Talk:Elizabeth Peer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:23, 10 December 2017 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 22:23, 10 December 2017 (UTC)

References and image look good, though the lead does need to be expanded. Will do prose review tomorrow. Wizardman 02:20, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks; I've expanded the lead. Mackensen (talk) 03:24, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Here's the rest of what I found:
 * "as a sophomore. Peer also served as art editor for the Quarterly, the college's literary magazine, in her sophomore year. Also in her sophomore year " That many sophomore years in one close batch starts to feel a bit redundant. Not a huge issue but I'd tweak the wording to keep it fresh.
 * Reworded. Mackensen (talk) 22:07, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I would think there should be a page number for the last reference, but I don't remember if Questia has that easily accessible or not.
 * I was able to find the page numbers from another source. Mackensen (talk) 22:07, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

A very well-written article overall, only had those couple tiny things; article on hold. Wizardman 02:54, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I believe I've addressed everything; please let me know if you think there are additional issues. Mackensen (talk) 22:07, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman  00:27, 22 December 2017 (UTC)