Talk:Electronic cigarette/Archive 20

RFC on Safety of Electronic Cigarettes
There is an RFC to see if summaries of pages or sections that were not originally part of that page should be added to that page. link AlbinoFerret  06:17, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Nature article
I came here from AN/I to add an external link, but the article is protected.



Glrx (talk) 18:48, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That looks like an excellent article, and great material for the Controversy section I proposed a while back.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:57, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Sounds reasonable Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 19:11, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

This article in the British Journal of General Practice makes many of the same points. I really do think we should mention how the e-cig issue has split the PH/TC community.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:55, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

And then of course there's this. Not an RS, I freely admit, but it demonstrates how many TC advocates are currently on the same side as the tobacco industry when it comes to e-cigs, and why the measures demanded by RJ Reynolds are so suspiciously similar to the measures proposed by the EU and FDA. Also it's funny, and this page could do with being lightened up a bit.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:00, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Let me reiterate my support for a Controversy section. This subject is highly controversial within the medical field and in the way it is reported by the media, and the lack of a dedicated section doesn't help the reader appreciate the scope of the controversy. TheNorlo (talk) 21:19, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's definitely something I think we need. There was opposition when I suggested it, but it seemed to be based on a misunderstanding of what I was proposing. The objectors seemed to think I wanted a section full of all the controversial statements rather than a description of the actual controversy. I'm not sure how valid an objection is when it's against something I didn't actually say, but I suspect not very.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:38, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

This may also be a good source for the controversy section Electronic cigarettes have a potential for huge public health benefit Hajek AlbinoFerret  01:49, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * would you be willing to create an outline version of what you view the controversy section as saying either here on the talk page or on the Sandbox? I can't picture one that would fit in the article but I'm willing to be proven wrong because I agree that the controversy should be in some article somewhere, although maybe not this one...SPACKlick (talk) 14:47, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yep. I'll do it later today, after I've salved my conscience by doing some actual paid work.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:52, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Hmm. There are now three developed countries where smoking prevalence is increasing. All have e-cig bans.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:12, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Style improvement urgently required
The way the article is written right now is atrocious. Much of it is rambling, meandering, ungrammatical and has appalling syntax. It urgently needs to be made concise and readable. This can be done without losing any useful information. For example this mess:

''"They appear to be similar in toxicity to other nicotine replacement products, but there is not enough data to draw conclusions.[11] The evidence suggests that the US Food and Drug Administration (FDA) accepted products such as a nicotine inhaler may be a safer way to give nicotine than e-cigarettes.[10] A July 2014 WHO report cautioned about potential risks of using electronic cigarettes. The report concluded that "the existing evidence shows that ENDS aerosol is not merely "water vapour" as is often claimed in the marketing for these products. ENDS use poses serious threats to adolescents and fetuses."[21] A 2014 systematic review concluded that the risks of e-cigarettes have been exaggerated by health authorities and stated that it is apparent that there may be some remaining risk accompanied with e-cigarette use, though the risk of e-cigarette use is likely small compared to smoking tobacco.[30] As of 2014, e-cigarettes cannot be regarded as harmless.[27] Until additional data is available on the topic, using e-cigarettes cannot be regarded as safe.[36] No long-term studies have shown that e-cigarettes are a "healthier alternative" to traditional cigarettes.[10] A 2014 review found no serious adverse effects reported in trials.[9]" ''

It could be replaced with this:

"Evidence suggests that e-cigs have similar toxicity to licensed nicotine replacement products, although it is not conclusive.123 No serious adverse effects from use have been reported in trials. 456 However several organizations believe that there may be unknown risks and that e-cigs cannot be regarded as safe on current evidence.789 Some tobacco control experts claim that these concerns are exaggerated.10"

It conveys exactly the same information but it's actually readable, and doesn't contradict itself every second sentence. Yes, there is disagreement on content, but we should all be able to agree that right now the style and writing is abysmal.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:51, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Yeah, much of the article is unreadable, worse than typical label fine print. Your sample summary is clear and accurate, however, if there was a will amongst the handful of arguing editors to be clear and accurate, the article wouldn't be in its current unreadable state, so I'm not sure why you are suggesting this as if it's something new. It seems the article is in the state it's meant to be in. It's hard to assume good faith on anyone's part. :) But, indeed, summarizing everything as you have done, and pouring the detail into a pro/con comparison table, would solve the problem, IF good faith editing prevailed. --Tsavage (talk) 03:19, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, I'm one of the arguing editors and I'd love to improve the standard of writing! It's certainly something new for this article; the trend has been to keep stuffing in as many repetitive statements as the internet has room for. I want it to reflect the current state of the science, not 2009 tests on a brand of cigalike that's no longer made or a WHO FAQ that exists only in the Wayback Machine, but right now I'd settle for syntax that doesn't make my blood boil.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 03:23, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I like the improvement, although in the third sentence we would probably need some reference to limited evidence or lack of long term evidence for accuracy. SPACKlick (talk) 14:41, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Like this?

"However several organizations believe that there may be unknown risks and that e-cigs cannot be regarded as safe while evidence remains limited."--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:06, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Spot On. I Support the proposed replacement paragraph as amended should an edit request be made. SPACKlick (talk) 15:09, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Professor John Britton's pro/con comparison table can be found here.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 03:28, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

I've been cleaning up the Safety of electronic cigarettes article. Here's what the Environmental impact section originally looked like:

"There is limited information available on the environmental issues in connection with the production, the usage, and the disposing of e-cigarettes.[13] There have been no studies formally looking at the impact of manufacturing or disposal of any components. [13] As of 2014, it is uncertain if the nicotine in e-liquid is United States Pharmacopeia-grade nicotine, a tobacco extract, or a synthetic nicotine when examining the environmental impact of how its made.[13] The emissions from making nicotine could be considerable from manufacturing if not appropriately controlled.[13] That there have been no studies looking at the enviromental impact of nicotine manufacturing.[13] Some e-cigarette brands state their products are ‘eco-friendly’ or ‘green’, even though in the absence of any supporting studies.[13] Some journalists contend that such marketing may raise sales and increase e-cigarette interest, particularly among minors.[13] It is unclear how many traditional cigarettes are comparable to using one e-cigarette for the average user when looking at the cost of manufacturing them..[13] It is unclear in the manner that energy and materials used for production equate if e-cigarettes and traditional cigarettes are assessed on the basis of use.[13] No studies on manufacturing impacts of e cigarettes has been done.[13] Even though some brands have began recycling services for their e-cigarette cartridges, the frequency of these services is unknown.[13] Some brands have also began recycling services for their e-cigarette batteries.[13]" Obviously, a barely readable and repetitive mess. Now it looks like this:

"No studies have been conducted into any environmental issues connected to the production, usage, and disposal of e-cigarettes or the nicotine they contain.[13] Some e-cigarette brands state their products are ‘eco-friendly’ or ‘green’.[13] It is unclear how many traditional cigarettes are comparable to one e-cigarette when looking at the cost of manufacturing them.[13] Some brands have began recycling services for their e-cigarette cartridges and batteries but the prevalence of recycling is not known.[13]" All the actual environmental information is there (sadly, there isn't actually any) but it's been condensed to the four sentences Tsavage suggests. I'm going to remove the third sentence unless someone can explain what it means and why it's important, but even without doing that it's far more readable and doesn't have the Wall Of TextTM appearance it did before. If we can do something similar for this article I think it would be a huge improvement.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:22, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I agree that's a massive improvement. I'd leave in the third sentence. It means that we don't have the information to compare the environmental impact of e-cigarettes with the conventional cigarettes they are replacing, because we don't know how many cigarettes each battery, coil, cartridge, tank, ml of e-juice etc. replaces. It's important because the consideration of direct comparison is inevitable. SPACKlick (talk) 14:39, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, I can tentatively agree with that. However going by the source the author seems to think that e-cigs have a lifetime of a few weeks. I've been using my Nemesis since last November, so it's replaced something like 16,400 cigarettes already. My weekly waste consists of a pinch of cotton wool and three inches of kanthal wire.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:50, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That's kind of the point. Some people throw out two disposable carto's and two bottles from e-juice every week and a battery lasts 3 months. On better devices a battery will last years, as will the clearo/tank, kanthal and cotton last a while and in small amounts and bottles are re-used to diy e-juice. Working out the environmental impact of e-cig use is difficult. That fact should be noted. SPACKlick (talk) 14:54, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The trouble is finding a source for that, although I agree that more advanced devices have a significantly lower impact. I used to throw out a dozen cigarette packs and a couple of hundred butts every week. No-brainer really.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:05, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I believe that the statement that assessing the relative environmental impact is difficult is sourced and we can't really say any more. I'm not dealbreakingly tied to the sentec but I await more voices in the discussion. SPACKlick (talk) 15:09, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Probably best to do it at the talk page for that article. I'm continuing to clean it up, making it readable without removing any sourced information for now. I'm also finding some deliberately misleading cites, unfortunately. Any help sorting it out would be welcome.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:43, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Current request for page protection
There has been a request to put the page back under protection by Doc James and Formerly 98. link AlbinoFerret  05:17, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That's an unfortunate coincidence, that you did it the day after a significant new review was released that calls for major changes and the removal of a lot of outdated claims.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:08, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Article protection for a month at a time seems excessive
Locking an article for an entire month at a time seems excessive. Is there precedent for this, is this a usual edit war remedy? I've read some of the talk page discussion, and it seems to be a handful of editors arguing intensely over points that are largely inconsequential to a general encyclopedia audience. The intro clearly explains that it's all new and the jury is out, the rest is haggling. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tsavage (talk • contribs) 00:54, 19 December 2014‎

How did this page get protected?
How did this latest page lock come about - I'm not familiar with the procedure - did an admin come along and just do it, or was it requested, if so, by whom? --Tsavage (talk) 03:10, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It was requested by Doc James and Formerly98.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 03:15, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It was requested by me. Comments by Doc James and others came later. The request was made with the goal of limiting edit warring.  I also requested the previous 2 protections.  The article needs everyone to try to calm down and try to work together rather than just engaging in an endless cycle of reversions and counter reversions. It was not done with the goal of "freezing" the article in a version favorable to one side or the other, and in fact I voted in favor of reverting QG's non-consensus edits performed just before the last protection, even though my opinions are closer to his than those he is fighting with. Formerly 98 (talk) 04:58, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I believe you; you do seem genuinely committed to building a consensus. Unfortunately it's had the effect of freezing the article in its current deplorable state. It's especially unfortunate that this happened the day the Cochrane review came out. If certain editors would actually try to work towards a consensus, rather than simply popping in to say "I disagree" every time a change was proposed, we might get somewhere. At the very least we might manage to clean up the writing so it no longer looks like it was written by throwing letters at the screen.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 05:08, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

This article is not difficult to fix, and could be one of the more timely and truly helpful pages on Wikipedia in the next few weeks and months.


 * Agree to reduce each of the current five subsections of health issues to max four-sentence summary, with no direct mentions of specific findings in the text, and multiple citations as required.
 * Create a pros/cons / controversy / opposing views section with a comparison table with subsections as required, to present pros and cons in summary/bullet-point form.


 * By actually doing that, the article WILL hold together, and with a decent example in place, should be easier to maintain/defend as necessary.


 * If anyone here is actually on the job, and the goal is to muddy the waters, well, you're doing great! :) --Tsavage (talk) 05:42, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Count me in. If we can get agreement on this it will vastly improve the article.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 06:01, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Moved the above to new section below to separate page fix proposal from other stuff. --Tsavage (talk) 21:35, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately vaping seems to be a topic that turns otherwise normal people into gibbering idiots. Three months ago Missouri passed a law banning e-cig sales to minors. It was supported by the tobacco industry and local e-cig vendors. It was opposed by - drum roll - Smoke-Free Missouri, the ACS and AHA. Tell me that happened in a sane world.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 06:04, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That Missouri legislation was quite a saga. It was opposed in large part because it explicitly didn't treat e-cigs as tobacco products, which is how many sceptics would like to see them classified. (Also, the tobacco cos. tend to like state-level regulation because it's much easier to concentrate lobbying in one capitol than deal with a hundred little communities that may be much more hasty to ban something they're suspicious of.) Barnabypage (talk) 09:50, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Luckily law isn't (always) made on the basis of what people who are wrong would like. Whether you love e-cigs or loathe them, if you think they're a tobacco product you're a moron.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:07, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think a better way to put that would be, Whether you think they are a tobacco product or not, we should all agree that they need to be kept out of the hands of kids. AlbinoFerret  16:58, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Agreed, which is why I find it odd (and morally repellant, but never mind) that these groups are willing to leave them available to minors while they squabble about definitions. However I do think they should be available to teenage smokers; why should people have to smoke until they're 18 before being allowed to give up? This is the best - perhaps the only - argument for having a medically licensed e-cig that could be prescribed. And after all under-18s are allowed to buy NRT, which a) contain nicotine and b) don't work.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:38, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This is one area we will have to disagree. I think that all nicotine products should be kept from people under 18, they shouldnt have tobacco cigarettes. I think anyone found guilty of giving any nicotine product to kids should get a life sentance without the possibility of parole. That kids are using any nicotine product is a shame and it would be better if they were forced to go cold turkey and have to give up all nicotine products. E-cigs and all products that contain recreational nicotine are an adult products. AlbinoFerret  19:48, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * WTF? It's only nicotine. Sure, I'd prefer kids didn't start using it, but jail time? Why not jail parents who give their kids coffee, too? Nicotine is being demonized far too much. It's a pretty safe drug by any sane standard, as even the MHRA agree. Anyway the fact is that no, kids shouldn't have cigarettes, and they're not allowed to buy them, but they get them anyway. And if they want a quit method that actually works it should be available to them on prescription.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:08, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's about to become illegal in the UK to buy e-cigs for anyone under 18. My friend Lorien Jollye says that if she found her kids were smoking she'd buy them e-cigs and persuade them to switch. Should she go to jail for LIFE, just for practicing harm reduction? Sorry, that's absurd.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:09, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Discussion of page protection and Talk page refactoring
In the wiki spirit of refactoring, I've moved the following comment to its own more clearly described section. --Tsavage (talk) 22:26, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * (re: section Proposal to fix article) I think the idea is that you work on it, not wait on it and vote. Indefinite protection is not a solution. Open editing is fundamental to Wikipedia, therefore extraordinary measures like protection are just that, extraordinary. For editors so committed to the topic, it should be a simple matter to summarize a few paragraphs, neutrally and without specific study references. That would be the first step. --Tsavage (talk) 22:06, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Well with a month of protection left, we are going to have to see what is is and see where consensus lies before the edit is carried out. I thought the answer to whats stopping someone from dumping POV into it once its done would be nothing. The problem is that this page is plagued with people who dont discuss things first, and that ends up leading to edit wars. AlbinoFerret  22:12, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Please dont move comments of other editors to new sections. AlbinoFerret  22:28, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I'm simply attempting to keep a section on point. That is what a wiki style open editing is for. This isn't a court transcript, I believe the idea is to discuss things. Threads tend to veer off topic and the central point gets lost. As long as there is nothing deceptive going on, there should be no problem with refactoring for clarity if the discussion is truly in good faith. --Tsavage (talk) 22:36, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The problem is, I think my reply was on point, and moving my post here has disrupted the existing discussion and the issues I pointed out. I believe you may have done it with good intentions. But please do not move my posts to other sections. AlbinoFerret  22:48, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * We're talking about the section I started, Proposal to fix article. Page protection and what might happen to the article at some future time are not relevant, so I created a new, relevant section for clarity. Now, your discussion of refactoring has taken the Discussion of page protection off topic, so I've updated this section's heading to accommodate both topics. --Tsavage (talk) 22:59, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Chocrane Review found statistically significant difference between EC and placebo
"Participants using an EC were more likely to have abstained from smoking for at least six months compared with participants using placebo EC (RR 2.29, 95% CI 1.05 to 4.96; placebo 4% versus EC 9%; 2 studies; GRADE: low). " I propose writing in the titile sec. According to a Cochraine Review of the clinical trials measuring the effects of e-cigarettes on cessation, participants using an e-cigarette were more likely to have abstained from smoking for at least six months compared with participants using placebo EC, but the evidence is limited.Zvi Zig (talk) 10:07, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Its an odd comparison, its not comparing electronic cigarettes to quitting cold turkey, but comparing e juice with nicotine to e juice without. But this seems to accurately reflect what the article says, and I have no objection to adding it. It wasn't clear to me exactly where you want to add it, I would not give this article vastly more weight than others. Formerly 98 (talk) 10:26, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that if we wanted to include it in the article it should go in the smoking cessation section. But you are right, let's not give this article more weight than others.... At least not more than Grana, i.e. not more than 25 citations.TheNorlo (talk) 11:14, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It is not at all an odd comparison considering the fact that the only way we know nicotine patches and gum work is through comparisons to placebo patches & gum. Furthermore, studies show that even placebo EC reduce craving, so the results are seriously underrepresented. Furthermore, the trials on which the review was based on tested only short term EC use; participants were not supplied or instructed to use EC for more than 12 weeks after quit-day.Zvi Zig (talk) 12:11, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Another point, Cochraine Review is considered the gold standard in medical reviews, they have many standards in place in order to prevent bias, thus there's certainly reason to give this article vastly more weight when it comes to a highly controversial subject.Zvi Zig (talk) 12:28, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree, the Cochraine Reviews are high quality and should be added where the review speaks on a topic. AlbinoFerret  12:33, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * But the article has now been locked again, which seems to be the pattern when the MED crew feel under pressure.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:10, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, let me respond to that.
 * The article has been protected 3 times now, and it was a different uninvolved admin who did it each time. Might be worth thinking about why this keeps happening.
 * I've requested all three protections. But I do not consider myself a "medical editor" according to your definition.  IN fact I voted in support of removing QG's edits to the article just prior to the last protection, because they were made without consensus.
 * Ultimately this is a war in which the two sides are equally matched, and can go on reverting and counterreverting forever. Consensus is the only way we will get anything done here.  I suggest that comments on other editors like the one above do not help facilitate such a consensus. Formerly 98 (talk) 14:18, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The big question is, why are there two sides? This article is very heavily skewed towards the opinions of Stan Glantz, who is not a scientist or medical researcher; he is an activist with no medical qualifications. No health risks of e-cigs have been found, but you won't get that impression here. The article is full of hypotheticals and "we don't know", even when actual research has been done.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:24, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Here's an example. The Cochrane report is cited, "but was based on a small number of studies." So is it OK to append the cites of Grana/Glantz with "but was based on a New York Times article, a cross-sectional study that couldn't support the claims he made and a couple of his own articles from 1995."? I suspect a few editors would find that unacceptable. So why is the Cochrane review being deprecated so much? Unlike Grana/Glantz it is based on actual research.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:27, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree you have posted some things that show you have an open mind on the fighting here. But that vote was basically undone today. The spotlight seems to be on one person but it appears from the section right below that discussion is being avoided and I can point to quite a few places FergusM1970 is discussing things. AlbinoFerret  14:36, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * As Cochraine is considered the most important meta-analysis on any medical question, it makes no sense that its results should not be reflected in the title section.Zvi Zig (talk) 16:43, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, we disagree on that to some extent. They have taken positions well outside the mainstream on many issues, and for example their conclusions on the anti influenza drug Tamiflu have been explicitly rejected by the US CDC, the Infectious Disease Society of America, the European CDC, and the UK NICE.  Ditto their opinion on the influenza vaccine.  They are one voice of many, and there is a consensus to that extent on the MEDRS Talk page.  Respectfully (truly, not being sarcastic), if you try to push that source as the the TruthTM you will only attract more medical editors to this page, and I don't get the impression that you want that. Formerly 98 (talk) 17:41, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think anyone's pushing to regard Cochrane as The Truth, but it is the best evidence currently available. It also agrees with a huge mass of anecdotal evidence from thousands of ex-smokers who quit using e-cigs. If they're not an effective cessation tool how come 700,000 people in the UK successfully used them to quit?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:45, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Agree with Formerly 98 and the MEDRS Talk page: Cochrane is one voice among many. Cloudjpk (talk) 10:26, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I in no way advocate for the use of Cochraine as as the TruthTM, however you cannot argue that its due respect should not be given. It is not one voice among many; Cochraine reviews are highly respected for a reason and has standards set against bias . Chronologically Cochraine is now also the most recent review and has authors have mentioned and addressed other major reviews.

