Talk:Elizabeth McMahon

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Great! Some spelling errors, but thats normal lol. I like the way you constructed her years playing and have all of her awards and achievements.

Peer Review by Julia
I really liked the information you had in each section. There was a good amount to read but it never felt repetitive. I liked the different sections you made for each paragraph, they were organized really well. The only thing that was a little off for me was how the formatting looks with each year under her college career. I liked how you lined up all her awards in chronological order and had them put in a list. That was easy to read and would be easy for users to navigate. The lead sentences for each paragraph were pretty good and didn't seem like it was misleading at all. The citing looked well done, but maybe try and also add links to other pages on Wikipedia when you mention them. Roacj (talk) 19:38, 27 November 2018 (UTC)