Talk:Elizabeth Akua Ohene

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 October 2018 and 15 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Historystudentumkc.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:37, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Taryn Peer Review
1. The article is well-organized and delivered. I believe the writer keep all the information in the right contents. One thing that impressed me was how the author was able to use multiple sources and make the information flow well. For each content that was given to the reader, the reader was able to follow along.

2. One change I would suggest for the author is providing a better introduction. I felt that the introduction was kind of short and I believe the author could improve on that area. By doing so, it will improve the overall wiki.

3. The most important thing the author could do is find more information on early life and education and politics. I feel that the author is leaving out key information for their reader.

4. I did not note anything that could be applicable to my own article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by JPMHPC (talk • contribs) 02:39, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback, Johnathan! I appreciate everything you wrote. I agree that I should add more to each section, if possible. I'm continuing to try to find more information about Ohene's life, but it's quite challenging because there is not much information about her, regardless of where I search. I definitely plan to try to add more about both her personal life and her work. Historystudentumkc (talk) 03:06, 29 November 2018 (UTC)