Taxes on E-Cigarettes
Taxes on e-cigarettes are relatively under-developed as the products are still young. Minnesota and North Carolina have actually levied a tax on e-cigarette tobacco vapor products such as “juice”; Minnesota is at 95% of the wholesale value. and republican Governor Pat McCrory in North Carolina has levied a similar, yet much more modest, tax of $0.05 per milliliter. Though the taxes have some opposition, both democrats and republicans have generally accepted them. New Jersey governor Chris Christie (R-NJ) headlined a significant sin tax on electronic cigarettes in May 2014. Also, Philadelphia is considering a $2.00 tax on e-cigarettes where revenue would go to a general fund predominately used for schools.

But not all states are passing e-cigarette taxes. In 2013, Utah defeated HB372, which was a tax increase on e-cigarettes and nicotine candies and made it illegal to sell to minors less than 19 years old. These taxes are being met with much concern. Opponents say the blossoming industry will be suppressed by the high taxes, and without much evidence of negative health effects, the taxes are seen as unnecessary. Proponents of the tax claim e-cigarette flavors are enticing children to use e-cigarettes, ultimately undoing decades of anti-smoking headway. Many lawmakers imposing these taxes cite youth smoking deterrence and monetary aid in offsetting the public cost of medical care for ill-fated smokers, similar to the big tobacco bonds from the ‘90s. Taxes might shift tobacco sales to online or out of state. When Utah increased its tax on (traditional) tobacco win 2010, data showed smuggling across state lines as a way to dodge the imposed tax. The same phenomenon is happening in the e-cigarette market. If taxes are imposed, brick and mortar vendors will face online competition with lower overhead costs.

Worldwide Acceptance of E-Cigarettes
Throughout the world, electronic cigarettes are impacting local governments. The following chronology exemplifies the tumultuous beginnings of this blossoming industry. The conventional tobacco market, as we know, it is on its heels. For example, in 2009, Brazil issued regulations to prohibit the sale and import of electronic cigarettes and electronic cigarette advertising restrictions. On March 27th, 2009, Canada banned the sale of electronic cigarettes containing nicotine products. In June 2009, Panama banned the import of electronic cigarettes products. In July 2009, the Israeli Ministry of Health banned the import and sale of electronic cigarettes. In January 2010, the Maltese consumer electronic cigarette ban in public places, and to prohibit the sale of electronic cigarettes to minors. In July 2010, Singapore introduced regulations to prohibit the import and sale of electronic cigarettes. In May 2011, Argentina enacted regulations that prohibit the import, sale and advertising of electronic cigarettes. In November 2011, the Greek electronic banned cigarette sales and consumption.

Currently in the United States, only e-cigarettes that are marketed for therapeutic purposes are currently regulated by the FDA Center for Drug Evaluation and Research (CDER). The rules being considered by the F.D.A. in the United States do not address where e-cigarettes can be smoked.

A 2014 study submitted by the National Institute of Public Health of Japan (AFP) Japanese Health Ministry states that “Electronic cigarettes contain up to 10 times more cancer-causing substances than regular tobacco”.

Convenience stores are accountable for more than half of the sale of e-cigarettes. Smoke shops command 22% of e-cigarette sales, and online e-tailers account for about 20%, and 2% are sold in other channels. Since 2008, electronic cigarette prices began to decline, with sales doubling each year. According to the U.S. “Times” recently reported that sales of electronic cigarettes is less than 1% of the tobacco market. But over the past four years, the growth of electronic cigarettes is very robust, doubling every year. Wells Fargo analyst Bonnie Herzog says that, "as technology continues to improve, the electronic cigarette market will exceed real cigarette market in the next 10 years. Sales of e-cigarettes are estimated to surpass one billion dollars by 2017". The future of the electronic cigarette market is expected to reach 30% annual growth rate; and more than half of e-cigarette buyers are repetitive smokers, rather than new users. The biggest attractions of electronic cigarettes are perceived lower health risks, lower prices, and the “freshness” of vapor compared to smoke.


 * These both appear to be better suited to the Legal Status page. AlbinoFerret  01:10, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, is this a proposed addition to the article? If so I agree with AF; it should be under Legal Status.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:12, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * There is a health claim about Japan sourced to a news article, it needs to be a MEDRS secondary source for a health claim. AlbinoFerret  01:39, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's just that shit about e-cigs containing ten times as much formaldehyde as actual cigarettes. It's not in the study; the highest level actually found was one-sixth of what's in a cigarette. It doesn't belong anywhere on the internet, never mind Wikipedia. AFP are currently being sued for distributing it because it's utter mince.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:44, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Just a few comments here:
 * - Yeah, the Japanese "ten times" study doesn't seem to have been given a great deal of credence.
 * - The Canadian situation is fuzzier than an actual "ban". (There is no regulation at federal level and it's only just starting at provincial level, but Health Canada has taken it upon itself to regulate, possibly without authority.)
 * - Australia is worth mentioning as a major market with a ban on nicotine-containing e-cigs (and, in one or two states, all e-cig equipment).
 * - Similarly in the Nordic nations.
 * - But most "bans" are bans on sale not on possession or use.
 * - The retail pattern (C-stores vs. tobacconists vs. supermarkets vs. vape stores etc.) differs a lot among countries. I can dig out some high-level figures over the Christmas holiday if we want to explore this in detail, though probably a few illustrative ones will suffice. Barnabypage (talk) 11:30, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Well, it's not been given much credence because the study doesn't say that. The highest formaldehyde level the study found in an e-cig was one-sixth of that in the cigarette.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 12:09, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Yeah, it was other research by the same Japanese team that found the "ten times" result, but only in one case, so it was almost certainly an anomaly. In any case it's not been taken seriously by the people worth taking seriously! Barnabypage (talk) 15:14, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The main problem with the Japanese findings is they are not in any peer reviewed journal, not as a primary, not as a review. There is no MEDRS source for a medical claim because of that. All we have are news sites and they cant be used for medical claims. AlbinoFerret  16:02, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Third generation PV' and Mechanical Mods.
The third generation subsection of the construction section currently includes mechanical mods. This is inaccurate as mechs have been around way before third gen devices. I don't think I'm wrong by saying that they've been around before second gen mods. I think we should erase all mention of them in the third gen section and treat them seperatly in the section that is already there anyways.... Maybe move the mech section out of the power section and place it right under the generations section. TheNorlo (talk) 10:50, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * You're right that they've been around longer than Gen 2 but most of the vapers I know class them as Gen 3 anyway, because they use standard batteries and you can adjust the power by simply spending nine hours sticking bits of wire into the end of your finger and losing o-rings.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 10:57, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Damn it's complicated. RHFOS has just pointed out that mechs are Gen 3 if you install a Kick. Thinking about it I'd tend to agree with you; we should break them out of Gen 3 and treat them separately.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:02, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * More opinions; RHFOS says they're definitely not Gen 3 without a Kick; Dave Dorn says they're effectively Gen 1 power sources.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:04, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It makes no sense of having them in third gen, regardless of what Atty people use with them... I mean, you can plug a quad clapton coil plumevail RDA on an 650mAh ego and it'll work as long as the resistance is right.... That still doesn't make ego's third gen devices..... I strongly oppose mech being classify as third gen. TheNorlo (talk) 11:12, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Why not making it easy by treating them their own section.TheNorlo (talk) 11:13, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * On a side note Fergus.... You must be extremely happy about the incredible advances made in clearomizer tech if it takes you 9 hours to wrap a coil. TheNorlo (talk) 11:20, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I may have exaggerated slightly for dramatic effect; I have a handy little coiling jig from SlowTech and can knock up a new Taifun coil in about two minutes. I do tend to stick the end of the wire into my finger though. Anyway I take back what I said about most of the vapers I know thinking mechs are Gen 3; apparently none of them now do. The key feature of Gen 3 is being given as VV/VW. I tend to agree, to be honest. Dave Dorn says Gen 4 is Gen 3 features plus temp control, and he runs Vapour Trails TV so he must be an RS.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:27, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Haha.. But I have to agree with that. Gen 4 is gen 3 plus temp control. So... What do you think, get rid of mechs in third gen and treat them as separate devices? They really are when you think about it.TheNorlo (talk) 11:31, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The consensus seems to be as follows:


 * 1 - Unregulated battery (so cigalikes and mechs)
 * 2 - Regulated battery
 * 3 - Adjustable power delivery, either through VV or VW
 * 4 - Adjustable power delivery and temp control.

Obviously if we call mechs Gen 1 it's going to need some major revisions to most of what we've already said, because apart from being unregulated they have nothing in common with cigalikes.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:34, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * My brain is melting here. I agree; they're a separate class, outside the generation structure.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:38, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Apparently Lyne Dawkins has written something about it. Trying to get a link now. That would give us an RS for whatever she says.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:41, 20 December 2014 (
 * Sure, lets see what she says. But regardless, it makes zero sense calling them gen 1. Mechs have had an evolution of their own. Would you really dump something like the 3000$ Otto Carter mods in the same category as Blu?TheNorlo (talk) 11:47, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Nope. By a narrow definition of battery regulation you could, but there's no comparison in performance terms.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 11:51, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

I would counter that no cigalike as ever had a battery capable of safely discharging 30 amps like the one commonly used in mechs.... They are clearly a class of their own.TheNorlo (talk) 11:56, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * And then add to that the ability to Kick them. Which cigalike can be kicked again? Class of their own.TheNorlo (talk) 11:59, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I don't agree with calling them Gen 1. It fits one definition, but it's not useful.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 12:01, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

I'll clean up the section when I will have access to something else than my phone! TheNorlo (talk) 12:05, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Darn, I missed out on a lot of good discussion while I was sleeping. I would agree that mech's fall somewhere in the second to third generation but I was only able to find citations that placed them in the third. The problem with mechs is we are talking about two different things joined together. The original hand made modified hardware (flashlights as battery compartments) that came to be known as mods and were mostly mechanical (but not always) were in response to the poor performance of ciagalikes and started the second generation. The high end manufactured mech mods are really part of the third generation because of improvements over the hand made devices, they are fully mechanical and designed to go with third generation rebildables in order to fire low ohm coils. AlbinoFerret 12:45, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Wouldn't you agree that right now, Mechanicals are a category on their own, apart from the "generation scheme". They evolved, as you said, from the modding community but not in the same way as the other electronic mods. From crappy materials to silver plated copper contacts, from ugly contraption to works of art. TheNorlo (talk) 13:45, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think they fit into the generational time line, as all devices should fit some place, but that its hard to source exactly where. I think of the generations section as a time line or a progression. I think mechanicals and the early mods are really two different devices, one rising from the other. I think the best place to separate them is in the Mechanical mods section. Perhaps mentioning that modified hardware is in second generation and higher end mechanicals are in third in the generation section. The problem is we have a source for the third generation, we dont for the second. AlbinoFerret  13:53, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I had a chat with the Redhead Full Of Steam and Dave Dorn from VTTV earlier. They reckon the requirement to be counted as Gen 3 is VV or VW capability, so a mech is only Gen 3 if it's Kicked.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:16, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

OK, here's a presentation from Dr Dawkins. It's not MEDRS but that doesn't matter as it's not being used for health claims. Not a lot of detail in it but I'll look for more later.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:23, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * To Albino: I think we are saying the same thing. Let's talk about mechs in the mechanical section and let's avoid mentioning them in the "generation 1, 2 or 3" of the article. I think it would be simpler that way since it is not clear where they belong, Gen 1 is usually thought of to be cig a likes and third gen are perceived as vv\vw devices with electronic battery safety features, mechs are none of that. And I do not agree that high end mechs are better or different than consumer grade ones. The 40$ magneto performs just as well as a authentic Chi You... Kinda. TheNorlo (talk) 14:35, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think they should be mentioned in Generations, all devices should fit into at least one generation. Its a section on the progression of the hardware so everything will fit some place. But the subtle differences should be explained in the individual sections on each component. So I would add modified hardware like flashlights as battery compartments to second generation, if we have a source, and manufactured mechanicals to third generation. In the Mechanical mods section we should go into more detail on how one led to the other. Modifieds because of poor first generation hardware are second generation. I think manufactured mechanicals are third generation because they were a result of the need to fire sub ohm third generation atomizers that variables could not at the time. AlbinoFerret  15:05, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * here is a better location for that Dawkins info, it fits as a reliable source. link AlbinoFerret
 * Fergus: Unless I missed it, I see no reference to mechs in there.
 * Albino: I agree that it should go in the generation section. But what do you think if we do it something like this? TheNorlo (talk) 15:50, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think Mechanicals should stay in the third generation, the example removed them. I think once sourced Modified's should be in second, and the current section on Mechanicals is renamed to Modified's and Mechanicals that explains how one led into the other. Mechanicals should be in one generation section, at present we have a source that places them there. AlbinoFerret  15:55, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

How about something like this.... Let's leave them in the 3rd gen section. But not intertwined in the same paragraph as electronic 3rd gen devices like it was before. Let's have a seperate paragraph, in the 3rd gen section dedicated to mechanicals.... They are, at the end of the day, different than every other types of ecigs. TheNorlo (talk) 16:02, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That sounds like a plan, do you want to work up some wording on it? AlbinoFerret  16:04, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Will do but not right now. I'm not from, but I am in Australia right now and it is 3h07 am on Sunday morning ;) TheNorlo (talk) 16:08, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sounds like a plan, Ill see if I can work something up in the meantime that we can tweak. I organized the section in my sandbox a little link perhaps it will help as a starting point. AlbinoFerret  17:06, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * How about "Mech mods lack third generation features such as battery regulation and VV/VW. However they are generally regarded as belonging to Gen 3 because they allow the user to customize the vape, albeit in different ways." Ways that involve wire, blowtorches and fiendishly complicated calculators instead of pressing the "power up" button.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:00, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * And I agree that price doesn't really make any difference to the vape from a mech. I have a clone Stingray X and it actually has less voltage drop than an original.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:01, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The problem is sourcing that line. I want to improve the sourcing of the Components section. Generations is in pretty good shape. If you can source all that I dont have an issue with it. AlbinoFerret  19:06, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

I would like to add temperature control and puff regulation to the Variable section with this reference. Its in the second paragraph. Its foruth generation, and will eventually be in that section when created, but we need more information to start a 4th generation subsubsection. AlbinoFerret  19:10, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposal to expand the lede without changing other sentences in the lede
An electronic cigarette (e-cig or e-cigarette), personal vaporizer (PV) or electronic nicotine delivery system (ENDS) is a battery-powered vaporizer which has a similar feel to tobacco smoking. There are different generations of devices that look quite different. They range from devices that look like cigarettes to larger models that do not resemble smoking implements. They do not produce cigarette smoke but rather an aerosol (mist), which is frequently but inaccurately referred to as vapor. Electronic cigarettes do not contain tobacco, although they do use nicotine from tobacco plants. In general, they have a heating element which atomizes a liquid solution known as e-liquid. E-liquids are usually a mixture of propylene glycol, glycerin, nicotine, and flavorings. Others have similar ingredients but without nicotine. The user activates the e-cigarette by either pushing a button while inhaling or, in the case of automatic batteries, by puffing on the device. The device then produces a vapor that can be inhaled by the user. QuackGuru ( talk ) 07:18, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose Let's leave the lede for now; there are more important problems to sort out.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:57, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose The lead is supposed to be short and easy to read, a summary of the important points. It does not need to be expanded, but made smaller. AlbinoFerret  12:14, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose We have already established that there is consensus for either a new uses section and are currently working towards consensus on this. This proposal is just a muddying of the waters. I am baffled as to the point in it.Levelledout (talk) 15:41, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose but not because of the new sentences The lede is heavy enough as it is. I would like to see it shortened. A few sentences about the devices themselves, what you wrote there is fine with me, 1 or 2 sentences about each other points max.... Not this endless medical and legislative rambling that we have right nowTheNorlo (talk) 15:53, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Maybe we could just say something as simple as There is considerable debate about the implications of e-cigarettes for personal and public health, and about how to regulate them? That might be preferable to trying to shoehorn even the salient points of some quite complex topics into a sentence or two. Barnabypage (talk) 16:02, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It sounds good, but its a constant battle as one editor continually tries to expand and complicate the lede. Its been cleaned up in a great example of working together before only to have it stuffed full and made harder to read since then. AlbinoFerret  16:08, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I really like that, we could almost get rid of 3 paragraphs with this one sentence. Let's keep exploring this please. The present state of the lede sounds like this: One review says this but the other one says that, these guys don't know if but these other guys think that... no one really knows shit but let's keep rambling for another 2 paragraphs about the depth of our ignorance on this topic..... It is very irritating TheNorlo (talk) 17:10, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * To expand on this idea of succinctness, how about something like this: The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain. There is considerable scientific and legislative debate about the implications of e-cigarettes for personal and public health, and about how to regulate them. And BOOM.... Out the window goes the awful 2nd and 3rd paragraphs. Let's not mention that they are better or worst than smokes, that they may or may not contain crap, because the moment we do that, a nuclear bomb will expode again leaving in the lede the pathetic remnents of what was clearly a war on the talk page of the article. TheNorlo (talk) 17:33, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This section only came about because Quack couldn't understand a completely different proposal, but I agree that the lede - and the whole article - needs to be completely rewritten. See my proposal at the bottom of the page.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:47, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

lead/leed
Electronic cigarettes do not contain tobacco, although they do use nicotine from tobacco plants. Considering that at the end of the paragraph it says: Others have similar ingredients but without nicotine., shouldn't the sentence read: "although they can (or may) use nicotine from tobacco plants." What I'm saying is that not ALL products use nicotine. — Ched : ?  05:09, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'd just remove it altogether. After all the Nicotine patch article doesn't say "Nicotine patches do not contain tobacco, although they do use nicotine from tobacco plants." To me it just looks like a crude attempt to associate e-cigs with smoking.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 05:35, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * IIRC it was actually an attempt to clarify a point that seems to be very confusing to a lot of people (including legislators and regulators who should know better!): that they are (more often than not) nicotine products without being tobacco products. Barnabypage (talk) 11:10, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I can see some spirited discussion on this article, and I'm not really interested in getting into any of that. Still, the one sentence implies "all" while a following sentence says "not all" - rather a contradiction imo.  I do smoke, but am trying various e-cig solutions, and that is the only reason I even tried to read through the article.  I hope all involved can improve it from its current condition.  TY for any input, and I'm fine with just removing it as well. — Ched :  ?  06:19, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

