Talk:Eleng Luluan

Comments from Group 1

 * 1) You can add Wikipedia Link. For example National Nei-Pu Senior Agricultural-Industrial Vocational High School(內埔農工).
 * 2) Moreover, we think they can provide more information related to Wang Wei-Chang since they have mentioned in the Early life section, and we are curious about his importance in this section.

PennyLin7 (talk) 01:56, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

G2's comments
We think overall is clear and good. But try to avoid adjectives in your article. Elainehsiehh (talk) 02:03, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments from G4
The description is quite clear but you can consider adding more references to support your content. Also, when mentioning specific artwork in the introduction and work section(Ngialibalibade – to the Lost Myth, Between Dreams, and Flower of Life), you can add immediate citations right after that. Liuliu0404 (talk) 02:13, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

G3's Comments and Suggestions
Lack hyperlinks for the locations. Khallouangel (talk) 02:21, 22 May 2024 (UTC)