Talk:Elena Presser

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The article appears to have the information regarding the artist and her works. The information does seem relevant, although I do feel like you should give a brief description of the artist under her name, for example under the title, maybe talk about some inspiration or backstory about the meaning to her being an artist. The article does seem neutral, it does not have any biased information throughout what I have read. As I was reading the education section, I feel like it was under presented, for example, you can add what she majored or did she participate in art programs/movements? The links that were available did work and some of the references did not have links. I also noticed that the artist website is put twice, under references/bibliography, so make sure to only put it once. Make sure that the artist's original page is ONLY put under external links, do not put it under references or bibliography because your article will then be deleted by the "wiki trolls". The information is supported by reliable references, if you can find any other references that would be even better, the more the better. The sources are neutral. Maybe add the date when she graduated from university? Make sure to double check spelling and grammar.

Edited by Oneida Segura