I am having trouble finding the claim that the nicotine is sourced from tobacco plants in the cited journal article. Does anyone know what the sentence is that is used as the basis for this claim in O'Connor? I read it, and then did a search for plant or plants came up with nothing. AlbinoFerret  17:16, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Not really fussed. Liquid is made with pharmaceutical nicotine base, and that is indeed sourced from tobacco. No point in wasting time on the bleedin' obvious when the article needs a total rewrite.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:51, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't know that it is mentioned in that article. Here's a NY Times reference to do for now, if we need one. http://www.nytimes.com/2014/03/24/business/selling-a-poison-by-the-barrel-liquid-nicotine-for-e-cigarettes.html?_r=0 Barnabypage (talk) 17:33, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposed change
That the sentence in the lede, "Electronic cigarettes do not contain tobacco, although they do use nicotine from tobacco plants." is amended by deleting "although they do use nicotine from tobacco plants." It contributes nothing and isn't applied to other nicotine products that contain nicotine derived from tobacco plants, such as NRT.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 06:25, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * How about that plus: "An electronic cigarette (e-cig or e-cigarette) or personal vaporizer (PV) is an electronic nicotine delivery system (ENDS) using a battery-powered vaporizer which has a similar feel to tobacco smoking." Still badly written, but only a couple of tiny word changes and de-bolding (or even leave the bolding for now). If you agree, feel free to edit or remove this post. --Tsavage (talk) 09:06, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support It just seems intended to link e-cigs to smoking. If there's a good reason to keep it, however, it should be changed to "although they may use nicotine from tobacco plants."--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 06:25, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support TheNorlo (talk) 07:01, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Comment/Oppose I wanted to support to get things moving, but really, this is a futile way to do things. Removing nicotine there makes the whole lead even more muddled, because it is then never clearly stated what the e-cig does, except in one of the alternative names, "electronic nicotine delivery system". That's terrible writing. The first sentence should convey that the e-cig is a smoke- and tobacco-free vaporizer usually used to deliver nicotine. By piecemeal editing like this, we're encouraging not solving the root page lock problem. How can we be fine-tuning stuff that needs an overall clean-up first? (Also, aren't e-cigs just one type of electronic nicotine delivery system?) --Tsavage (talk) 07:59, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Right now mine isn't an "electronic nicotine delivery system" at all. It's a stupid name and I dislike it intensely, at least partly due to the oh-so-coincidental acronym that doesn't exactly imply a new, tobacco-free start in life. However I digress. They're not ENDS, they're e-cigs or PVs. Their purpose is to let you inhale vapour, which probably contains nicotine but might not. Yes, the lede is a bag of mince and needs a complete rewrite.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:10, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, a quick look at a couple of media articles on Marlboro HeatSticks (electronic; heated tobacco) and a WHO ENDS report seems to confirm that properly, e-cigs are one type of electronic nicotine delivery system, making the lead dead wrong in that respect. --Tsavage (talk) 08:15, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Although I agree with you, I would advise against trying removing that from the lede as it would be very easy to argue otherwise. This will only fuel the war that is raging right now. This is futile.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by TheNorlo (talk • contribs) 08:22, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I know. I keep trying to shut up, but that is also leads nowhere. WHO Framework Convention on Tobacco Control: Electronic Nicotine Delivery Systems report is kinda ambiguous, it says: "ENDS, of which electronic cigarettes are the most common prototype, deliver an aerosol by heating a solutionthat users inhale" and goes on to describe in detail specifically e-cigs - vaporing liquid and so forth. So HeatSticks don't literally fit. But a US state (CT I think) bill says "'Electronic nicotine delivery system' means an electronic device that may be used to simulate smoking in the delivery of nicotine or other substance to a person inhaling from the device, and includes, but is not limited to, an electronic cigarette, electronic cigar, electronic cigarillo, electronic pipe or electronic hookah and any related device and any cartridge or other component of such device;" (I'm just doing quick checks for discussion). I think that ENDS is a generic and parties who needed policy definitions were using e-cigs because they were the only thing really out, until, now, heated tobacco HeatSticks. And I'm only clogging up this simple half-sentence proposal, because with ENDS (which is pretty much wrong) gone (in theory if not practice just yet), the removal of that half sentence leaves no complete mention at all of what an e-cig does, except for nicotine appearing third in an e-liquid ingredient list. OMG. --Tsavage (talk) 08:32, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * As I said earlier... It's just a name, not a description. It is trivial for now. TheNorlo (talk) 08:47, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Agreed. Except, as I kinda wordily described above, it's relevant to this remove-a-half-sentence proposal. :) --Tsavage (talk) 09:01, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Fair points. TheNorlo (talk) 08:02, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * As to the END question, somebody in some agency decided to call them ENDs, so we are kind of stuck with this inaccurate term. But it doesn't add any weight to Doc's arguments... It is just a name, not a description... A little bit like horsepower, there is no actual horses in my car. TheNorlo (talk) 08:15, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Personally I don't give a toss what someone in some agency decided. They can buy their own mod and call it whatever they like, but this one is mine and it isn't any damn ENDS.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 09:47, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Please stop using Wikipedia article Talk pages to air your personal views and experiences, this is original research and not allowed. We summarize the high-quality reliable sources.  We don't care what individual editors might think or do.   14:11, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * No problem. However "ENDS" is a stupid name for e-cigs, because they do not necessarily contain nicotine. I'm vaping 0mg liquid right now.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:18, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * WP:OR: "This policy of no original research does not apply to talk pages." It's right there in the first paragraph of the policy page. For better or for worse, Talk pages ARE intended for open discussion. --Tsavage (talk) 21:31, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposal #2 (regarding nicotine)

 * How about: "Some electronic cigarette e-liquid preparations contain nicotine, which is derived from tobacco plants." This avoids making the incorrect blanket statement that all e-liquid contains nicotine while maintaining the information about the relationship between (some) e-liquid and tobacco.   14:16, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Seems perfectly reasonable to me. Barnabypage (talk) 16:23, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Or "Some electronic cigarette liquids contain nicotine, which is derived from tobacco plants"?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 16:42, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Or more accurately "Most electronic cigarette liquids contain nicotine, which is derived from tobacco plants".--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:25, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support. — Ched : ?  17:46, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Comment - "Some" is vague, possibly misleading, makes me think, "Oh, so a lot of preparations don't have nicotine?" "Most" or "usually contain" would be more accurate and straightforward (I'm assuming; I don't know the actual nicotine/no-nicotine ratio). --Tsavage (talk) 18:09, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It varies from country to country and across device generations. Most cloud chasers and a lot of people who use Gen 3 and drippers use 0mg liquid; very few people puffing a disposable cigalike in a 747 toilet do.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:19, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * There seems to have been surprisingly little research on zero-nicotine use. Just at a quick look, we have figures of 25% for UK, 11% for France and 8% for U.S. I saw a 30% for Denmark somewhere the other day but I’m not sure about that one. Of course, some people may use different strengths (including 0mg/ml) at different times. But in any case, there is clearly variation, as FergusM says. Barnabypage (talk) 18:31, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I swing wildly between strengths. When I'm chilling out at the weekend it's 0mg mocchachino or something from Liberty Flights temperance range. When I'm struggling to meet a deadline, bring on the 24mg RY4. In a big bucket.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:34, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Comment update: Rereading the lead first paragraph, it seems overall fine as an awkwardly written whole. The first sentence calls e-cigs "electronic nicotine delivery systems" (not, electronic vapor delivery systems), and mentions vaporizer and "tobacco smoking." The next sentence goes on to answer a basic follow-on question: "Nicotine delivery, vaporizer...so is there any actual tobacco?" No, although there is nicotine derived from tobacco (this doesn't preclude no-nic use, it's simply addressing the relationship with tobacco). In the last two sentences, the payload is described in more detail, and the 0mg option is presented with what seems like reasonable weight, "usually" vs "others" seems appropriate. Try rereading the para as if you're just trying to get info. My larger point re this proposal: piecemeal is whack-a-mole. --Tsavage (talk) 19:11, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Comment It looks doable, but the word "preparations" makes it sound like a medicine and should be removed. AlbinoFerret  18:46, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree; just call it "liquid". We shouldn't be adding any unnecessary words, because the article is unreadable enough already.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:52, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * "preparations" also makes the lede harder to read when it should be the simplest and easiest to read. AlbinoFerret  19:16, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

How about this for the first paragraph:


 * "An electronic cigarette (e-cig or e-cigarette) or personal vaporizer (PV) is a battery-powered vaporizer. They are sometimes called "Electronic nicotine delivery systems" (ENDS). Electronic cigarettes do not contain tobacco.[2] They produce an aerosol[3][4] by using a heating element to atomize a liquid known as e-liquid.[5] E-liquid is a mix of propylene glycol, glycerin, flavorings and, usually, nicotine[3]. Most "

There's no reason to mention twice that most contain nicotine; once is perfectly fine. The source of the nicotine is irrelevant; it would be pretty much the same (just more expensive) if it was obtained from tomatoes. Anyway we can go into that sort of detail later--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:24, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposal to fix article
This article is not difficult to fix, and could be one of the more timely and truly helpful pages on Wikipedia in the next few weeks and months.


 * Agree to reduce each of the current five subsections of health issues to max four-sentence summary, with no direct mentions of specific findings in the text, and multiple citations as required.
 * Create a pros/cons / controversy / opposing views section with a comparison table with subsections as required, to present pros and cons in summary/bullet-point form.

By actually doing that, the article WILL hold together, and with a decent example in place, should be easier to maintain/defend as necessary.

If anyone here is actually on the job, and the goal is to muddy the waters, well, you're doing great! :) --Tsavage (talk) 05:42, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Count me in. If we can get agreement on this it will vastly improve the article.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 06:01, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I would like to see what this would look like before agreeing to it. I would also like to know what would stop someone from filling it up with whats there now two weeks after its done? AlbinoFerret 21:38, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't actually see it being an issue. The main argument on the anti side is "We don't know", which will fill exactly one box. It will be easier to spot duplication in this format so we can weed it out. I'm finding on the Safety article that the same stuff is being repeated over and over, often in consecutive sentences. By switching to the table format we may be able to get a clear idea of what the actual points are without endless bloat, then when it settles down get it into a couple of properly structured and readable  sections.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 23:39, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Agree that this article needs to be fixed and doesn't seem like it would be that difficult to rewrite. I suggest that a good first step is for somebody to gather all of the sources available, list them here, then we can individually examine which ones do and do not conform to WP:MEDRS. Once we have examined the sources themselves, rewriting an article from them should be a relatively simple matter of coming up with a structure, proposing wordings for them, and discussing them until we come up with something that works. If we can agree to that, i'll reduce the protection to semi. The Wordsmith Talk to me 01:01, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Assembling the sources here for vetting sounds good, that is also the first step to roughing up a quick pro/con comparison table to see if that can work. What format, copy the rendered references section or cut-paste the reference markup? --Tsavage (talk) 01:07, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree; that sounds like a positive step. If we can copy the markup that might be easier to navigate.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:41, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Harm reduction rewrite
Here's a rough draft of one of the health sections, Harm reduction, redux. It does not have citations, it is simply a straightforward summary for consideration that all key points are covered simply, non-technically and neutrally. Citations can be piled in, and much of the content of the current (practically unreadable) Harm reduction section can be moved to the proposed Pro/Con comparison table, or even to footnotes.


 * The value of e-cigarettes in tobacco harm reduction, lessening the risks related to tobacco use, is still being debated. Current scientific consensus is that e-cigs, compared side-by-side with combusted cigarettes, pose less risk, however, the long-term effects of e-cig inhalation and of any second-hand exposure are as of yet unknown. Proponents of tobacco harm reduction, including much of the public health community, generally endorse e-cigs as one of the less risky alternatives to smoking. Meanwhile, opponents of tobacco harm reduction hold that only total cessation of all forms of smoking will solve the tobacco health problem, and reject the promotion of reduced-risk alternatives. are against anything that may support smoking, which includes potential reduced-risk alternatives like e-cigs. Other current considerations in the harm reduction argument include dual use (using both e-cigs and combusted tobacco), renormalization of smoking by providing a more acceptable alternative, and e-cigs as a gateway to conventional smoking - investigation of these areas is so far inconclusive. Government regulation, of minimum age of access, use in public spaces, product testing and standards, and so on, is also a major factor in risk analysis, and still largely being developed. The involvement of the major transnational tobacco companies, with a dual interest in in promoting and smoke-free nicotine products, is considered a potential threat to the harm reduction value of e-cigs and other cigalikes.

Please literally compare by actual reading with what is in the article now. --Tsavage (talk) 00:52, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't agree with "total cessation of all forms of smoking". I've ceased all forms of smoking; I vape. Maybe change it to "all forms of nicotine use except eating vegetables "? I'd also say that the current evidence on the gateway argument is pretty strong (ASH, STS etc.); it's not happening. Apart from that it looks pretty good.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:00, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Hahaha I'm the last one to start quibbling here, just want to clarify your point because I am not sure myself: are zero tolerance folks anti-nicotine, or anti-smoking and therefore against anything that may support smoking (which e-cigs, while not "smoking" obviously can do). Otherwise, yeah "all forms of nicotine" if that is an accurate description of Their position. :) --Tsavage (talk) 01:11, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It seems to be "against all forms of nicotine not manufactured by J&J or GSK". I know that seems flippant but it appears to be true; the ANTZ line is that nicotine is addictive, causes heart attacks and kills babies, except when it's in licensed NRT. Also flavoured e-cigs are targeted at children, while flavoured nicotine gum is great. My honest belief is that they are opposed to the recreational use of any drug that they don't use themselves. I know they're not all teetotalers, because I'm one of the people John Ashton called an onanist in the middle of a drunken rant a few months ago and Cathi Carrol likes to get pie-eyed and shriek "Vaping sounds like raping!" Dunno really. Sorry it's not more helpful.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:35, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Also dual use of NRT and cigarettes is licensed and seen as a positive step, if not as positive as smoking cessation. Dual use of e-cigs and cigarettes is bad and must be opposed. It doesn't make much sense. Maybe it's just a bad case of Not Invented Here?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:39, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I did some quick checking, newspaper/magazine coverage, and it seems clear that the platform is basically "anti-smoking" and not particularly anti-nicotine. In any case, I amended the rough draft to something more inclusive. --Tsavage (talk) 02:07, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Erm no. If it was simply anti-smoking it wouldn't be hostile to e-cigs, would it? Note how quickly the rhetoric has switched from "ending smoking" to "ending nicotine addiction" since e-cigs appeared. I don't agree with your conclusion at all.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:47, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Just read this. Your argument against the wording is in my opinion a biased and obscure interpretation of the simple statement: "zero tolerance anti-smokers are against anything that supports smoking." What is difficult to understand there? Zero tolerance people against smoking are not against nicotine gum and so forth, they are against tarry, smoky, we-surely-believe carcinogenic smoking. E-cigs, unlike gum, patches, or whatnot, emulate the act of smoking. Clearly, as in the unfortunate Blu ads, e-cigs can be seen as "just like smoking, but safe." Obviously, that may have an effect on the stigmatization, the demonization, the banning of smoking. So, if you're trying to wipe out smoking, obviously, you want to stop e-cigs as well. Since they are smokeless, some anti-smoking anti-e-ciggers are unsurprisingly going to end up somewhere in the anti-nicotine camp. Perhaps a small word-change would help: "zero tolerance anti-smokers are against anything that may encourage smoking, which now includes e-cigs." Also, please remember that my draft here is just a discussion rough to establish meaning, changing wording to make the same meaning clearer is what one does in rewrites, it can be restyled as citations are added. --Tsavage (talk) 18:08, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's difficult to understand why you or anyone else would think that e-cigs might support smoking. Do laptops support typewriter use? Sorry, but it's just a ridiculous idea. Technologically superior alternatives do not support older products; they make them obsolete and wipe them out.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:53, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I replied to this below, but to help you understand, and in deference to the apparent group spirit of adding more words to this page if at all possible, here's the "can you honestly say" gambit: Can you honestly say that puffing on a first gen, cigalike e-cig, complete with plumes of aerosol/mist/vapor, and with a nicotine hit to boot, is completely unlike, not at all comparable to, smoking a cigrette? To claim that is absurd. And considering that at least some e-cig models do a pretty fair emulation of cigarette smoking, and are advertised as a smoking alternative, people against smoking might kinda naturally be against e-cigs as well, for at least two reasons: that it may improve the overall impression of smoking (there's an OK way to...smoke, not just ingest nicotine, but to...smoke), and that it may lead to first-time smoking ("I started with safe e-cigs, and I'm out of...e-juice, but buddy here has a cig, and I know smoking is bad, but I do want my nic fix, soooo, just this once."). It's just how things are. --Tsavage (talk) 20:29, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't even see the relevance to be honest. And if someone is against smoking, and also against a safer alternative to smoking, then they have some serious cognitive dissonance, to the point where they should probably be a patient rather than a health care professional. And, again, no: E-cig use is not smoking. if someone ran out of e-liquid why would they take a cigarette? Why not just buy more liquid? And one last point: If someone who had only vaped tried a cigarette I can assure you they'd never try another one. I had three puffs on a cigarette back in June, and it revolted me; I'll never touch one again. I smoked 40 a day for 25 years.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:41, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I am against any reduction in information to Harm Reduction by removal of sourced information. AlbinoFerret  01:13, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * There is no intention to remove material, only to summarize it. In its current state, Harm reduction is difficult to read, a poorly connected series of single sentence statements, individually sourced, at times contradictory. This is not only difficult to synthesize while reading, it is creates both the impression of bias, and actual, even if unintentional, bias: each statement from a particular source should then be balanced by statements addressing exactly the same point if available in all other cited sources in the section. Otherwise, it is a form of cherrypicking. Finally, if you carefully parse through the current 650+ words in Harm reduction, do you come to any different or more refined conclusion than you do from the summarized version? No, you can't, because none of it claims to be conclusive. This sort of detail can more accessibly included in a table and in footnotes. --Tsavage (talk) 01:33, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * There is no bias, it is based on what the medical sources say. Each refrenced claim has probably been fact checked by a dozen editors already. If you have something from a MEDRS secondary source that says otherwise, propose its inclusion. But to rewrite to eliminate sourced claims is against NPOV. The sources say whats in the article. AlbinoFerret  01:43, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * You are not the sole editor, controversial edits that redo the whole page or a section have to be discussed and consensus reached. All I see s far is removal of sourced claims for unsourced words. Its in a medical section and each claim will need to be soured to a MEDRS secondary source. AlbinoFerret  01:45, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * @AlbinoFerret You are taking this off-point again, and seem to be trying to make it personal ("you are not the sole editor"). You've already said you don't support this edit. Duly noted (by me, at least). You stated your reason. I replied. You are now not addressing my reply, that no material or sources are being removed, only summarized, and that detail can better be placed in a table or footnotes. Several editors above have agreed that a rewrite is needed, and even with this specific proposal. Yet you are arguing that the One Way is the Way It Is Now. Just because a "dozen" editors vet a source doesn't mean that the material used or the way it was used, is, like, untouchable. You are calling the rough draft unsourced, which apparently means you didn't read the first two sentences of this section, which explain that this is a rough for consideration, citations to be added. If you have a specific problem with the rough draft here, information that is excluded, points that are missed, summaries that are misleading or inaccurate, please specify. --Tsavage (talk) 02:02, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * 2 editors above have agreed with you, there are dozens who edit this article regularly. I think you may have some good ideas, but this article is just starting to come to discussions. Bold editing like you are doing has lead to the edit wars that got the page protected. I suggest you add all the references into your draft. I also sugest you stop with the bold wording, because its not polite. AlbinoFerret  02:11, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Another suggestion is why not start at the top, say with Positions, its on a breakout page thats not protected, lets see what you can do. AlbinoFerret  02:13, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the suggestions! Do you have a specific problem with the rough draft here, information that is omitted, points that are missed, summaries that are misleading or inaccurate, compared to the existing Harm reduction. --Tsavage (talk) 02:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It appears there are no statements from MEDRS in the small paragraph you wrote. I would like to see where the WP:MEDRS secondary sources are that your using for each of the claims in that paragraph. AlbinoFerret  02:28, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This one in particular, anything based on "A 2014 review found no long-term evidence on the safety or efficacy of e-cigarettes, including whether they reduce harm for tobacco related disease or will improve the health of the population as a whole. Therefore, promotion of e-cigarettes as a harm reduction product is premature" because there are problems with that sentence as the source isnt talking about harm reduction and its likely OR link.  AlbinoFerret  02:31, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

