Talk:Elena (Street Fighter)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 02:49, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Infobox

Lead
 * 1) Voice cast inconsistently mentioned; only Kaoru mentioned outside of infobox, but only in lead.
 * 2) Fixed
 * 3) Needs to mention her Kenyan origin at some point, ideally in both lead and body
 * 4) Fixed

Appearances
 * 1) I feel like the other media appearances could be summed up as "she appeared in other media" rather than listing examples.
 * 2) Fixed


 * 1) Is it valuable to go into detail about her role in the other appearances?
 * 2) I don't believe I can condense that down more

Promotion and reception

Images
 * 1) GamesRadar+ reception could be paraphrased more; also, it'd be helpful to explain why she was unlike Balrog, if possible.
 * 2) Some other reception could be paraphrased more.
 * 3) Fixed

References
 * 1) I'm still mixed about the Akuma shot.
 * 2) Really works well with the comments about her story being too simple, especially Den of Geek's?

External links
 * 1) Is MyFigureCollection reliable?
 * 2) It's cited heavily by other websites, and in magazines like AniMagazin. It's generally regarded as one of the go-to sites for cataloguing released figures now.
 * 3) Is Planet Xbox reliable?
 * 4) They were part of Complex Networks before they shut down and were folded into the main site.


 * 1) Are these required?
 * 2) Removed

I'm somewhat mixed about the second image, but not enough to say that it doesn't pass muster.