Talk:Eleno Salazar Flores/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:21, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments All I have, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 14:36, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Could link kingpin to Crime boss.
 * Link MXN$.
 * "on 1964/1965" in.
 * "a low-profile" no need for hyphen.
 * ' leadership ranks and became one of the Gulf Cartel's leading a" repetitive use of leadership/leading.
 * "administrators.[5] He worked under " merge "administrators and worked under "
 * "on his turf " not particularly enecylopedic in tone.
 * " the faction's leader.[11] This faction served " ->" the leader of the faction which served"
 * "reporters reported " repetitive.
 * "these shootouts, there were reports of more shootouts" ditto.
 * "operated in his turf" see above.
 * I usually allow seven days for work to commence before failing a nomination. Just to let you know we're half way through that.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:25, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the heads-up. I've been with limited Internet access somewhere near the Chihuahua/Texan desert in quarantine. Books and long runs keep me alive. Anyways, I believe I've addressed the points above. Thank you for the thorough review and nice job with the others, too. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 19:24, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries. The most important thing is to keep safe!  I'll re-review in due course.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:51, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Can't fault it for GA, so promoting. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 07:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)