After some thought I agree with AF that the proposed version seems to omit the fact that many major organisations, including PHE, AAPHP, the BMA and the CDC recognise the fact that e-cigs have a role to play in harm reduction. I'm all for the principle of streamlining the current atrocious style, but not by removing all the pro-THR information. The proposed version only mentions anti-THR arguments such as the "gateway" and "renormalization" claims, both of which are now utterly discredited anyway. I also don't agree with the wording "anything which may support smoking"; that's just "renormalization" rubbish again. I'd say at a bare minimum we need to say that e-cigs as a THR tool have a lot of support and there's a consensus that they are much less dangerous than smoking.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:58, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * You guys here are too nitpicky for me. The whole point of heavily summarizing rather than individually citing reviews is that it's almost impossible not to misrepresent right now for this topic. For example, I just read your first mention above, Public Health England's Electronic Cigarettes review, and really, while the article summary is accurate in saying it finds "there is large potential for health benefits when switching from tobacco use to other nicotine delivery devices such as electronic cigarettes, but realizing their full potential requires regulation and monitoring to minimize possible risks," that really kinda minimizes and sweeps under the rug the strongest warning in the whole report: "all of the four transnational tobacco companies ... no doubt eager to exploit opportunities for advertising and promotion that might increase either electronic or tobacco cigarette use ... Given the ethical record of tobacco industry activity in promoting and defending smoked tobacco, this is an obvious and significant potential threat." How effective is a harm reducer if it is being used as a harm increaser by a crafty, hugely resourced, highly profit motivated, unethical agency? And what is the THR information that you don't want to see removed? --Tsavage (talk) 05:40, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The tobacco companies don't matter right now. They'll only become important in the e-cig market if regulation imposes a financial bar to entry that they can pay but the independents can't. Note that the tobacco companies are enthusiastic supporters of tight regulations on e-cigs; RJ Reynolds have called for a complete ban on all Gen 2 and 3 devices. The THR information that needs to stay is the fact that a lot of PH/TC people are fully behind e-cigs as a THR tool. Your proposed version only presents anti-THR arguments, at least two of which have been demolished by evidence (gateway & renormalization). THR advocates are overwhelmingly behind e-cigs.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 05:44, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I added a few words. I also added a tobacco company sentence. I don't see how the tobacco companies don't matter right now, they seem well-motivated, investing billions over the last few years, rolling out e-cigs and other smokeless new products, and legislation is already hitting, once legislation is in place, the cost of lobbying kicks in, and surely that's a barrier to entry... Anyhow, considering the Talk archives I've read, I don't expect this to go anywhere, but it's an interesting look-see into what at least one hotbutton topic on WP is like these days. I'll try and do the citations for this one just to wrap it up. --Tsavage (talk) 06:04, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * They're not rolling out anything; they're just buying up five-year-old technology and trying to use legislation to stifle the dominant products, which are Gen 2 and 3. As for legislation, you nailed it; the idiots in tobacco control and public health who want strict legislation are on the tobacco industry's side here. They are protecting cigarette sales by trying to take modern e-cigs off the market and restrict it to obsolete ones. At the moment, however, the tobacco industry is not important. They have less than half of one market sector - Gen 1 cigalikes - and that's declining fast. Their presence in the Gen 2 and 3 market is nil.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:32, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, no, I can't agree with it at all in its current form. How is providing alternatives to smoking "renormalizing" smoking? That's like saying the invention of cars renormalized horses. Saying that e-cigs may support smoking is also something I can't accept, because it's just a hypothetical that has been demolished by the evidence. And the tobacco companies will only reduce the THR potential of e-cigs if the regulation being demanded by the tobacco control industry allows them to. The people who warn that the tobacco industry will take over the e-cig market are the exact same people who are trying to make that happen.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:36, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

How about this?

''The value of e-cigarettes in tobacco harm reduction - lessening the risks related to tobacco use - is still being debated. Current scientific consensus is that e-cigs, compared side-by-side with cigarettes, pose less risk. Proponents of tobacco harm reduction generally endorse e-cigs as one of the less risky alternatives to smoking. Meanwhile, opponents of tobacco harm reduction hold that only total cessation of all forms of nicotine use will solve the tobacco health problem, and reject the use of reduced-risk alternatives. Anti-harm reduction arguments include claimed risks from dual use of e-cigarettes and lit tobacco, renormalization of smoking and the possibility of e-cigs acting as a gateway to smoking. Current evidence has not found any of these effects but harm reduction opponents believe they may appear in the future. Government regulation (of minimum age of access, use in public spaces, product testing and standards etc.) is also a major factor in risk analysis, and is still largely being developed. The involvement of the major transnational tobacco companies, with an interest in promoting both smoking and smoke-free nicotine products, is considered a potential threat to the harm reduction value of e-cigarettes. Harm reduction advocates argue that inappropriate legislation will exacerbate, rather than avoid, this threat.''

I can't support anything that states or implies that vaping is a form of smoking, because it just isn't. I've also removed "and other cigalikes"; "cigalike" is a (mildly derogatory) name for a Gen 1 e-cig, so "e-cigs and other cigalikes" looks kind of odd.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:52, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Cool. IMO, generally well cleaned up - nice punctuation! - the "inappropriate legislation exacerbates" stuff adds to the useful overview THR, sweet...with a couple of glaring exceptions:


 * 1. Meanwhile, opponents of tobacco harm reduction hold that only total cessation of all forms of nicotine use will solve the tobacco health problem, and reject the use of reduced-risk alternatives. That seems almost right, but is it (true and) verifiable that ALL anti-THRers are anti-nicotine, that seems more like a position some have turned to as one avenue of opposition to e-cigs? The plain fact is that, unlike gum and patches, for example, e-cig use can be a fair emulation of smoking that is portrayed as the "safer alternative": there is "smoke," you puff on a cig or cigar or pipe-like device, a kid pretending to smoke would have a much finer time with an e-cig than a candy cigarette and no fun at all with a square of gum. Unfortunately, as safe as they may be, we haven't gotten away from that appearance just yet, so naturally e-cigs can be seen as quite possibly encouraging/rehabilitating smoking.


 * Perhaps instead: Meanwhile, opponents of tobacco harm reduction hold that only total cessation of smoking will solve the tobacco health problem, and reject the use of reduced-risk alternatives. seems more accurate. A section on anti-tobacco vs anti-smoking vs anti-nicotine would definitely be interesting, somewhere.


 * 2. Current evidence has not found any of these effects but harm reduction opponents believe they may appear in the future. - first off, not correct, in that at least some current evidence has found some of these effects, individual studies are coming out left and right, aren't they. For example, Risk Factors for Exclusive E-Cigarette Use and Dual E-Cigarette Use and Tobacco Use in Adolescents, accepted Oct/2014 in peer-reviewed Pediatrics, and specifically addressing renormalizaiton, concludes: "The fact that e-cigarette only users were intermediate in risk status between nonusers and dual users raises the possibility that e-cigarettes are recruiting medium-risk adolescents, who otherwise would be less susceptible to tobacco product use."


 * How about a more even-handed: Anti-harm reduction arguments cite the potential risks of dual use of e-cigarettes and lit tobacco, renormalization of smoking and the e-cigs acting as a gateway to smoking, while evidence of these effects is still inconclusive.? --Tsavage (talk) 19:14, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * My biggest issue is that you're still using "total cessation of smoking". I totally ceased smoking last February. Switching to exclusively vaping is total cessation of smoking and I cannot support any wording that implies vaping is a form of smoking. Secondly, no, there is no evidence for "renormalization" or the "gateway effect". In fact as e-cig use grows smoking is falling at an accelerating rate, which is exactly the opposite to what we would see if these concerns were valid. There are only three developed nations where smoking prevalence has started to rise again: Australia, Singapore and Sweden. All have e-cig bans.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:37, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Just as an aside. Smoking prevalence has also been on the up in France and in New York City, both of which have only moved to strongly regulate e-cigarettes very recently, and in South Africa, where the prohibition on e-cigs is barely enforced, as well as a number of other countries. That neither proves nor disproves the role of e-cigs in cessation or the existence of the renormalisation/gateway effects but it does demonstrate that there are other factors in smoking prevalence besides the availability of e-cigarettes! Barnabypage (talk) 21:45, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Risk Factors for Exclusive E-Cigarette Use and Dual E-Cigarette Use and Tobacco Use in Adolescents is a primary medical source and cant be used in this article by long standing agreement all medical sources need to be secondary sources. AlbinoFerret  19:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That's actually a really interesting paper. The actual figures for current e-cig use are pretty small - 91% of teens had used an e-cig four times or less, only 4% use weekly or more - but what really hit me was that the figures for smoking are tiny. Less than 2% weekly or daily use. That's either a serious methodological flaw - asking kids in front of their parents or something - or a fairly steady level of teen smoking has suddenly collapsed to about a third of what it was. According to the CDC somewhere over 5% of 13-17 year olds in Hawaii initiated smoking in 2011, so where have all the teen smokers gone and what's changed in the last three years?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 23:02, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * This is arguing like a court case. Secondary sources are definitely a better bet for some sort of balanced view when sections like the current Health Effects are pieced together directly from reports, however, a "this evidence is not admissable on technical grounds" approach in general seems ridiculous. First of all, this is not an article on a surgical procedure, it's on a device that the FDA, I believe, failed to even have classified as a medical device, and the overall subject is in large part as much sociological and political as it is medical/scientific, particularly in harm reduction. And, there is a difference between quoting or summarizing material directly from a single study, and using, for example, two or three studies, perhaps briefly explained in a citation footnote, to support something like "evidence of these effects is inconclusive" rather than saying, well, since there is no specific peer-reviewed review of the existing literature we can find, even though there are peer-reviewed studies, we can say there is no evidence of the topic. Or am I missing something? --Tsavage (talk) 19:49, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Believe me, I feel your pain. Unfortunately a group of editors insist on applying MEDRS. I disagree, but I'm not part of the MED elite. You'll have to take it up with them.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 19:52, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes you are missing the long standing agreement on secondary sources by the editors. If you want to try and get it changed discuss it and get consensus that it should be changed. But I think you will have an uphill battle on that. Thats because its WP guideline that secondary sources should be used per WP:MEDRS AlbinoFerret  19:55, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I get that, WP:MEDRS: "...it is vital that the biomedical information in all types of articles be based on reliable, third-party, published secondary sources and accurately reflect current medical knowledge." However, much of this article is not strictly "biomedical," like THR in particular, it's about social, cultural, political/policy issues as well. As for primary vs secondary sources, the WP:MEDRS strongly encourages the use of secondary sources only, but on full reading, recognizes that the use of primary sources is at times necessary. One of the more obvious examples: "The rare edits that rely on primary sources should have minimal WP:WEIGHT, should only describe the conclusions of the source, and should describe these findings clearly so the edit can be checked by editors with no specialist knowledge. In the rare cases when they are used, primary sources should not be cited in support of a conclusion that is not clearly made by the authors." So for example, that Pediatric report concludes " raises the possibility that e-cigarettes are recruiting medium-risk adolescents" (my emphasis) which, I think fairly supports (especially with more similar primary sources) saying that the "evidence is inconclusive" not that there is no evidence, without giving that statement undue weight.
 * in WP:MEDRS, there are several references that recognize primary source use, while being kinda vaguely worded no doubt so as not to encourage it (a lot of policy interpretation I think goes too far from the original intent of WP guidelines, which was/is to prevent obvious stuff, like crackpot theories cited to crackpot pseudoscience presented on personal blogs). I don't expect to win any arguments, here, but some of the wikilawyering of various sorts deserves at least to be pointed out. --Tsavage (talk) 21:32, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well that's another problem here; several editors have, without justification, gold-plated MEDRS and decided that primary sources can't be used at all (unless they're anti-THR, of course). There are a lot of issues here. To be honest we should blank the page and start again, from the firm position that it's not a medical article.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:06, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Wikilawyering has negative connotations, I think that someone informing an editor who is new to the page, who has no history of the past, is important. I suggest you become positive, and work with the editors who are already here, and who are pointing out problems you will need to address with what your proposing. Consensus building is the only way additions are going to be added for a little bit. When people just edit on this page it leads to edit wars, if you dont believe me, look at the articles history for today. AlbinoFerret  22:14, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * @AlbinoFerret: I am positive! Review the amount of civil discussion I've added to this page. Does any of it seem sub-intelligent, POV, intentionally disruptive, anything less than editorial...discussion? I've argued points, proposed solutions, contributed rewritten text, all positive. My comment about wikilawyering was not aimed at anyone in particular (were you thinking I was referring to you?), it was a comment addressing what I've encountered in my last few weeks of increased time on WP, here and elsewhere, a detailed, dogmatic approach to interpreting editorial guidelines and invoking "consensus" to various specific ends, a game that when encountered, every editor is forced to play to stay involved. It was always like this to a degree, except the "precedents" - previous consensus - grow more numerous over time, as do issues considered "will never be resolved." That's what I meant. I said, "some of the wikilawyering of various sorts" in reference to what I just explained. Likely, this is just the way things are. In any case, I'm not personalizing anything and I am not...negative. :) --Tsavage (talk) 22:30, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Wikilawyering in general is a negative accusation, regardless of who you say is doing it, or who you think may be doing it. Id recommend not bringing it up in general.  AlbinoFerret  01:57, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Why do you insist on...lecturing me? I am using wikilawyering exactly as it is defined, specifically referring to two of the four examples a the beginning of WP:WL:
 * Abiding by the letter of a policy or guideline while violating its spirit or underlying principles
 * Asserting that the technical interpretation of the policies and guidelines should override the underlying principles they express
 * A lot of edit warring is based on this type of behavior, citing policies and guidelines while tenaciously hanging on to favored positions. I'm pretty clear on what I mean. --Tsavage (talk) 03:37, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * is it (true and) verifiable that ALL anti-THRers are anti-nicotine - definitely not. Depends how you define an "anti-THRer", I guess, because not many would define themselves that way, but there are plenty who are anti-e-cig but at least tolerate NRT. Barnabypage (talk) 19:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well...exactly. --Tsavage (talk) 01:31, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Priorities
Instead of wasting energy on stupid squabbles over using an inappropriate layout, can we instead concentrate on making the article readable? [https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:TECHNICAL Articles in Wikipedia should be understandable to the widest possible audience. For most articles that means a general audience.] However that is not the case for this article, which as I and others have repeatedly said is a barely readable mess. Take the Harm Reduction section, for example. According to the Gunning Fog Readability Index a reader needs 20.1 years of formal education to understand it. "A general audience" does not mean "People working towards a PhD." On the Flesch Reading Ease scale it scores 16.69 24.82 out of 100; anything scoring below 30 is "best understood by university graduates" The Hemingway app (recommended by Wikipedia to assess readability) is not impressed, giving the section a grade of "60. Bad". Right now the article is currently locked again because someone started edit-warring to impose an order that the last RfC said there are no grounds for imposing. That seems an odd priority when the article is currently, not to put too fine a point on it, illiterate crap.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:06, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The much-maligned Construction section, however, only requires 13.75 years of formal education to understand and scores 43.1 for Flesch Reading Ease; it's understandable for most people above the age of 15. It may not be as interesting to Wikiproject Medicine but it's sure as hell a lot better written.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:18, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The Health Effects section as a whole needs 18.24 years of formal education and has Flesch readability of 30.6. I don't know exactly how it works in the USA but I'm from Scotland, and 18.24 years of formal education means you're in the pub celebrating your MA results with a pint and a vape. This is not written for a general audience and it urgently needs fixed. I propose that in future we aim for a minimum Flesch readability of 40.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:44, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

I fully agree with all of the above, I will sadly have little time to write decent sourced prose before the new year but look forward to seeing others ideas. At this point, even without changing the weight or content of the article someone just writing it in coherent english would be a massive improvement. SPACKlick (talk) 11:18, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

Pro & Con table
For the short term, at least, why not create a pro and con table in its own section, where different studies, different interpretations of the same studies, and whatnot can be freely posted, even posted once in each column with whatever wording seems to fit. This allows all views to be expressed, one does not have to replace another, and interested readers can at a glance understand the current level of disharmony, and easily parse through the points and follow any of them up.

