * 'each of these methods are cumbersome' → 'each of these methods is cumbersome' ✅
 * 'Recent development of AstroEBSD and PCGlobal' → 'The recent development of AstroEBSD and PCGlobal' ✅

Strain measurement

 * 'measured geometrical shifts from in the pattern' → 'measured geometrical shifts in the pattern' ✅
 * 'by using Einstein summation convention with symmetry' → 'by using the Einstein summation convention with symmetry' ✅
 * 'which can produce an accurate measurements' → 'which can produce accurate measurements' (note: I don't think you need the wikilink to accurate in there) ✅ (left the wiki-link, accuracy and precision are normally confused)

Applications

 * 'average atomic number of the sample, and is used' → 'average atomic number of the sample and is used'
 * 'which has been introduced around 1970s, and' → 'which has been introduced around the 1970s, and' ✅
 * 'prepared for TKD using an FIB or ion milling machine' → 'prepared for TKD using a FIB or ion milling machine' ✅


 * thanks for the these comments. I left some of the Oxford commas FuzzyMagma (talk) 14:44, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Additional comments
The chart in the section 'Precision and development' needs proper axes, for an example, see lithium thiocyanate. Keres🌕Luna edits! 17:20, 2 August 2023 (UTC)


 * ✅ FuzzyMagma (talk) 15:44, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
 * @Keresluna you left 'y' outside, i.e., {{GAList/check|}y}. maybe you want to correct that FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:40, 7 August 2023 (UTC)