Talk:Elizabeth Francis

Writing Style
The writing of this article can use some work. It reads like a list of bullet points rather than a cohesive article. It would be beneficial to create some paragraphs and avoid calling her by her first name in every sentence.

EmilySarah99 (talk) 09:12, 30 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Agreed. I did some revisions of the edits by ForsythiaJo for better flow. EytanMelech (talk) 14:00, 30 December 2023 (UTC)