We should stop trying to decide for everyone, down to the choice of individual words, instead present things as neatly as possible, accessibly sourced, and let the thousands and millions of other readers take it from there and decide for themselves. --Tsavage (talk) 00:54, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Or two sections called, for example, "Harm reduction arguments" and "Prohibitionist arguments", each one summarizing the actual points in a sensible manner. Half (at least) of the problem is that every single review is currently mentioned, leading to an uninformative and practically unreadable mass of "A review said X. A review said Y. A review said wibble." Much more sensible to condense it into "Many organisations say e-cigs have potential as a cessation aid.12345 Others think they could act as a gateway to smoking/crack/Morris dancing.6789." Right now, when it comes to imparting information, it's worse than useless. It looks like someone with cholera ate a bowl of alphabet soup.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:11, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * A single "Pros and cons" section is what may do the job. It is a familiar editorial device for illustrating two sides without resorting to tricky summaries. The table itself can have all the sections anyone wants or needs. And it is a relatively safe place to vent because less-involved readers can just skip on by, no need to shut down the whole page. And it will point up any editors who still want to POV tamper with the rest of the article in bad faith. --Tsavage (talk) 01:35, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I think the time is to short, that the block should be indefinite or until we can all agree that a block is no longer necessary because everyone is discussing things first. AlbinoFerret  01:21, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * A table might be useful. But in general I agree with Tsavage that there is a tremendous amount of quibbling going on here, which is driven by mutual distrust. We really don't know much right now except that these things are, to the average user, neither extraordinarily helpful nor extraordinarily harmful. (If they were either, it would be quite apparent by now and there wouldn't be anything to argue about). Both sides seem to feel that if they give an inch, the other side will take a mile, and so every millimeter (pardon the switch in measurement systems) needs to be fought over. Formerly 98 (talk) 01:48, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually a lot of people are saying that they are extraordinarily helpful, and that's not just the users; it's people like Hajek, West and Farsalinos. Louise Ross of NHS Leicester Stop Smoking Services says that since she started recommending e-cigs her clients' success rate has increased by 20%. John Brittan of the Royal College of Physicians recently gave a presentation in which he launched a ferocious attack on e-cig opponents. Personally I've tried patches, gum, inhalators and Allen Carr, all of which were hopeless; I never tried Champix because I don't much fancy killing myself. Thanks to e-cigs I quit a 25-year, 40 a day habit in an hour. One hour. No withdrawal, no relapses. E-cigs are an extraordinary cessation tool and that's glaringly obvious in the real world. Less so in clinical trials because it's hard to construct a good one; the effectiveness of e-cigs depends on a choice of equipment, strengths and flavours, whereas trials rely on consistency and repeatability. That's why most of them have used cigalikes. However Polosa's latest trial used Gen 2 devices and achieved 36% cessation in unmotivated smokers. That's extraordinary enough for me given that patches struggle to hit 4%.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:03, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I think it will be as useful as the Editor Poll, and that wasnt as useful as hoped. As to distrust, I agree there is lots of it on both sides. I think its best if the protection is indefinite to force working together and perhaps remove some of that mistrust. No other solution has worked. The problem is that the short protections allow some editors to stay away until they end and then come back and take up where they left off. AlbinoFerret  01:53, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Seems that being able to trigger a lengthy page lockdown is one way of POV pushing a particular article or topic, by freezing it in a certain state, with no updates and topped with protection and dispute tags.


 * There can be significant consequences. For example, right here, as Philip Morris rolls out its reduced-risk products, this page, a natural go-to for millions of people looking for up-to-date info and a jumping off point for discovery, has been taken out of the game, not only looking discredited and unreliable for no good reason but the edit war, but also not covering the latest developments... We should be solving problems like this in a way truer to the free to access, free to edit core ideal. --Tsavage (talk) 01:56, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree, especially as I heard today about three separate cases where pregnant women who use e-cigs were advised by ob gyns or midwives to go back to cigarettes because "We just don't know what's in them." Wikipedia is most people's go-to resource, and in most cases that's justified because it's usually highly accurate. This article, however, is not reflecting up to date science and is highly POV.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:06, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Its better to get it right, and avoid a fight, than to be fast. AlbinoFerret  02:04, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * But it shouldn't be taking this long to get it right!--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:06, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Fast leads to mistakes. Its better to be accurate even if it takes a little longer. To get input from all the editors. Not just rush things in that get reverted. AlbinoFerret  02:09, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's taken months and the article is still, to put it bluntly, a bag of bollocks. We have vast, unreadable sections stuffed with more contradictions than the Book of Genesis. Tsavage is quite right; it's just endless squabbles over a word here or another bloody Grana cite there. The result is we've made virtually zero progress. It's time to come up with a bold solution that we can all get behind. He suggests a table; I suggest condensing the endless "A review said..." into some short, clear statements each cited with the relevant reviews. If ten reviews say "We just don't know" do we really need to say it ten times? Why not once with ten sources cited? Either suggested solution is better than this spooge fest.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:17, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * There is no "getting it right" in this case, our trusted scientists are coming up at odds, and there is no long-term data, that is inarguable considering the available information. However, there are numerous reliable sources, academic/scientific and popular media, reporting the various findings, speculations, and disagreements. Presenting this is an editorial format problem, not a matter of editorial agreement: essentially, how to present equal and opposing views. The Pro/Con table solution is the most common approach to solving this sort of problem. Locking down the page is like a scientific journal ceasing publication until there is certainty. --Tsavage (talk) 02:21, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Changes can still get through. There just needs to be clear consensus first. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 02:36, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * OK. Do you agree that the first priority is making the article readable? At the moment the standard of English is frankly diabolical. Grammar and syntax are, in many cases, worse than I would expect from my cat. Who is German. We need to eliminate all the endless repetitions of inconclusive statements and replace them with coherent sentences backed up by multiple cites.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:42, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * @FergusM1970: To discuss improving the article sentence by sentence, please start yet another section. In this section, I'm proposing a simple comparison table, leaving the rest of the article to be as concise and in summary style as possible, channeling all the energy and disagreement into one table. --Tsavage (talk) 02:50, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'd certainly be willing to try it, because right now we're getting nowhere.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:52, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Technically, yes, changes can get through, but are you saying that the article is anywhere near easily updatable in lockdown, or that a typo can be corrected if someone finds an admin to do it? I came here wanting to add some stuff, and I'm locked out because, as far as I can tell, 4-5 editors are busy...quibbling. --Tsavage (talk) 02:46, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I would support a Pro/Con Table. I think the table should be largely agreed on the talk page before being inserted and this is why I am pro lockdown. So is anyone willing to make a first draft of the pro/con table, knowing full well it will likely be controversial for some time? SPACKlick (talk) 14:44, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It can't hurt to at least try it, because we're accomplishing nothing here, so;


 * Support This could be a way to end the current deadlock, so it deserves a chance.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:17, 19 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose per WP:MOS, see WP:USEPROSE. Tables and bullet point lists are discouraged style.  Tables and bullet point lists generally introduce a WP:GEVAL problem. Benefits and drawbacks needs to be discussed in the context of a topic, and given appropriate weight in context per the sourcing.    15:16, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * In principle I agree with you, which is why my suggestion was two sections summarizing the arguments. However I reluctantly supported the suggestion simply as a way to break the deadlock and identify the actual issues, so we can then write them up intelligibly. The current article is a disgrace, meandering through a maze of repetitive, contradictory statements. It's unreadable.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:50, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * What you're saying applies in general, but they are broad guidelines, to be interpreted per specific case. "Wikipedia has no firm rules" is a fundamental 5-pillar principle, and each case is different. This one is fairly contentious and may call for some creative approaches. And a table is not against specific guidelines as far as I can see.
 * WP:USEPROSE simple cautions: "Wikipedia differentiates between articles that consist primarily of lists ... and articles that consist primarily of prose (and are termed "articles"). Articles are intended to consist primarily of prose, though they may contain lists." Adding a table to an article is all that is being proposed here (I see that everywhere), not turning the article into a table.
 * WP:GEVAL, explicily, is mainly concerned with crackpot extremes (""claims that the Earth is flat, that the Knights Templar possessed the Holy Grail, that the Apollo moon landings were a hoax, and similar ones. Conspiracy theories, pseudoscience, speculative history"), where the table proposed here is a fully cited comparison of material from reliable sources, primarly high-quality medical sources. It's not a willy-nilly list, it's a graphic comparison tool: charts, tables, graphs. --Tsavage (talk) 21:12, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

I think for the creation of a pro and con table these two commentaries published as a pair in BMC Medicine might help structure it. The con one even has a pro vs con weight graphic. SPACKlick (talk) 11:35, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

Medical Medical group opinions
Looking over the article I noted that under the Level I heading "Health Effects" we have three subheadings. Oddly (in my opinion), the Positions of major medical organizations section contains mainly the commentary of medical organizations that have expressed negative opinions on electronic cigarettes, then further down (ghettoized?), the Harm Reduction section contains the opinions of organizations that have adopted a more nuanced position. Is there a good reason for this, or should these two sections be merged to give more equal weight to the two positions? Formerly 98 (talk) 14:45, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Positions of major medical organizations
 * Smoking cessation
 * Harm reduction
 * Safety
 * Addiction
 * Some editors (including me) wanted a "Harm Reduction" section because e-cigs are a harm reduction product. Personally I'd keep that section for the research that's been done but move the opinions to the "Positions" section. Then move the "Positions" section to the bottom, because evidence is more important than opinion.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:49, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I disagree with merging the sections. Positions is a parrot section all on basically the same point of view and overloaded with it.  AlbinoFerret  14:50, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The goal would be to make that section, which is a little more prominent, more balanced. Formerly 98 (talk) 15:08, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Which it could certainly do with. I have no objection to moving all position statements there, but I think the "Harm reduction" section should remain to cover the research.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:25, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * One of the problems that was pointed out by the closing of the sections RFC is that the entire Health section being first adds to a POV problem. It isnt just one subsection, but the whole thing. AlbinoFerret  15:31, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I agree. The Health section should be moved below Construction and Usage.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:37, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I know that is another burning issue for you guys, but it is a much more difficult one to discuss because it is binary. Can we put that on hold for now and concentrate on the issue I identified as being both important and perhaps easier to reach a negotiated solution to?  We have failed to reach compromise many, many times in the past, and I think we need to focus on easier issues first, and try to build some trust and goodwill. Formerly 98 (talk) 15:45, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I agree that positions of various organisations should be in the same section. I think that some form of summary might be needed in the future to stop the section being as repetitive but in essence, I agree Formerly. SPACKlick (talk) 14:44, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposal to split the main article on Electronic Cigarettes
I am new editor to this topic (haven't made any changes on the article page) but have observed the talk discussion for several months. I feel strongly that the article is disorganized and the content represents poorly constructed information that in many instances is irrelevant to what an electronic cigarette is. I propose a split that I realize needs consensus and may be challenging to address.

The current main article has (at least) 3 splits occurring which is partially what I am getting at. Yet, I think it ought to be more broad than this. As I see it, there is "what is an electronic cigarette" and then there is "information about vaping" including usage in society, health benefits or risks, legal status, economic issues and vaping culture.

In my review of the talk page, much of the debate seems to be filtered through the competing perspectives on "information about vaping." Putting this on the article page for "what is an electronic cigarette" has lead to a disorganized content article that has noted at the top "The neutrality of this article is disputed." I don't see that going away anytime soon as long as "information about vaping" is presented on the electronic cigarette main article page.

Every time I read the main article, and in the lede, where it starts in second paragraph with "The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain," I feel I am reading an article that is poorly constructed and that Wikipedia editors are forever going to be caught up in endless debate. I think that debate is good to have and at times entertaining. But it is unhelpful to a page about what an electronic cigarette is. So, I am proposing that a split occur that would remove items such as:
 * nearly everything in the lede starting with "The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain" and after this. Clearly that sentence is about "usage" and really about vaping (nicotine). A lede on this topic ought to be 2 paragraphs at most.
 * Health Effects - shortened. What's there now is already on other article page and thus redundant. Clearly there is controversy around health effects of eCigs, and yet that doesn't need to be on page about what an eCig is. I trust that readers interested in that information would click on links to go check out that information and/or controversy.
 * Society and Culture - shortened. Consumers of electronic cigarettes exists, but their passions and/or concerns need not be presented on page about what an electronic cigarette is. Again, this is "information about vaping." Same goes with Legal Status which like health effects is deserving of a page split with as concise of information on main article page (for eCigs) as humanly possible.

To be clear, I respect the debate that has been had before I decided to chime in and imagine that debate will continue for many years to come. I see other talk pages being worthy of that discussion that has everything to do with "information about vaping." In the interest of presenting consistent, quality data on "what is an electronic cigarette," I am proposing a split occur that would result in a much shorter page that is clearly written from a NPOV. Gw40nw (talk) 22:03, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Added: After reviewing WP:SPINOFF this matches what I am proposing. In the lede currently, in second paragraph, is sentence that reads: The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain. This is where the spinoff is warranted, as much of the debate on talk page and as represented in the (disorganized) article is attempting to address that uncertainty with further language of uncertainty. As in: "One review found evidence of a benefit as a smoking cessation aid from a small number of studies. Another considered the data to be inconclusive." I am certain I could provide numerous examples in this vein. It is this exercise that is challenging the overall neutrality of the article. The benefits and risk are unknown and majority of articles on eCigs will state somewhere that long term data is needed to make more conclusive claims. Yet, Wikipedia article on eCigs is attempting to make 'conclusive claims' by noting just how inconclusive the data is, and then spinning that one way to appease vaping enthusiasts and spinning it another way to detract from that.

So, this proposal is an editor's recommendation that a spinoff occur that takes 'benefits and risks of use' onto another page that allows that to be vetted in whatever way editors of that page see fit, and hopefully adhering to NPOV, while not clouding the otherwise NPOV content that is on the eCig page. Benefits of eCig use and risks of eCig use are not what currently needs to appear on the eCig page. At a time when the data is actually more conclusive, then it would perhaps be time to incorporate that data on the eCig page. Gw40nw (talk) 19:59, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure I understand what it is exactly that you want to do. But it probably will have to wait until the ridiculous war that is raging right above this section is settled. TheNorlo (talk) 04:15, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Feel free to jump in.TheNorlo (talk) 04:18, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Please review the Wikipedia content policy regarding WP:NPOV. Reliable sourcing emphasize health effects very strongly and it would be a violation of that content policy to minimize the emphasis on health effects in this article.   14:20, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Reliable sources emphazise health effects, because the reliable sources is the medical literature, and the medical literature is primarily about health effects - we just went full circle... sigh. --Kim D. Petersen 01:12, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * And something else falls out of that. The media also emphasizes health effects, but why is that? Because they're reporting what's in the medical literature. If safety reporting in the media was confined to what was actually happening, rather than to what someone says might happen based on dripping RY4 onto cells in a petri dish, the only issue would be battery fires. Which as we all know only ever happen to e-cigs.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:47, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Reliable sourcing does not emphasize health effects strongly. If it did, I would not have made suggestion for the split. I am entirely supportive of the health effects being vetted out, but on this page, it is precisely because 'the data is inconclusive' that there is debate about which data to include so as to spin it one way or the other. I'm suggesting none of that needs to be on this page, at least until that health data is truly vetted. And did suggest that the linking page where that is being vetted out could appear in lede of this article. This article appears like one big exercise in violation of NPOV. Gw40nw (talk) 19:34, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I agree. I think WP:NPOV is being fundamentally misinterpreted or overinterpreted here (which seems to happen a lot). Due and undue weight (WP:WEIGHT) and Balancing aspects (WP:BALASPS) are about protecting articles from being hijacked by minority views, not about prescribing how topics must be covered. Balancing aspects suggests taking into account the "body of reliable sources on the subject ... discussion of isolated events, criticisms, or news reports about a subject may be verifiable and impartial, but still disproportionate." This is about not over-emphasizing a particular aspect, instead looking at the big picture. E-cigs are new, the overall body of sources is developing, and currently health and regulation are dominating (or at least half of) the coverage, but they should not be overemphasized just because they're currently popular. E-cigs are mechanical devices, social devices, economic devices, etc - look to the larger body of sources covering these areas to create a balanced article (and a lot of that is by referring to other similar articles, as editors have been trying to do). Read the relevant NPOV sections - NPOV is coming from a place of preventing minority view hijacks, such as, oddly enough, would be the case of forcing a primarily medical view on a general interest topic. --Tsavage (talk) 02:42, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I'm really tired of the medical community trying to hijack this article.... Some of them are even saying that the part of the article that is actually describing the subject (Construction section) is "to detailed". To detailed!!!! Are you kidding me! This is an encyclopedic article! TheNorlo (talk) 02:52, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * After the "e-cigs are a drug" nonsense last night I'm wondering if they want the construction section minimized to suppress the very obvious fact that e-cigs are complex electromechanical objects that don't resemble a drug in any way.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 02:57, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Nobody's talking about minimizing it. All we're talking about is describing the subject of the article first, so people have some idea what e-cigs actually are before reading about the potential health effects of them. Putting health effects first is appropriate if we're talking about a drug, but e-cigs are not drugs; they are manufactured electromechanical devices.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:27, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Vapist?
The Society and Culture section refers to users of ecig as vapists. I have personally never heard that and a quick Google search yields very few results. I propose that we either need a WP:RS or remove the word.TheNorlo (talk) 21:24, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * We need to remove that. It's an insult used by some ANTZ, because it sounds a bit like rapists. Cathi Carol of San Francisco (where else?) tends to throw it around when she's drunk, which is often.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:03, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The correct term would be vaper, a person who vapes. 23:17, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Since it was pure original research, I have removed "vapist" from the article.Levelledout (talk) 01:52, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks TheNorlo (talk) 07:11, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Just wantd to add for posterity "Vapist" was the term I was first introduced to long before I heard vaper. There was a time when as far as I was aware the two terms were equal and synonymous. Vaper is clearly more common now but some vapers do still refer to themselves as vapists, it's not just antis. SPACKlick (talk) 14:24, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think this is a word sometimes used, in some of the latin-speaking countries, for a seller of e-cigarettes :) Vaper is the common term, the above connotation that it should somehow alude to "rapist" is imho far-fetched and silly. --Kim D. Petersen 17:53, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Notice to Admins
With respect to implementing any change, there have been a number of concerns regarding a number of editors brought both to the ArbCom mailing list and to ANI. These should be settled before any changes are made. Best Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 09:14, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Really Doc? I'm not going to deny that some editors have clearly posted while frustrated and could probably benefit from walking away and clearing their heads before posting sometimes, however the only complaint you diff'd was of an editor referring to you as a moron for calling a metal tube and electronic circuit a drug and that, from an editor as educated as you appear to be was a pretty stupid mistake. SPACKlick (talk) 09:26, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes the more significant details are going to ArbCom. It may take some time but will hopefully address a few things. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 09:35, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

This appears to be a stalling technique to keep relevant and agreed on changes to the article from taking place. It also is an attempt to remove editors who disagree from a content dispute. AlbinoFerret 13:37, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Careful AF, WP:AGF. Doc could be doing this for any number of reasons but I for one choose to believe he's sincere whether I agree with him or not. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SPACKlick (talk • contribs) 15:19, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * "AGF is not a suicide pact" has been pointed out to me before. I am commenting on a pattern in which 3 editors, including myself, have been attempted to be removed from this article. All of the editors were engaged in heated discussions that neither side is blameless in. The delaying action is clear to me from the words Doc used above suggesting not to make changes based on accusations against other editors whom the other side disagrees with on content. That's why I said it "appears to be". AlbinoFerret  15:56, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi AlbinoFerrer, I know that it may be hard for you to see because you are in the middle of the situation, but it is really obvious that this article is being overwhelmed by tendentious editors. Most people don't have the time to spend debating the same topics over and over again and don't participate for very long. That's a problem since the article content shouldn't be decided by the last ones here who like to argue the most. Sydney Poore/FloNight&#9829;&#9829;&#9829;&#9829; 19:13, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think tendentious editors exist on both sides of the content disputes of this page. I also think that a lot of the problems are caused by editors who only show up to shut things down. They dont edit, but show up mysteriously to "agree" with others. Do discussions go quickly? Yes, because the article is in such bad shape no one knows where to start. As for stopping edits because of accusations, during the time when the accused have been on the page, its been protected for most of it. What edits that may have been done in the few hours it wasnt have been reverted before the next protection. AlbinoFerret  19:19, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I very much agree with FloNight. We aim for a neutral and disinterested point of view here, and its difficult to see how that is achieved if the article content is determined by those with the interest and stamina to debate 6 hours a day for weeks on end.  That level of persistence is only likely to be maintained by those who are here mainly to advocate for a particular POV.  On other "recreational drug" articles we have  afficianados pushing the idea that marijuana is a panacea for every ill, and that MDMA is a completely safe way of expanding your perceptions of the world. In general, I think its possible to be too involved with the subject to be an effective editor. Formerly 98 (talk) 20:44, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The thing is, it's hard to stay disinterested when the article is in the state it currently is and the discussion has gone around in circles as long as it has. This is why a while back several of us proposed that all editors who'd recently edited be given topic bans for some period. I think the discussion above that the uncertainties be spun off into their own article may have some merit. You'll note that a lot of the criticism from the pro e-cig side is about the poorly written article, huge repetitiveness not so much that, the article shouldn't say "we don't know how dangerous they are and here are several things which may prove to be problems in the future". Anyway something needs to happen to clear the bad blood and I doubt it will ever happen from one "side" alone. SPACKlick (talk) 21:05, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * @Formerly 98 Or disabled people who play online and edit WP because they cant leave the house. Somehow I dont think the But I dont have time to devote to an article reason should fly as a reason to stop working on it or block the editors who are willing to spend the time.
 * As for neutral point of view? You have got to be joking as speculation and uncertainty is piled on in a move to show that the speculation is more than it is. Where journal articles are blocked because they go against the speculation. Where the WHO is beyond having any point of view that disagrees with it added. Where one negative review is used 22 times, and the article that points out its problems is blocked. Where journal articles are misrepresented to say somnething else. Where copyright and plagiarism problems are all over the place. This article on a consumer product, its suffering from a medical point of view that has taken over. As statement after statement that say the same thing are added. Where the results of an RFC are ignored and the actions taken after it are edit warred until the article is protected. Where common terms are blocked by one after another revert. There is no working together on this article. There is no common good, there are two sides. Neither side is pure and right. Those that think so should take another look at the actions of the editors that seem to agree with them, because a few pro ecig editors who have been blocked or who like to edit a topic a lot are not the problem. AlbinoFerret  21:07, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * "Most people don't have the time to spend debating the same topics over and over again and don't participate for very long." True, but that being so, it can also be used to wear down opposition, effectively steering the direction of an article by repeatedly referring to policy, guidelines and previous threads, while participating very little in actual discussion. This is not so difficult because, by design, "Wikipedia has no firm rules" and guidelines are broadly worded, so it's easy to point to a huge variety of WP:MOS shortcuts as support for succinctly stated positions (e.g. "That's against WP:MOS, see WP:DUE and WP:WEIGHT") possibly combined with unsupported statements portrayed in Talk as "obvious" (e.g. "Most people do/sources say this or that, therefore..."). Meanwhile, if any opposition sticks around to debate, there's always an "other side" who are going to start arguing back "in agreement," from a firmly set opposing position with no real inclination to change views. "Most people," even rather committed editors, are unlikely to stick around through arguments like this, particularly when they're additionally peppered with procedural interruptions like RfCs, page protections, and complaints against individual editors. So who's left? Content may actually be (unfairly) decided by the last ones here, who are the ones who, by word and edit count, have argued the least. (Background: I work online for many hours every day, with Wikipedia a tab click away; I read fairly quickly, I type quickly, so I can maintain what may seem like an unusually time-consuming presence when in fact it is only minutes on the apparent hour. This can't be that rare of a situation. Also, I don't smoke, have no interest in becoming a vaper, and originally came here as a reader, found the page terrible, and stayed as an editor.) --Tsavage (talk) 22:14, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

E-cig is a controversial topic, so it shouldn't be a surprise to anyone that some editors, including myself, spends a lot of time on this trying to make it right. Am I biased toward e-cig? Of course, they have changed my life and the life of exactly 8 people in my circle. I have however, always tried to be neutral, realising that there are still alot of unknown regarding this product and I have never tried to claim that ecigs are "Harmless water vapor" as some ignorant people has done in the past. I have concentrated the majority of my efforts here to expand the Construction section because I believe that this is what the article is about, i.e. what is an electronic cigarette and I believe that Doc's obsession about focusing to much on health claims steers the reader away from the main subject, especially when we already have a 2 separate, dedicated medical articles about the Positions of medical organizations regarding electronic cigarettes and Safety of electronic cigarettes. The POV accusations should not be targeted only at the pro ecig community here as it is very clear that some members of the medical community pushes a very obvious anti-ecig agenda. Tell me that this version of the leed is not clearly biased towards the anti-ecig side, claiming that there are toxic and cancer causing chemicals like such and such without mentioning in what quantities (trace or substantial amounts? Turns out it's really trace amounts). It is surprising that actual doctors, who should know the inner workings of the scientific method leave this sort of crucial information out. I know that Doc James would love me to go away and that he is pissed that I called him, in a moment of frustration an idiot and a moron, to which I have apologized, but he must admit that he is highly biased against e-cigs and that his edits and request for the same RfC twice shows that. I am not going anywhere. TheNorlo (talk) 22:00, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think "harmless water vapour" is something any vapers actually claim since about 2008. These days it's more a case of something ANTZ claim we claim.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:22, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Good point. TheNorlo (talk) 23:10, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Per "The POV accusations should not be targeted only at the pro ecig community here as it is very clear that some members of the medical community pushes a very obvious anti-ecig agenda" it is about using the best available sources of which the World Health Organization is one. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 00:30, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * But only one, and their position is wildly divergent from that of most experts in the field. You seem very selective in the sources you'll accept. What's wrong with the McNeill review of Grana/Glantz? Go read my last comment at AN/I.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:48, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Doc, you are forgetting the main point here i.e. this example "Tell me that this version of the leed is not clearly biased towards the anti-ecig side, claiming that there are toxic and cancer causing chemicals like such and such without mentioning in what quantities (trace or substantial amounts? Turns out it's really trace amounts). It is surprising that actual doctors, who should know the inner workings of the scientific method leave this sort of crucial information out." I would like to hear your comment on this. TheNorlo (talk) 01:17, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * That's another thing he does a lot: Ignore the question you actually asked. See my chat with him on his talk page the other night. I asked him the same question half a dozen times and he just fudged, swerved and objected to proposals that I hadn't made and wasn't planning to.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:25, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This article isnt about the "best sources" there is an obvious POV to the article where repetitive speculative, unknown and uncertain claims are pushed to the point where its not just presenting one side of a conflict. Its appears to be trying to prove what is speculative is not speculative by amassing those statements. There is a controversy, but repeating the same thing over and over makes it look like there is none. It may be clear to a medical professional, but the article should not be written for a medical professional. It reads like a journal article. AlbinoFerret  01:33, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually it doesn't. According to every one of the readability analysis applications I ran it through it reads like someone threw a bowl of alphabet soup at the wall and looked to see what had stuck. Repeating the same basic claim three times in one paragraph isn't academic; it's either bloody awful writing or it's deliberately trying to create an impression of consensus, but written in a bloody awful style.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:40, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thats another problem. I like to describe it as someone wrote claims on slips of paper, tossed them in a bag, and wrote them down in the order they were pulled out. But it isnt written for a general reader, but a collage graduate in the medical field. AlbinoFerret  01:43, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * A collage degree would probably be just the one needed to make sense of it, indeed... Barnabypage (talk) 08:28, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * To an extent, in that you need to be a university graduate just to disentangle the tortured syntax and more than occasional homonym. It's definitely very complex writing that needs a lot of braincells to mentally rearrange into something that can be processed. But what it mostly is, is just bloody awful. Hopefully, as a sort of memorial to me, someone or several someones will continue streamlining it by ruthlessly weeding out repetition and duplication. The current "We don't know X1. We don't know Y2. We don't know Z3." can be boiled down to "We don't know X, Y and Z.123" without losing a single bit of information. Yes, it doesn't look as scary, but it's also not as shit.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:51, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

See, this is the problem. When you meet a disagreement you just trot out one of a handful of stock phrases like "it is about using the best available sources of which the World Health Organization is one." You're notorious for it. I've lost count of how many emails I've had along the lines of "OMG, I hate how he just says the same thing over and over." Never mind nominating the WHO as The Truth; what does the scientific consensus say about safety? What does the longitudinal data say about the effect of e-cigs on smoking prevalence? "The WHO says..." is an Argument from authority, meaning it's a logical fallacy, meaning it can be thrown out without a thought. Now, if the WHO's research is in accord with the bulk of the other high quality research it has great weight. If it's a review of all the biggest, highest quality studies it has great weight. But if you're just saying "We're using this because it's from the WHO, and nothing that contradicts it will be allowed!" you might as well change your name to Kent Hovind, because in scientific terms that's where you're standing.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:58, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

I agree with AlbinoFerret. Aside from User:FergusM1970 (now banned), it is far from clear whether action will actually be taken against any other editors, in the case of WP:ARBCOM their mailing lists are private so it is not presently possible to even confirm the evidence or find out basic details and impossible to tell whether any cases will actually be accepted by ARBCOM. I'm not sure that its yet appropriate to indefinitely suspend all prospect of further progress.Levelledout (talk) 17:39, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It does look like a pretty transparent filibuster attempt. I'm banned for life and nobody else has even been accused of paid editing, so where are the grounds for this delay?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:52, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Suggested rewrite of "Usage" section
The Usage section is currently, like most of the article, abysmal. I propose we replace it with this:


 * "Electronic cigarettes are used to inhale produce a flavoured aerosol which usually contains nicotine; this is then inhaled by the user through a mouthpiece. The most common reasons for using them are to quit smoking or cut down on cigarette consumption; many users believe they are effective for these purposes. They are also popular for use in places where smoking is not permitted. Annual sales in the USA increased from 50,000 in 2008 to 3.5 million in 2012. The vast majority of users are current or former smokers, with only around 0.2% of regular users being never-smokers. Larger numbers of never-smokers have tried them once or twice, especially among younger people. The majority of vapers are dual users of both e-cigarettes and tobacco. Many users believe they are effective for giving up or reducing smoking.


 * In the United States, as of 2011, one in five adults who smoke have tried electronic cigarettes and 3.3% are currently using them. Among grade 6 to 12 students those who have tried e-cigarettes at least once increased from 3.3% in 2011 to 6.8% in 2012; use in the past 30 days increased from 0.6% to 1.1%. Over the same period the percentage of grade 6 to 12 students who regularly smoke tobacco cigarettes fell from 7.5% to 6.7%.[24] By 2012 up to 10% of high school students had tried them at least once.[15] The number of never-smoker youths who tried them trebled between 2011 and 2013. The majority of teens who have tried e-cigarettes do not intend to smoke in the future.


 * In the UK in 2014, 18% of regular smokers identified themselves as using electronic cigarettes and 51% stated that they had used them in the past. Among those who had never smoked 1.1% said they had tried them and 0.2% are current users.[27] In 2014 10% of under-18s have tried e-cigarettes at least once, including 1% of non-smokers' children. 1.8% of under-18s are regular users; 60% are smokers, most of the rest are ex-smokers and there is no evidence of current use in never-smokers.


 * A February 2014 French study estimated that 7.7 to 9.2 million individuals have experimented with using electronic cigarettes, with between 1.1 and 1.9 million using them daily. 67% of smokers used electronic cigarettes to reduce or quit smoking. 9% of those who had ever used electronic cigarettes had never smoked tobacco. Of the 1.2% that had recently stopped tobacco smoking at the time of the survey, 84% (or 1% of the population surveyed) credited electronic cigarettes for stopping tobacco use."

All of this can be backed up by the existing sources. I've removed all repetitive content and some stuff that's duplicated in the Addiction section. The image of the no-smoking sign is inappropriate and should be deleted.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:48, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, of course, that's what I and I imagine most people would want and expect to read who come to the Google #1 entry for "electronic cigarette," "e-cigarette," and "smokeless cigarettes" for good measure, but if it were this easy to implement - as it is on most other pages - we wouldn't be here, would we?! But it's good to have it here before our eyes!! Perhaps the whole article should be rewritten on a subpage... --Tsavage (talk) 21:29, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, we can get agreement and submit edit requests. It seems more people are recognizing just how bad the article currently is, so it should be easy enough to get agreement on clearing out the dross and repetition.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:31, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

I like the rewording (I don't think the wording in the statistical paragraphs can really be improved). I do however think the last sentence of the first paragraph reads oddly. Could the concept, if not the sentence be moved to between the first and second para's? SPACKlick (talk) 12:38, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * How does that look? Let's see if we can make some more progress before the next batch of brown stuff hits the windmill.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 12:51, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Reads great to me. Let's start whacking the relevant refs back in and see if there's any objection to that within 7 days, then formally request protected edit. For the sake of the rules, do you grant me permission to insert refs into your opening comment? SPACKlick (talk) 12:53, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Absolutely. I need to get some work done so I'll be less visible for a few hours, but go right ahead. This is a collaborative effort, after all!--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 13:11, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * All the required refs should be in the original version. I tried to avoid changing the actual meaning because that would just bog everything down in the usual shitstorm and nothing would ever get done. Never mind the POV issues for now; the article is completely broken at the level of basic readability. We need to fix that, then we can fine-tune.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 13:15, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose I like product articles to begin by saying why a product is used, then what a product materially is. This section currently is about social popularity, marketing penetration, and frequency of use. I support this content being renamed, moved to a different place in the article (probably under "society and culture"), then any of these changes made, but my support right now for this section would be for this "usage" or "uses" section to explain how this product is used. Explaining the concept as if to someone who has never seen the device is a good start.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)  15:27, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * This is why I believe construction should come before useage. Useage as it currently stands is who uses it and what are the patterns of use. It should go into society and culture. Construction (as currently named) is where the what is it and how does it work information should be and that should clearly come first.
 * If Fergus's above change was put in the society and culture section would you have a problem with the wording and or content? SPACKlick (talk) 15:31, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, how about this?


 * "An electronic cigarette is a hand-held battery-powered vapouriser designed for oral inhalation . It is a recreational device that lets users inhale a flavoured aerosol, which usually contains nicotine, as a substitute or replacement for smoking tobacco. This activity is known as "vaping". Most vapers use electronic cigarettes to replace some or all of their tobacco intake; another common motivation is for use by smokers in areas where smoking is prohibited. E-cigarettes replace smoking by providing a somewhat similar sensation, often with concurrent delivery of nicotine in a more satisfying manner than with nicotine replacement therapy. A final use which has developed fairly recently is cloud chasing, when users attempt to blow the largest and densest possible cloud of vapour."


 * I can't think of an awful lot more really. It's just a replacement for smoking.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:48, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support both. The "usage" content should go in the society and culture section, and the "uses" content which Fergus just proposed should be at the top. I support these things in intent, but still would like source to back up the obvious like "these are intended for oral use".  Blue Rasberry   (talk)  16:07, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Um, that could be kind of tricky. I mean I've seen plenty that use "inhale", which obviously implies that, but I think "oral use" is one of those things authors just assume people know. I can add it, but I dunno if I can source it.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 16:49, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Excuse me, you did it correctly. Saying "inhale" is fine. I just meant to source it as you have proposed it. It is great.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)  17:02, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * "Oral use" is something díffernt than "Inhale". Example: Snus ist for oral use (put something in your mouth but dont chew or swollow or inhale it).--Merlin 1971 (talk) 18:31, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Excellent! Call it my parting gift; the Fun Police have got me at last. Happy editing, and if you ever see me anywhere else online say hi.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 18:05, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It looks like we have wording, now to source it. M., Z.; Siegel, #73 could be used for the inhalation claim.  AlbinoFerret  17:08, 22 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose Usage is about how common they are used. Not a descriptor of the practice. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 06:44, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that's what this discussion is about: To decide what belongs in Usage. If you have a reason why the way the devices are used doesn't belong in Usage I'm sure we'd all love to hear it, along with suggestions about where in the article it should go instead, but otherwise this is just WP:IDL.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 20:54, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * By the way Doc, I fixed your user page. The UBC site has a list of Clinical Assistant Professors. You're not on it.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:00, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm sure that was just a good faith mistake. It must be easy to write "I am a clinical assistant professor" when the faculty list says you're not. After all you've managed it twice now.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:32, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Edit to clear up the vapour/mist/aerosol confusion
I was going to post this in the present RFC on vapor/mist/aerosol but I think this is a slightly different issue to what words we should use.

I would like to say that I think we should represent the actual scientific facts, this will help to clear up the distinctions between the words and the obvious confusion to the general reader. The following is rough draft of the proposal:
 * The constitute parts of a first-generation electronic cigarette are a battery, a microchip, a cartridge that holds e-liquid and a "vaporization chamber". The e-liquid is generally composed of propylene glycol, vegetable glycerine, nicotine and flavourings. When the user inhales a mechanical sensor on the device is activated causing the microchip of the device's heater to increase the temperature in the "vaporization chamber". The e-liquid is vaporized as a result of the temperature change. A vacuum created by suction then causes the vapor to condense into a visible mist (a type of aerosol) which is inhaled by the user. Both vapour and mist are therefore used to refer to e-cigarette aerosol, although mist or aerosol are the technically correct terms for the end product which is inhaled by the user. The preceding process is the same as that which occurs in a fog machine. The process differs from the production of tobacco smoke (another type of aerosol) in that it does not involve combustion.
 * Mostly sourced from Bertholon, Electronic Cigarettes: A Short Review
 * Grana also concurs that the technically correct term is mist

Levelledout (talk) 18:21, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, that addresses exactly my point above in Removal of Mist: mist can't be redacted by RfC when it is a significant part of the story. --Tsavage (talk) 18:53, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The only problem I see with it is first generation e-cigs dont normally have microchips. There may be one I dont know of, but its not the norm. They have airflow sensors to turn on the power to the coil in the atomizer. Microchips are in second and third generation devices. I still dont like the Mist usage, it is a condensed vapor or aerosol at some point coming off the coil. But a mist is an atmospheric suspension of water like a fog, it is normally used to describe water. Mist is not technically correct imho. Grana uses all three terms. AlbinoFerret  19:56, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure I understand. Are you proposing replacing the text that talks about first gen by this text?TheNorlo (talk) 20:15, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think its for the lede or usage sections. If this is a proposal to replace a generation section I am opposed to it. AlbinoFerret  20:31, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I would be oppose to use this in the lede. Why should we focus on one single type of ecig in the lead? And the only cigalike that I am aware of that uses a microchip is the vuse for power regulation and making sure that the ecig cannot be used (refilled) after x amount of puffs. TheNorlo (talk) 20:53, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the subject of using "mist" should be knocked on the head and buried beside Doc's Return Of The RfC. The RfC on mist was quite clear; "aerosol" and "vapour" are fine and "mist" should only be used with consensus. Which, right now, doesn't exist.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:54, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I didn't participate in the RfC. I am looking at the article now, and I see that "mist," which merits explanation, is actually (awkwardly) explained - "aerosol (mist)" in the lead - but in a locked article that hardly moves at all, you want to SUBTRACT information because you're miffed that someone came along and changed all the vapours and aerosols to mists. That's ridiculous. Removing an explanation of mist, is not the same as changing a synonym. --Tsavage (talk) 23:16, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The RfC did not find that and getting consensus is exactly what I am trying to do.Levelledout (talk) 23:22, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I invite you to read the Closers note" in the Removal of Mist section above. AlbinoFerret  23:48, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry for not being clear, I wasn't intending to use this to replace anything else, I was intending it to be new text. I wasn't intending to use it in the lead either, it's too detailed for that, I thought it could either be included in the new Uses section or blended into one of the other sections, possibly a new sub-section in construction. I'm not saying I necessarily think that mist is a great term but the fact is that it is in the article so we need to distinguish between what is meant by vapour, mist and aerosol and explain why all three terms are used interchangeably. And telling the reader how an e-cig produces vapour is also an important concept. I take your points that it is focuses on first generation and the thing about micro-chips. With regards, to first generation that can be removed and we can make the differences clear. With regards to microchips, if somebody can find a WP:V source that states first generation does not use microchips I'd be more than happy to have that included. But working from the sources we have at the moment, how about something like this:
 * The constitute parts of {text changed} an electronic cigarette are generally a battery, a microchip, a cartridge that holds e-liquid and a "vaporization chamber". The e-liquid is generally composed of propylene glycol, vegetable glycerine, nicotine and flavourings. When the user inhales a mechanical sensor on the device is activated causing the microchip of the device's heater to increase the temperature in the "vaporization chamber". Alternatively on some devices a button is pressed in order to activate the heater.[2] The e-liquid is vaporized as a result of the temperature change. A vacuum created by suction then causes the vapor to condense into a visible mist (a type of aerosol) which is inhaled by the user. Both vapour and mist are therefore used to refer to e-cigarette aerosol, although mist or aerosol are the technically correct terms for the end product which is inhaled by the user. The preceding process is the same as that which occurs in a fog machine. The process differs from the production of tobacco smoke (another type of aerosol) in that it does not involve combustion.


 * [1] Mostly sourced from Bertholon, Electronic Cigarettes: A Short Review
 * Grana also concurs that the technically correct term is mist
 * [2] http://www.ncsct.co.uk/usr/pub/e-cigarette_briefing.pdf
 * Levelledout (talk) 23:22, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Proving a negative? I wont waste time with that. But I will suggest that you not use the one source that mentions a chip. Perhaps "Farsalinos KE, Spyrou A, Tsimopoulou K, Stefopoulos C, Romagna G, Voudris V (2014). "Nicotine absorption from electronic cigarette use: Comparison between first and new-generation devices"" or "Hayden McRobbie, National Centre for Smoking Cessation and Training, 2014. Electronic cigarettes" which are in the article would be better than using one that does not describe the usual first generation device and calls what comes out of an e-cig "smoke".  AlbinoFerret  23:42, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * There is another source that mentions a chip; Glantz claimed e-cigs had chips in them to make them more addictive. I'll try to find it. It seems like a good RS for claiming that an eGo delivers more nicotine than a mech mod and RBA.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 23:48, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The vacuum part is completely confused, it is airflow that generates the vapor, not a vacuum. Vacuum is not needed to make vapor - if you blow air over a heating coil, then you generate vapor. --Kim D. Petersen 02:51, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

So... Where is this info going again, in a new section called uses? Where will section be, in usage? Isint it a bit redundant? We have a short description of the device in the lead and then another one in construction ... Do we really need a third one? And as a side note, I think that this mist vapor aerosol discussion is getting old and a bit trivial. We are not talking about obscure words here, let's not assume that the readers are all mentally incompetent people. Vapor aerosol mist, whatever. TheNorlo (talk) 23:59, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * We do not have a detailed description of how e-cigarettes produce vapor, only the odd sentence here and there conveying basic information. I'm not sure why I'm getting such bad press on this, it's a fairly neutral edit on how electronic cigarettes produce vapor and clearing up some points about vapor/mist/aerosol on a scientific basis. The point about the microchip would seem a minute detail to me that could be fixed at a later date. Also remember that we merely report what the sources are saying, not add own WP:OR corrections. If nobody thinks this is a useful addition I'll have to accept that, alternatively feel free to modify it with sourced improvements.Levelledout (talk) 00:06, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I see where you are getting at, its fine. TheNorlo (talk) 00:09, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Perhaps the wording of some first generation e-cigs have a microchip. The vuse does, but its the only one. Just because something can be sourced, if we know its wrong, we should not repeat error. Im not sure you remember but Bertholon is the article that started all the "mist" usage. I think the other source you use describes the majority of first generation devices, Hayden McRobbie, and it doesnt report a microchip. AlbinoFerret  00:15, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thinking about it, other wording could be as simple as "can have a microchip" The addition could be useful in a Usage section, Im not opposed to the idea, but I am suggesting tweaking it a bit. AlbinoFerret  12:04, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

Generational Comparison
...is bullshit. They are different form factors, or different genres at best.

What if you shrink down a Generation II device (eGo-C) into a cigalike size of Generation I? You get a Generation III eRoll. What about Big Tobacco cigalikes, which are more like clearomizers with padding instead of a tank? What about the King Kong mod, which was a huge Generation II eGo with an 18650 battery?

A Ford F-150 is not a Generation II Dodge Dart. --AfricaLiquidMan (talk) 13:04, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sinnce you are new to wikipedia, your comments here being the first after your account was created, you might want to familiarise yourself with the Five Pillars of Wikipedia. Editors are not here to inject what they feel is the way content is described, but how it is described in reliable sources WP:RS. The device, Electronic cigarette is described in reliable sources as having generations. The Generations section is sourced to reliable sources that say this.
 * Describing a device as having generations is common on Wikipedia. The Ford F-Series is a perfect example of this. We do not compare different things to each other unless they are compared in reliable sources. Each generation having different technologies and features. Feel free to find a reliable source that says they are all the same. But that would not be reason to remove what other reliable sources have said, it would only be a controversy that would make including both points possible. We edit by consensus, or agreement of all the editors on an article, so each person has a say, and then the group comes together to make a decision. These are just the start of the intricacies of how articles are created. Anyone can help and there are good resources to ask questions on each of these thing I have pointed out.  AlbinoFerret  15:36, 24 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Since Gen-III is defined by variable voltage/wattage - then an eRoll can never be a Gen-III device. It is not the formfactor that defines the generation. Here is a simple description: Gen-I: fixed atomizer+fixed battery, Gen-II: exchangeable atomizer, tank systems, standardized connector, Gen-III: Gen-II with variable voltage/wattage. --Kim D. Petersen 20:35, 25 December 2014 (UTC)


 * @AfricanLiquidMan, you will find that it is very difficult to describe vaping using reliable sources, as it is a rather new product. While I don't think that this particular case is one of them, you will find that there are quite a few wrong claims by reliable sources because of the novelty of the product, we have to live with this here as it is how article are constructed. As Dr. Farsalinos said in the PBusardo interview, the scientists themselves are not well educated on this topic yet. TheNorlo (talk) 21:49, 25 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposed removal of POV text
Currently the article describes e-cigarettes, in two places (the first paragraph of Usage and the image beside that section, as being used to "circumvent" smoke-free laws. The OED gives the following definitions for "circumvent":


 * Find a way around (an obstacle):


 * ‘if you come to an obstruction in a road you can seek to circumvent it’


 * Overcome (a problem or difficulty) in a clever and surreptitious way:


 * ‘it was always possible to circumvent the regulations’


 * archaic Deceive; outwit:


 * ‘he’s circumvented her with some of his stories’

In my opinion this is slanted language, implying that e-cig users are somehow violating either the letter or spirit of smoke-free laws. In fact by not smoking e-cig users are complying with smoke-free laws. I'd suggest that either "circumvent" is changed to "comply with" or that these statements are removed.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * NOTE: This appears to be a bad sourcing issue not a wording issue, as the cited source is misrepresented in the article: the "circumvent" findings refer to e-cig advertising, not user response (they're from a study "To describe the main advertising claims made on branded e-cigarette retail websites). Just check the cited source. --Tsavage (talk) 23:45, 21 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support (obviously) - Clear POV-pushing.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 01:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support - It's pretty a pretty blatant breach of WP:IMPARTIAL. However if "comply with" also proves to be controversial, I would recommend that it is simply replaced with something like "use in areas where smoking is prohibited".Levelledout (talk) 02:24, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose What word does the reference use? It uses circumvent. "and as a way to circumvent smoke-free laws" Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 06:13, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * One source, Grana, uses the word "circumvent", another source puts it in a far more impartial way: "Most users use them to either replace cigarettes in places where smoking is prohibited or discouraged".Levelledout (talk) 14:12, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose The strong source supports the wording. I also think it is unwise to replace the sourced text with OR. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 06:33, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Quack, do you actually know what OR means?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 07:33, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * What you proposed to replace it with is OR. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 07:37, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * No it isn't. If your response to a no-smoking law is to not smoke you are not circumventing the law. You are complying with it. That is not OR. It is blindingly obvious to anyone with a basic grasp of the English language.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 07:49, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * We are not discussing not smoking. The source does not say "comply with" the laws by using e-cigs. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 07:53, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The law says I can't smoke. I am not smoking. Am I complying with the law?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 07:56, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Your personal opinion is not RS. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 08:03, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's not my personal opinion, Quack. OK, let's try another example. The law says don't murder people. I haven't murdered anyone. Have I broken that law, circumvented it or complied with it? The issue here is that "circumvent", whether sourced or not, is slanted language. It is POV. It is inherently loaded with negative connotations. If a law says "don't smoke" and you are not smoking, you are not circumventing the law. You are complying with it.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 08:08, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

In fact here's a more exact analogy. There is a law against drinking and driving. If someone goes to the pub, drinks nine pints of beer then gets a taxi home, do we say he is circumventing the drink-driving law? No, we do not. We say he is complying with the law by not drinking and driving. The same goes for someone who vapes in a no-smoking area. He is not circumventing the law; he is complying with the law by not smoking. Is this clear enough?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 09:51, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I have a question for you Quack; do you think that vaping and smoking are the same thing? TheNorlo (talk) 10:03, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * My personal opinion is irrelevant. Do you think we should follow the sources or delete text if editors think the source is wrong. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 10:26, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose Agree with Doc James. "Comply" is simply inaccurate. The policy does not require vaping, it requires not smoking. Cloudjpk (talk) 10:09, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * So if you're not smoking you're complying with the law?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 10:14, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Answer my question please. The law/policy requires not smoking. So if you are not smoking you are complying with it, correct?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 10:20, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * So, another analogy. The drink-driving law does not require drinking Coke; it requires not drinking alcohol. If someone drives to the pub, drinks only Coke then drives home is he circumventing the drink-driving law or complying with it?--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 10:32, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Do you think vaping produces a form of smoke called aerosol? The source says "other common reasons for using the products are to circumvent smoke-free laws..." QuackGuru  ( talk ) 10:26, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I Doubt It's Objectively True.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 10:41, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * No I do not think that "vaping produces a form of smoke called aerosol" and it is disruptive to assert something as truth without understanding the basic scientific principles involved. For your information smoke is a product of combustion and consists of solid particles. "Mist" (e-cig aerosol) is an entirely different type of aerosol that is the product of condensation and consists of liquid particles. Bottom line: Smoke and mist (from e-cigs) are completely separate types of aerosol. Therefore mist is not a form a smoke. There are plenty of places where you can confirm this information, such as here. Levelledout (talk) 17:01, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I took Quack to AN/I on the grounds that he is not WP:COMPETENT to edit. This is a perfect example of what I mean.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:15, 20 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support the idea but would prefer a different wording. Circumvent may be in the source, but it is unambiguously inaccurate and implies wrongdoing. Comply isn't great wording either, and not entirely accurate. Maybe something neutral that is still supported by the source, like other common explanations for the use of these products are to use nicotine in places that have smoke-free laws.... This is a close paraphrase from the source itself, section called Prevalence, "the most common reasons given for trying e-cigarettes are for use in places where smoking is restricted, to cut down on smoking, and for help with quitting smoking" The Wordsmith Talk to me 20:09, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'd be happy with that; it's neutral and accurate.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:12, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I would agree with that as well. AlbinoFerret  22:27, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

... let's try to avoid having yet another instance of having the same topic discussed in more than one place at a time. 15:04, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support - Source does not support article claims. moved my detailed finding to the above NPOV noticeboard discussion. --Tsavage (talk) 21:54, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support Removal Per 's findings on the NPOV noticeboard discussion that the source does not support claim this should be removed. AlbinoFerret  04:53, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

As previously explained, the text is well sourced. See "Although some cite a desire to quit smoking by using the e-cigarette, other common reasons for using the products are to circumvent smoke-free laws and to cut down on conventional cigarettes, which may reinforce dual use patterns and delay or deter quitting." How many times must I explain this? There is also more details in the source about this. QuackGuru ( talk ) 05:00, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * No its not "Well sourced" The source used says nothing of the kind in the body, and then twists it around to users in the end. It make it unreliable. Its a pure twisting of who said what. Anyone who can read and comprehend can tell its not in the source originally. The users never said these things. Since its unreliable it needs to be removed. I am going to do a search for who placed it in the article and twisted it into a POV edit. AlbinoFerret  05:07, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I provided a quote from the source showing it is sourced and not ambiguously worded, yet you claim it is "unreliable". QuackGuru  ( talk ) 06:37, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Find it in the body of the source, not the end that is opinion. You wont be able to. Thats because in the body it is not the users speaking, but advertisers. This is an error in the source. Proving it unreliable. AlbinoFerret  08:14, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * You claim its not "Well sourced" but the source is a review. There was no error in the source. After I provided verification you are still questioning the experts who wrote the review. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 03:41, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Then point out in the body of the review where it reviews anything to come to those opinions. AlbinoFerret

Notification of Discussion
There is currently a discussion at the NPOV noticeboard that relates to the discussion in this section: Link

Levelledout (talk) 15:21, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

New review by AHA
The American Heart Association has just released a new review on the efficacy of e-cigs for smoking cessation. They find that "available literature suggests that the use of e-cigarettes may be an effective alternate smoking cessation method." I think this merits inclusion in the article.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:09, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * And a new Cochrane review finds that (outdated and inefficient) e-cigs are twice as effective as patches, and that dual use does not reduce likelihood of quitting. About time this article started reflecting the actual evidence and not just "concerns".--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:43, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

I propose that the following text is removed from the lede:

"The data is inconclusive on using e-cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid.[5] Their role in tobacco harm reduction as a substitute for tobacco products is unclear."
 * Support - With two reviews confirming efficacy this text is no longer accurate.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:56, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support - Agree, although we should mention that research is still limited as mentioned by those 2 studies and should be continued.TheNorlo (talk) 03:20, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Reject The data is still inclusive and unclear according to the weight of the sources. The AMA says "In conclusion, available literature suggests...". That is not conclusive when the evidence "suggests". The Cochrane review said "However, the small number of trials, low event rates and wide confidence intervals around the estimates mean that our confidence in the result is rated 'low' by GRADE standards." QuackGuru  ( talk ) 04:12, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * But there's also a review in Circulation, which you and your friends have spent months telling us is the best journal in the field. Make your mind up: is Circulation an RS or not? Because you can't have it both ways.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 13:22, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Hold on a minute, a supreme amount of Grana citations have been added because at the time it was the latest available information and was published in a very well respected cardiovascular journal. Yet when that exact same cardiovascular journal and another review from Cochrane (an official partner of the WHO) comes out with newer evidence, suggesting that e-cigarettes are in fact effective as a smoking cessation of tool, those claims are apparently inadequate and should be rejected outright. Seems very odd to the say the least.Levelledout (talk) 16:40, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It seems Quack thinks a Circulation article saying "Stan Glantz has concerns" outweights one saying "the evidence suggests...". I disagree, and I'm pretty sure WP:MEDRS does too. Unless Quack can prove that Cochrane and the AMA aren't reliable sources I suggest we disregard this objection.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 17:30, 17 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support - We should take the AHA and Cochrane reviews into account -A1candidate (talk) 09:31, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support We need more high quality sources like this. AlbinoFerret  11:44, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Cautious support per TheNorlo. We certainly shouldn't say that the data is conclusively positive on cessation, but in light of the latest two studies it may be time to give less emphasis to its inconclusivity, and remove the sentence from the lede. We could if necessary say something that neither affirms nor questions efficacy, like The use of e-cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid continues to be studied. Barnabypage (talk) 11:54, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I have no problem with that phrasing.TheNorlo (talk) 12:16, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think we should at least say "Evidence suggests e-cigs are effective as a smoking cessation tool, although the small scale of existing trials means further study is needed."--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 13:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't have enormously strong feelings about it but I think that might be a bit too detailed for the lede - how about Evidence suggests e-cigs may be effective as a smoking cessation tool? Barnabypage (talk) 13:59, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yep, I'd be happy with that.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:01, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Let's play the devils advocate here, The Quack is coming and will probably quack every thing up. How about Tentative evidence suggests e-cigs may be effective as a smoking cessation tool although further research is warranted?TheNorlo (talk) 14:23, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't see why we should be all that swayed by what Quack wants. He's just one editor with a bad reputation, and if he doesn't like the consensus that's just the way it goes. So far everyone except him seems to want the latest reviews to be accurately represented.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 14:34, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * We should not automatically follow any editor. But when a review has language that limits conclusions it should be included in some form. Perhaps "E-cigarettes have been shown to be effective as a smoking cessation aid, but more study is needed." We need to come up with some specific wording. AlbinoFerret  15:37, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'd be happy with either Barnabypage's wording or yours. What I wouldn't be happy with is it being excluded from the article when speculation is allowed.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 16:02, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Levelledout (talk) 16:43, 17 December 2014 (UTC) Levelledout (talk) 17:56, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support - AHA and Cochrane are high quality sources. The article should take the reviews into account.--Merlin 1971 (talk) 12:45, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support with some reservations - Yes I think the wording as it currently stands should be removed in accordance with the latest available evidence. However I think it needs to be replaced with something such as:
 * "The latest evidence suggests that e-cigarettes are effective for smoking cessation. Further evidence is required in order to clarify their efficacy relative to traditional Nicotine Replacement Therapies."
 * That would do nicely, although the evidence is pretty unequivocal that they're much better than NRT.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 16:52, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * If its going into the lede it should be simple language and very easy to read. AlbinoFerret  17:38, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I write in a certain style and did try to make it as clear and simple as possible. But if you can simplify it further, by all means feel free to do so, I have no issue with that.
 * How about "The latest evidence suggests that e-cigarettes can help people quit smoking. More data is needed to compare how effective they are compared to traditional Nicotine Replacement Therapies" ? AlbinoFerret  18:06, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah that reads fine and retains all the content of the original, I support it's inclusionLevelledout (talk) 18:13, 17 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Comment The Cochrane review is here and concludes "There is evidence from two trials that ECs help smokers to stop smoking long-term compared with placebo ECs. However, the small number of trials, low event rates and wide confidence intervals around the estimates mean that our confidence in the result is rated 'low' by GRADE standards. The lack of difference between the effect of ECs compared with nicotine patches found in one trial is uncertain for similar reasons. ECs appear to help smokers unable to stop smoking altogether to reduce their cigarette consumption when compared with placebo ECs and nicotine patches, but the above limitations also affect certainty in this finding. In addition, lack of biochemical assessment of the actual reduction in smoke intake further limits this evidence. No evidence emerged that short-term EC use is associated with health risk."
 * So yes there is low quality evidence that electronic cigarettes help with cessation. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:33, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Exactly. So the statements about there being no evidence need to be removed.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 23:36, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for making our point for us Doc James, I guess we have consensus then.TheNorlo (talk) 23:46, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Oppose''' See below Formerly 98 (talk) 01:23, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support and Comment I see no reason for why an article on what is an electronic cigarette includes information regarding smoking cessation. That is a side topic. All items in the lede that are in second (third and most of the fourth) paragraph are a sub-topic and ongoing debate, or controversy, that has caused the main article to be labeled as "The neutrality of this article is disputed." Surely other pages that speak to information on vaping (benefits and risks) can contain that type of content. To include it here is visibly leading to a battle where NPOV is constantly in question because current science and medical information is lacking long term data. So, as an editor, I support removal of this content from the lede with larger concern of the entire article on electronic cigarettes. I have since proposed on this talk page a significant split of the main article's content to distinguish, for readers, between information on what an electronic cigarette is, and information on vaping (benefits and risks). Gw40nw (talk) 05:34, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

Specific changes
The specific changes proposed are this wording be removed
 * "The data is inconclusive on using e-cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid.[5] Their role in tobacco harm reduction as a substitute for tobacco products is unclear."

The following language replace it.
 * "The latest evidence suggests that e-cigarettes can help people quit smoking. More data is needed to compare how effective they are compared to traditional Nicotine Replacement Therapies" AlbinoFerret  19:01, 17 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support This should be satisfying to any reasonable person and I think it accurately describe the findings of these 2 studies.TheNorlo (talk) 21:31, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support I can't see anything to argue with.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 22:05, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support for reasons already discussed
 * Levelledout (talk) 22:26, 17 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support The statement is backed up by the citation. AlbinoFerret  23:07, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose With what reference to support? This does not appear to be published yet but is in embargo.  Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:29, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * With the Cochrane paper to support it. That's published. I'm trying to AGF here but it looks like you're just reflexively opposing any removal of Glantz/Grana material from the article even if it's been superseded by real science. Please look at the current evidence and work from that.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 23:33, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Sure so Cochrane paper says "the overall quality of the evidence for our outcomes was rated ‘low’ or ‘very low’"  Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:46, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Which is why the phrasing The latest evidence suggests that e-cigarettes can help people quit smoking, More data is needed to compare how effective they are... has been employed. It shows that the evidence is tentative.... but there.TheNorlo (talk) 23:48, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Oppose See below. Formerly 98 (talk) 01:23, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Oppose per below, it's annoying that we have the same topic repeated in what appears to be four different sections now. 05:37, 18 December 2014 (UTC) Support This is something of central significance and should be in the lede.80.179.90.190 (talk) 22:32, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support since that is what the reviews say, and it is adequately framed with caveats. --Kim D. Petersen 17:38, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support removal of the sentence from the lead. The lead is a summary and have a long, cherry picked quote that describes the proverbial glass as half empty instead of half full is inappropriate in the lead and creates POV. The new suggested text is an improvement.-- — Keithbob • Talk  • 17:28, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose This is not a good summary of the body. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 22:34, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

Specific changes 2
How about change "The data is inconclusive on using e-cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid" to "There is low quality evidence that e-cigarettes help with stopping smoking" Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:53, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose Unnecessarily slanting the wording to deprecate the state of the science.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 00:00, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose I might be convinced if "low quality evidence" was replaced by "limited evidence". Something like "There is limited evidence that e-cigarettes can help people quit smoking. More data is needed to compare how effective they are compared to traditional Nicotine Replacement Therapies" But as soon as the AHA statement is out of embargo it will have to be changed. AlbinoFerret  00:02, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Earlier proposal What about this earlier proposal that imo encopasses pretty much what the research says: "Although further research is warranted, tentative evidence suggests e-cigs may be effective as a smoking cessation tool " (unsigned comment by TheNorlo diff)
 * I could live with that. AlbinoFerret  00:37, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I could support "tentative" as suggested by AF, but would like to see the size of the effect mentioned as well. It is quite small and we should not mislead readers by suggesting otherwise.  See below. Formerly 98 (talk) 01:23, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the statement by TheNorlo is good enough, and may be a good middle ground. It may not be perfect, but I think we can all live with it. AlbinoFerret  01:47, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I could go with tentative or limited aswell. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 18:35, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support it's an accurate representation of the source's characterization of the state of the evidence.  05:37, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support Agree with Zad68 Cloudjpk (talk) 10:34, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose the language is too complicated, and plays too much to POV. The conclusions of the Cochrane report does not focus on low quality, and thus we shouldn't. The previous writeup is more accurate with regards to the source material. --Kim D. Petersen 17:43, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

A little less black and white
I think one needs to look at the Cochrane group's own summary of the findings here and be careful not to give our readers the impression that this is the golden tool that will solve all their addiction problems. This would not be fair to them.
 * "About 9% of smokers who used electronic cigarettes were able to stop smoking at up to one year. This compared with around 4% of smokers who used the nicotine-free electronic cigarettes"
 * "When the researchers looked at the data on reducing cigarettes in people who had not quit, they found that 36% of electronic cigarette users halved the number of conventional cigarettes. This compared with 28% of users who were given the placebos."
 * "Only one of the trials looked at the effects of electronic cigarettes compared with patches and this suggests similar efficacy of the two treatments"

So the bottom line looks a little like this: '''For every 20 people who smoke nicotine-containing electronic cigarettes instead of ones that don't contain nicotine, 1 will succeed in stopping smoking. For every 17 people that take up electronic cigarettes, one will halve their consumption of regular cigarettes. In terms of quitting, they are about as effective as a nicotine patch you can buy at Walgreens for about $2.50 each. And as Doc James has pointed out, the evidence quality for all of the above is low to very low'''

For the Circulation meta analysis we have, "Use of such e-cigarettes was positively associated with smoking cessation with a pooled Effect Size of 0.20" Think about what an effect size of 0.2 means. It's two tenths of a standard deviation. Critics of antidepressants ridicule them as examples of worthless, overhyped drugs because they only provide a effect size of 0.3. This is smaller than that.

I would suggest that we stay true to the source and simply state that "There is low quality evidence that electronic cigarettes may be helpful in smoking cessation and reduction, but the size of the effect is small and similar to that of nicotine patches". I don't think you can say much more than that based on these studies. Certainly broad statements that they are helpful is going to be very misleading relative to what our sources say.

We owe it to our readers to accurately convey what the sources say, and not to jump on the opportunity to make statements. Formerly 98 (talk) 01:23, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the slow down approach, while speculation filled the article wasnt listened to. I think your going to have a hard time slowing it down now that it has started to swing the other way. AlbinoFerret  01:36, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The article should reflect the conclusions in the literature, rather than the analysis of Wikipedia editors. We ought not to reflect on what an effect size of 0.2 means or whether it appropriate to equate 9% to 1 in 20. Either the literature does that for us or it doesn't. Formerip (talk) 01:42, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Anyways. I have no doubt that the claim that e-cigs are the best smoking cessation device, by a long-shot, will be substantiated by reliable sources in the next year or two, if not earlier, when they stop focusing on crappy product and actually study what vapers use. In the mean time, we have to remove the claim that there is no evidence that ecig have NRT properties as there are some. Even if the evidence is very low. "Very low" and "no" evidence are 2 different things. You guys can do what you want for now, it's just a matter of time until the unavoidable obvious fact that ecigs are better than NRT's will be well sourced.TheNorlo (talk) 01:41, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think your correct, unless source quantifies what the numbers mean, editors adding meaning to them is Original Research. AlbinoFerret  01:52, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * I think the bottom line is that we have an obligation to tell our readers what reliable sources say. Its not about giving comeuppance to those who you feel have not listened to you or making a statement. Its not about "winning". It's about giving people information, that like it or not, they will use to make healthcare decisions.  And its pretty clear that what these sources say is that there is tentative evidence that they are helpful, but only to a very modest extent.  I hope the three of you will think about that and not try to push in some language that overpromises by mentioning the former and leaving out the latter.  It will effect a lot of people. Some of you have personal experience with addiction, as do I.  If I were still smoking, I'd want the article to tell the full truth, and not get a message that was prompted by people's anger about not feeling heard in the past and needing a victory. Formerly 98 (talk) 01:54, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Right now, the bottom line is that we need to remove the statement that says that there is no evidence.... Which is false, period.TheNorlo (talk) 02:01, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm not 100% sure that is false, but I do lean toward something more along the line of "tentative evidence of a very modest benefit". There are a lot of sources out there, and just because one or two said there is a low level of evidence of a modest benefit, does not make the alternative point of view "false period".  The world is full of nuance. Formerly 98 (talk) 02:12, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Evidence exists that makes the statement false. It doesnt matter the percentages of proof a small amount of falsehood is still false. AlbinoFerret  02:39, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Specific wording 3
I suggest we remove this wording and all like it. ""The data is inconclusive on using e-cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid." AlbinoFerret  02:03, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I can see changing it to something using the word "tentative". But I don't see it as being something we want to push as established.  Formerly 98 (talk) 02:12, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This specific wording isnt about changing anything. But the wording be removed while specific wording to replace it is worked out. AlbinoFerret  02:29, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Where should we work out the new specific wording? In a new subsection?TheNorlo (talk) 07:06, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Support Removal I support removal while its replacement is worked out. AlbinoFerret  02:30, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support Removal Same here.TheNorlo (talk) 06:56, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Support removal We need to come up with wording that reflects the current state of the science.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 15:28, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose We have lot of disagreement among sources. Thus the summary is that we do not clearly know the answer. No one claims we do. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 06:02, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose When there is disagreement among sources one does not delete the text. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 06:07, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Comment As editors, with integrity, we ought to be following this statement up with a sentiment that reads along lines of: "Because of the inconclusive nature of data regarding eCig use, Wikipedia has created a whole other page to explore and vet this topic more thoroughly. Please see the talk page to find out just how much we exhaustively debated all the various nuances around usage. The rest of the article you see has to do with what is an electronic cigarette. But everything having to do with vaping, usage of electronic cigarettes in society/culture and the legal issues are found on these linked pages. Thank you. Wikipedia editors (who are trying to co-create NPOV articles)." Gw40nw (talk) 05:28, 26 December 2014 (UTC)

Working out Specific wording
--->'' Please don't support or oppose proposition here, just make a proposition and let's discuss them in another sub-section. <
 * Proposition A: Although much research is still needed to establish electronic cigarettes as a smoking cessation aid, tentative evidence suggests that they could be used in such a way. ref TheNorlo (talk) 07:39, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Its a little on the long side, and could be simplified a little. Perhaps "Tentative evidence has shown that e-cigarettes can help people quit smoking, but more data is needed." AlbinoFerret  11:49, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The only point I'd add is that the "more data is needed" bit is a detail that doesn't necessarily need to be in the lede. What the reader needs to know there is that the results are tentative, so that word should absolutely be in. Exactly why they are tentative and how that might be remedied is perhaps detail for further down. Barnabypage (talk) 13:42, 18 December 2014 (UTC)

Proposed rewrite of the lede.
As an effort in making the lede more readable, I'm attempting a rewrite. This is in no way a final version as no sources have been added to the text. I am trying to summarize the contradictory information that makes the reading of the present lede extremely laborious. I believe that this attempt at a rewrite is neutral and does not diminish the medical importance of this subject by redirecting the reader to the proper articles.

I am sincerely trying be as neutral as I can here, so please refrain from attacking me for being biased, I have already recognized my bias toward e-cigs but I am working toward collaboration. I would appreciate your input.

I have not rewritten the usage part of the lede yet but I think that we could summarize it better than what it is in the present state.

You can find the rewrite attempt here. TheNorlo (talk) 10:31, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Nitpicky comments.

Other than that a great improvement on readability. I approve. SPACKlick (talk) 10:34, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) If we are to keep "Aerosol(mist)" it should be "Aerosol (mist)"
 * 2) Liquid Solution is a redlink "Liquid Solution" may be better.
 * 3) i think the tense "has increased" is odd in the third para. Possibly just "increased" or with different sourcing "is increasing"


 * I should mention that I am not, in any ways, an English wordsmith as it is my second language, I am for better or worst a native French speaker, feel free to correct any syntax, grammatical or spelling mistakes. TheNorlo (talk) 10:37, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oppose. The proposal drastically shortens the lede. That is against lede length. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 10:45, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This is a discussion on an edit to work op a possible replacement and is not the final form, your jumping the gun Quack. AlbinoFerret  10:47, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * This is not a final version Quack... What are you opposing exactly? That we should not rewite the lede or that my attempt is a bad start? TheNorlo (talk) 10:49, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * What is this lede lenght policy anyways? Do you have a link? TheNorlo (talk) 10:52, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Also Quack, removing some of the unreadable text in no way goes against any policy or manual of style. WP:Leadlength suggests 3 or 4 paragraphs for an article this length. and says The appropriate length of the lead section depends on the total length of the article. As a general guideline—but not absolute rule—the lead should usually be no longer than four paragraphs. The length of the lead should conform to readers' expectations of a short, but useful and complete, summary of the topic. A lead that is too short leaves the reader unsatisfied; a lead that is too long is difficult to read and may cause the reader to lose interest halfway. (Emphasis Added)
 * This lede is too long and difficult to read, it needs a trim, everyone but you seems to agree. SPACKlick (talk) 10:53, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Additionally, this article is currently around 37,000 characters. Several of which are stubs of daughter articles. Once some of the repetition is trimmed it will likely be borderline 30,000 which is where 2or3 paragraphs meets 3or4 paragraphs. The lede should be 3, concisely written, easy to read, paragraphs summarising the article content. To me, that's exactly what TheNorlo has written. SPACKlick (talk) 11:02, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

It over shortens the current lead. There is nothing wrong with 4 paragraphs. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 11:44, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Doc, could you specify what removed information you think should be maintained that isn't by the current proposal? SPACKlick (talk) 11:45, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Please try to be specific and constructive in your comments in order to work this out. Simply saying that the lede is to short or that "there is nothing wrong with 4 paragraphs" adds very little to the conversation. user:TheNorlo

Oppose I don't see what the proposal is apart from wanting to shorten something that isn't especially long to begin with. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 13:00, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The proposal is about making the readability of the lede easier. TheNorlo (talk) 13:28, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Should we leave the lede the way it is?
I believe that the lede of this article as it stands right now is excruciatingly painful to read, it is filled with different review articles more or less contradicting each other and I don't think that citing specific medical reviews in the lead is helpful or interesting to the reader. I believe that we can summarize it in a more efficient way by redirecting the readers to specific articles that talks extensively about subjects like Safety of electronic cigarettes or Legal status of electronic cigarettes, which is what I am trying to accomplish here with the participation of interested editors. My goal is not necessarily to shorten the lede but to simplify it, the final version will probably be longer than this draft. I am sensing a lot of resistance to change from some editors and so I ask the question:


 * Should the lede stay the way it is right now or should we work together in making it more readable and accessible to the readers that are unfamiliar with the topic by summerazing it in the way that I've explained above? Of course, it's not my way or the highway here, if you have a better way of enhancing the readability of the lead, please share. TheNorlo (talk) 08:03, 26 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Oh god no. You're right; it's awful. It urgently needs rewritten, ideally by someone who can write.--FergusM1970Let's play Freckles 21:51, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes. I agree the lede is to needs to be rewritten.80.179.90.190 (talk) 22:24, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

*Support rewrite Of course, as explained above. TheNorlo (talk) 08:06, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Oppose rewrite to drastically shorten the lede. This is not going to work. QuackGuru  ( talk ) 10:21, 26 December 2014 (UTC)

Apology
I would like to apologize to the editors who I insulted here and at WP:ANI over the past three months. I see now that they were up against paid advocacy editors, with whom I unintentionally aligned myself because I wasn't aware of the depth of shilling on the topic. I know firsthand how stressful working against paid advocates can be, and I'm sorry I piled on. EllenCT (talk) 19:23, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
 * May I say, handsomely done EllenCT Cloudjpk (talk) 20:37, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Who has been a paid advocate here? And what is the depth of the shilling? And why should you be sorry to have an opinion, even if that opinion may align yourself with something that you dislike? I can't see anything that you have to apologize about. Merry christmas. --Kim D. Petersen 20:32, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I think she's talking about Ferguss because somebody asked him to right about e-cigs for them on their website I believe. I don't think that he was paid to write anything here, from what I gathered he was writing on this article on his own time... I might be wrong I didn't read the entire thing. But I agree that I don't see why you apologize. Your opinions are yours, regardless of who you agree with. I don't accept your apologies but Merry Christmas! TheNorlo (talk) 22:09, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm pretty sure I've never insulted you. EllenCT (talk) 04:10, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Your right, I didn't express myself properly. TheNorlo (talk) 04:41, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It is possible that it is Fergus that he/she is talking about, but there is no evidence there at all. He was paid to work on other stuff on Wikipedia, but not (according to the current data), anything here. And because one person is a lier, doesn't make everyone else liers. --Kim D. Petersen 23:07, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
 * You might want to review the ANI thread about him. Kim, of all the editors here, I think you've been the most honorable and accurate, and I'm sorry about the paid advocacy on both sides, because there is plenty of it, and it hurts the people who are trying to do a good job without any conflicts the most. I'm happy with the current fully protected state, glad that it's been protected for so long, and I don't intend to ever edit it again. I look forward to reading the literature reviews in a few years when they have had time to report on all the cessation and harm reduction primary studies recently published and presently in the works. EllenCT (talk) 04:10, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I've read the ANI thread, and i agree that he should be banned for what he did, but there is no evidence that he acted here as a payed editor or shill here. And i rather dislike that people (not you btw), who cast aspersions and accusations that aren't based upon evidence... we may speculate - but we should do so privately unless evidence is at hand :) I hope that no editors are doing paid advocacy - and i'm going to assume good faith towards people unless there is explicit proof of the opposite. That people have opinions, that align them with certain interests, doesn't make them wrong, advocates, shills or payed, no matter if they directly or indirectly align themselves with medical corps, tobacco corps, or any other corporation, government or NGO's. What matters is what is written in secondary sources, and how we adhere to these. I'm sad that this particular instance of one (or more) editors behaviour makes you give up, and not argue what you think/read. But in all eventualities - have a happy holiday and a merry christmas :)     --Kim D. Petersen 04:20, 26 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Its sad whenever an editor with opinions on a subject gives up and stops editing. The system works best when there are more people involved. I know all the endless conflict can lead to disinterest. I know that the paid editing is a problem, I dont like it, and if its done it has to be clearly noted and the parties working on the article notified. But I still would rather it not be done. But there is no such thing as a lost cause imho. Its just a matter of time before the studies you mention are reviewed. Please consider just taking a break and coming back. AlbinoFerret  13:27, 26 December 2014 (UTC)